nadalhoang
Aug 5, 2012
nadalhoang
Aug 5, 2012
Writing Feedback / Not enough time to study for students? [2]
Full time university students need a lot of time to study . However these students also need to be involved in other activities . To what extent do you agree and disagree .
Students always want to have a successful career . I do not agree when students only study that they do not enjoy other kind of activities .
Nowadays , students spend hours each day studying at home because of these reasons . First , academic qualification are required in many profession . For example , it is impossible to become a doctor , teacher without having the relevant degree . Secondly , the job market is increasingly competitive . There are hundred of application for a position in a company . Young people who not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete . This means that the most students put great effort for a long time .
However , students ought to learn to enjoy other kind of activities . They cant not sit only at home and learn . They can increase the risk of obesity , cancer . In addition , they live only in the world with books and computer and it lead to isolating people . People are willing get to involved in sports . In this way , they can reduce stress and improve our health . Moreover, they take part in other activities . They expand their knowledge in subjects and find interesting . The result of this is that they gain practice experience and learn real skills that it is very necessary for their future .
I think the main point is make sure they have enough time to study but students have to enjoy other activities and not sit at home learning to live .
Full time university students need a lot of time to study . However these students also need to be involved in other activities . To what extent do you agree and disagree .
Students always want to have a successful career . I do not agree when students only study that they do not enjoy other kind of activities .
Nowadays , students spend hours each day studying at home because of these reasons . First , academic qualification are required in many profession . For example , it is impossible to become a doctor , teacher without having the relevant degree . Secondly , the job market is increasingly competitive . There are hundred of application for a position in a company . Young people who not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete . This means that the most students put great effort for a long time .
However , students ought to learn to enjoy other kind of activities . They cant not sit only at home and learn . They can increase the risk of obesity , cancer . In addition , they live only in the world with books and computer and it lead to isolating people . People are willing get to involved in sports . In this way , they can reduce stress and improve our health . Moreover, they take part in other activities . They expand their knowledge in subjects and find interesting . The result of this is that they gain practice experience and learn real skills that it is very necessary for their future .
I think the main point is make sure they have enough time to study but students have to enjoy other activities and not sit at home learning to live .
nadalhoang
Aug 5, 2012
Undergraduate / 'good dramatic actions' - a significant experience personal essay [2]
high shool
recited
housemisstress
high shool
recited
housemisstress
nadalhoang
Aug 3, 2012
Writing Feedback / Technology and the communication between people [2]
Some people believe that technology has made our life more complex and a solution is that we should accept life without technology. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology has had an influence on relationships in business , education, and social life and there are both positive and negative effects . However , I oppose life without technology .
There developments can be extremely positive. Firstly , cooperation between people in different countries was much more difficult when communication was limited to written letter and telegrams . Nowadays , Mobile phone and internet allow business people to interact without ever meeting each other . Secondly , services like skype create new possibility relationships between students and teacher . For example , a student can video lessons with a teacher in different city or country . Finally , many people use social network like facebook , find people who share common interests and they interact through their computer rather than face to face .
On other hand , the negative effects of technology for people can be denied . Nowadays , people spend too much time on the computer and can damaging both eyes and physical posture . Moreover , a lot of electronic games tend to be intense and rather violent , and there are many appropriate websites that have influence on people 's act . In addition , many people tend to make friends online than their peers in real world . This can lead on isolating people and discouraging real interaction .
In conclusion ,technology has certainly revolutionized communication between people . We can learn the way to adjust ourselves because of live without technology .
Some people believe that technology has made our life more complex and a solution is that we should accept life without technology. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology has had an influence on relationships in business , education, and social life and there are both positive and negative effects . However , I oppose life without technology .
There developments can be extremely positive. Firstly , cooperation between people in different countries was much more difficult when communication was limited to written letter and telegrams . Nowadays , Mobile phone and internet allow business people to interact without ever meeting each other . Secondly , services like skype create new possibility relationships between students and teacher . For example , a student can video lessons with a teacher in different city or country . Finally , many people use social network like facebook , find people who share common interests and they interact through their computer rather than face to face .
