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Shay87   
Sep 21, 2012
Book Reports / A Critique of "The Untouchables" by Thomas L. Friedman [2]

LaShay Harris

Dr. Brownson

Writ 101

9/17/2012

A Critique of "The Untouchables" by Thomas L. Friedman

How reliable are jobs now a day? Since America is mostly made up of the middle class, the jobs that the class have are limited especially for the lower middle class. With the use of technology and globalization, jobs today are

becoming harder to maintain because of the supply and demand. Meaning the more of a specific job is needed the more workers are required for that job, but the question remains, is there anyone adequate enough to fulfill that

job. With the demand and competition for the middle class jobs there is always need to stand out, and improve the skills required.

A piece from a book called The World Is Flat: A Brief History of the Twenty-first Century written by Friedman states the disadvantages and advantages with globalization and the need for the middle class. He points out, that

"There will be plenty of good jobs out there in the flat world for people with the right knowledge, skills, ideas, and self-motivation to seize them" (239). Not only do the middle class in America need their jobs, but also those in another

country like Sweden or India will want and need that same job. If the employer does not like the work that is being done by the employee, that employee can easily lose his/her job and be replaced by another that can do a lot more,

and bring creativity to that job.

How would someone classify globalization? Who is affected by globalization? Friedman answers these questions by stating that today the young workers will not only be competing with other Americans, but with other young

workers across the globe. Now not only to workers have to fight for jobs, but they also to fight to keep their jobs and gain new skills for that job. Friedman advises to his girls, "finish your homework-people in China and India are

starving for your jobs" (239). It a very well-played out advice, simply because of the fact that there will always be someone out there who is smarter, greater, best and cheaper worker, who will most likely take away the job. Friedman

makes good statements and sets his words out in a way to capture his readers in hope that they understand by mentioning his girls, and a part in a movie called Death of a Salesman.

Friedman has made very reasonable topic called "The Untouchables"; to Friedman the untouchables are part of the middle class, but they are the people whose jobs will not be "outsourced, digitized, or automated" (239).

There is another factor to look at as well, though most jobs like a telephone-receptionist might lose their jobs because of the simple use of recording and voice mail. The untouchables are placed into three categories; the first being

the special group, the localized and the old middle jobs. The special groups mostly consist of athletes, singers, authors, and brain surgeons. He mentions that this group is considered special because the world is in such demand

for this group. Constantly the group continues to change and become more creative with the work that they do. While the localized group mostly made of barbers, maids, plumbers, and dentist; they are called localized because

they require being face-to-face with their clients and stay where they will be needed. Lastly there is the old middle, which contains jobs like an assembly line worker or accounting. These jobs can easily be automated and digitized. I

completely agree with the statement. Today people looking for jobs cannot find one in their fields because the country is not in demand for that particular job. Often the world is in demand for one job, but has more supply for

another. For example, every country is in demand for doctors, but not enough in supply.

Friedman compared the American economy to a bell curve, with a big bulge in the middle. His opinion is that the middle class is the bulge in the middle. The middle class is what frame most of America, the backbone and pillar.

If the middle class cease to exist the economy of America will plummet downward. The country would become unstable. The economy cannot become a barbell economy, which is uneven and weighs on to sides nothing in the

middle to balance it all out. Though I would disagree simply because I know for a fact the America is mostly made of middle class citizens, but Friedman is not giving me enough facts to back up the source. He just gives a quote by

Gene Sperling, who actually argues and states, "We either grow together or we will grow apart" (241).

What jobs will be available in the new middle? What types of skills are needed, and which are no longer reliable? Friedman has made reasonable and logical point to focus on the middle class of America. He questions others to

ponder whether or not the job they currently have is abundant or if they themselves are adequate enough for that job. He gives an insight on the new middle class and what jobs will be available to keep or stick to. Though he did

not give a decent response as to how the middle class is a backbone to America, but he gives an appealing warning through his work.

