Undergraduate / 'I wanted to go BIG' - UT admission essay [11]

prompt:"The statement of purpose will provide an opportunity to explain any extenuating circumstances that you feel could add value to your application. You may also want to explain unique aspects of your academic background or valued experiences you may have had that relate to your academic discipline. The statement of purpose is not meant to be a listing of accomplishments in high school or a record of your participation in school-related activities. Rather, this is your opportunity to address the admissions committee directly and to let us know more about you as an individual, in a manner that your transcripts and other application information cannot convey".

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Throughout my life growing up I have always been a goal-oriented person, one who strives for the best through determination, hard work, and perseverance overcoming any obstacles that may come my way in succeeding. Setting goals have been the means of achieving things in life whether big or small, they have all counted towards where I stand today and where I want to be. As a college student when I have a goal I began to set standards not just in reaching that goal but as to how far and how hard I am willing to work and put in the effort in earning the greatest possible outcome of that goal. Being a college sophomore today in my final semester, it has been a goal of mine since day one here at Houston Community College where I currently reside to completing my basics successfully and moving on with transfers to the University of Texas. My goal and only job has ever been to become a successful Judge since the age of 4, only better understanding and growing fonder of the field of studies as I have aged discovering that I wanted to go BIG, looking into Judicial criminal law. Not only do I want to become a Judge but actually become a strong woman involved into the political and criminal scope of law enforcement. It is very important to me as well as a dream of mine to becoming the best in a career I pursue not only for myself but people and my career, striving for the best education I know I can receive and really taking advantage of it as much as possible. One who is able to learn so much through great heights and actually being able to process information through the real world, preparing me to become one of the best Judges out there! I believe what makes one the best at what they do is one who tries their best in succeeding through hard work and studying their career to the fullest front and back, inside and out, bringing these sources of knowledge into action for the real world. I believe that through my honest and certain determination in my passion for this career field, I have always and will continue to have what it takes to applying hard work and perseverance in achieving my goals here at the University of Texas where I feel can offer me the best, helping me begin this new chapter in my life of achieving the best in the career of my dreams. Exceling to the even better things in life to come and my future through UT is how I believe I can become a sensation.