On other hand , the negative effects of technology for people can be denied . Nowadays , people spend too much time on the computer and can damaging both eyes and physical posture . Moreover , a lot of electronic games tend to be intense and rather violent , and there are many appropriate websites that have influence on people 's act . In addition , many people tend to make friends online than their peers in real world . This can lead on isolating people and discouraging real interaction .
In conclusion ,technology has certainly revolutionized communication between people . We can learn the way to adjust ourselves because of live without technology .
nadalhoang
Aug 2, 2012
Undergraduate / 'working in the Movie industry' - Essay for the Art Institute. [2]
I started writing this essay but i don't know if it sounds right? I need some help with it if i can get more advice on it on how to write it i would appreciate it (:
My goal in life is able to work in the Movie industry,and working with other people who share my passion for Filming. In 3-4 years i want to have my bachelor's degree and be able to work doing what i love. I enjoy recording quite a lot and that's mainly what i aim for, a Cameraman/Video Editor. That's why i want to get the best education possible to make this happen. I wan to be able to learn and experience new things in which will help me accomplish my goal. I'm willing to put my all into this and do whatever i have to do to make this happen, And i know The Art Institute can put me on the right path and give me the tools and knowledge i need to achieve my career goals. I am ready to put all my effort and commit to this, commit to my future, this is what i love doing and ill work hard to achieve my goal.
I started writing this essay but i don't know if it sounds right? I need some help with it if i can get more advice on it on how to write it i would appreciate it (:
My goal in life is able to work in the Movie industry,and working with other people who share my passion for Filming. In 3-4 years i want to have my bachelor's degree and be able to work doing what i love. I enjoy recording quite a lot and that's mainly what i aim for, a Cameraman/Video Editor. That's why i want to get the best education possible to make this happen. I wan to be able to learn and experience new things in which will help me accomplish my goal. I'm willing to put my all into this and do whatever i have to do to make this happen, And i know The Art Institute can put me on the right path and give me the tools and knowledge i need to achieve my career goals. I am ready to put all my effort and commit to this, commit to my future, this is what i love doing and ill work hard to achieve my goal.
nadalhoang
Aug 2, 2012
Writing Feedback / Multinational companies and globalization - negative or positive? [2]
The spread of multinational companies and globalization have
positive effects for everyone. What is your opinion?
Multinational companies and globalization increasingly appear in many countries . It bring many good thing for everyone . In my opinion, I support the appearance of them throughout the world .
Multinational companies and globalization can be beneficial in many aspects . It can create new jobs for the people to improve the quality of live to local community . Unemployed young people can get a job and improve their living . Before , the economies of many countries depend on local business people were less chance of employment , but after the introduction of multinational companies their economy boost up and become those of top economy in the world .
Another benefits of open trade and market expansion of multinational companies create competition among local and foreign brand and develop the market . In addition that people would acquire more benefits in term of quality product.
Although native businessman oppose the open trade and of multinational companies in different countries because of destroy values culture and tradition , and put local industries in jeopardy .
However , it is just plausible justification simple local companies do not competition with multinational companies . Therefore , I completely support globalization .
Multinational companies and globalization are beneficial to every country . It has proven that world organization need to promote free trade and equal distribution .
The spread of multinational companies and globalization have
positive effects for everyone. What is your opinion?
Multinational companies and globalization increasingly appear in many countries . It bring many good thing for everyone . In my opinion, I support the appearance of them throughout the world .
Multinational companies and globalization can be beneficial in many aspects . It can create new jobs for the people to improve the quality of live to local community . Unemployed young people can get a job and improve their living . Before , the economies of many countries depend on local business people were less chance of employment , but after the introduction of multinational companies their economy boost up and become those of top economy in the world .
Another benefits of open trade and market expansion of multinational companies create competition among local and foreign brand and develop the market . In addition that people would acquire more benefits in term of quality product.
Although native businessman oppose the open trade and of multinational companies in different countries because of destroy values culture and tradition , and put local industries in jeopardy .
However , it is just plausible justification simple local companies do not competition with multinational companies . Therefore , I completely support globalization .
Multinational companies and globalization are beneficial to every country . It has proven that world organization need to promote free trade and equal distribution .