Work Cited

Friedman, Thomas. "The Untouchables." Writing and Reading Across The Curriculum. 11th ed. New York: Longman-Pearson, 2012. 238-241. Print.
Shay87   
Sep 16, 2012
Essays / Summary of "Sleep Debt and the Mortgaged Mind"-Feedback [3]

LaShay Harris
Dr. Brownson
Writ 101
9/14/2012

"Sleep Debt and the Mortgaged Mind" Summary
William Dement has a M.D and a PhD; he is also known as one of the founders of modern sleep medicine. Alongside that he is a professor and researcher at Stanford University. The article, Sleep Debt and the Mortgaged Mind, first appeared in The Promise of Sleep and was co-written with Christopher Vaughan. The author describes the issues and consequences to sleep debt and the non-recognition it receives. For example, Dr. Dement points out these two incidents, Exxon Valdez and the Challenger, as accidents that could have been prevented if not for the fact of sleep deprivation. Dr. Dement and Mr. Vaughan advise people to know and understand what sleep debt is and how it works. William and Christopher referred to sleep deprivation as building bricks in a backpack, and the more time spent staying awake, the greater the weight of the bricks. Though statically the required amount of time to sleep is eight hours, but that amount would not be enough. For instance, sleeping eight hours a night, but decides to stay up for three extra hours another night and still get up for an eight A.M class; sleep debt has accumulated and now there is less alertness throughout the day.

Dr. Dement and Mr. Vaughan mention the research they have done at Stanford University; the test gave more proof of how important sleep is. The Multiple Sleep Latency Test or MSLT calculates the sleepiness and time it takes for the patient to fall back to sleep. The students were interrupted from their sleep ever five to ten seconds several times throughout the night. The MSLT results were really low, so Dr. Dement gave the students more time to sleep with little interruptions, the results steadily improved. William Dement also mentions of a friend, who claims that he has gotten enough sleep two nights before, to drive home. But it turns out not to be true, because the man fell asleep while driving and got into an accident. Dr. Dement and Mr. Vaughan report that drinking alcohol while sleep deprived is just as dangerous as drunk driving. Others can be fine with just a bit to drink, if their sleep debt is low, but for the other half whose sleep debt is greater, that bit to drink can turn fatal.

William Dement and Christopher Vaughan acknowledge the need to stay up at night and finish a late project for work or school, but they also consider that it is safer to just get the sleep that is needed. Also it is best to place yourself on a more reasonable schedule. Dr. Dement always teaches his students the importance of sleep. He relays the same message that drowsiness is the red alert. If the need to rub the eyes or yawn accrues those are the signs of sleepiness. The less sleep, the more yawns throughout the day, the more rubbing of eyes, and the need for more caffeine. Getting the sleep that is need as Dr. Dement and Mr. Vaughan states, the complete feeling of refresh, energized, and alertness comes with it. William Dement and Christopher Vaughan propose that people should know the importance, and warnings of sleep deprivation and the consequences that comes with it.

Work Cited
Dement ,William C., and Christopher Vaughan. "Sleep Debt and the Mortgaged Mind." Writing And Reading Across The Curriculum. 11th ed. New York: Longman-Pearson, 2010. 497-505. Print.
Shay87   
Sep 15, 2012
Writing Feedback / Do you prefer using machines or doing work by hand? 'Machines are quite precise' [4]

Some of your sentences seems inaccurate and unnecessary. For example: Machines do not make any mistakes. (Technically not true they do make mistakes, mostly because of the person operating with said machine. Majority of the machines used in the daily life of work needs maintenance and people to operate.) Also, 'since robots enjoy accurateness' (How exactly do you know that they enjoy accurateness?) Though you have made some good points in your paper, there are quite a bit that can be argued.
Shay87   
Sep 15, 2012
Undergraduate / Is greatness born or made? - COLLEGE ESSAY SIGNIFICANT EXPERIENCE [3]

The essay is very good, but you did not elaborate enough on the topic. Your experience on how you came to with the question and what you taken out of it was great. I would suggest putting more of which you believe greatness comes from.
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