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Backes27   
Jan 15, 2009
Undergraduate / Optional essay, Aerospace Engineering [7]

Ive been to air shows in different states and i lived on a few Air Force Bases. Thats why i didnt put a specific one, to hard to pick only one.
Backes27   
Jan 15, 2009
Undergraduate / Optional essay, Aerospace Engineering [7]

This is an optional essay about my future goals and ambitions.

The little boy stands still, mesmerized by the momentous size of the jet. He
wonders, "How can something that enormous, take off and fly?" I was that little
boy, staring at the latest Boeing jet being exhibited at the air show. Standing
next to that jet made me wonder what it took to design and develop airplanes. I
decided to choose Aerospace Engineering as an academic path. I chose it due to
my love for math and science, and for the pure thirst I have for airplanes.

At my school, I took the toughest classes available to me. Math and science
always held my attention because I was able to think critically. In my physics
class, I enjoy taking a math concept and applying it to the everyday world.
Someday, I hope to take a math concept and apply it to the design of a future
airplane. I have the drive to challenge myself and a strong desire to pursue my
aspirations. I do not want to be one an average kid who take classes
I know I can score high in. I receive great satisfaction from pushing
myself, even if I don't get that perfect A. In my opinion, I believe that this
prepares me better for the future. My "never-do-it-easy" mentality and personal
interests push me to fulfill my dream of becoming an Aerospace Engineer.
Backes27   
Jan 14, 2009
Undergraduate / The figure who has had a foremost and perpetual impact on my life. UT App Essay about my dad [11]

Im not a good writer at all. in fact, i am horrendous. im more of a math and science guy, so writing is not my best subject. i just wrote this essay today. i want everyone the criticise the hell out of it please. :)

Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact on your life and explain how and why this person is important to you.

Everyday I am surrounded by various people. They include teachers, students, and co-workers. Some of these people are my best friends; while others are just people I see everyday. Some of these people have made a lasting impact on me, while others have not. The figure who has had a foremost and perpetual impact on my life is also the person that I have known since I was born - my dad. He can be described as meticulous, persistent, and overall, devoted. Although we are not able to spend much time together, he always finds the time to show me how important I am in his life.

My father is undoubtedly the hardest working person I know. He stays active constantly, either by working at his job or finishing a home project. At times, he can work three jobs a day! However, he does not work for the money. Instead, he works because he enjoys it. Due to the long hours he spends working, our father-son time is sometimes cut short. He makes up for it after he gets home from work late in the evening. While I finish my physics or calculus homework, he will talk to me and ask me how life is going. This is important to me; it makes me realize how concerned he is.

My dad supports me in every aspect of my life. Whenever I make a decision, either right or wrong, he will give me constructive criticism. During grade school, he persuaded me to become involved in sports. He became the father that coached all of my athletic teams. Since then, soccer and baseball have become two of my biggest passions. . Even in high school, he can be found on the sidelines, cheering and encouraging me. Even though I am not the best player on the team, my dad supports me and is proud of me in every way. He told me that I do not have to be great at something to find enjoyment in it.

I shared many learning experiences with my dad. Whenever he is working on his old, sky-blue Chevy pickup, he points out and explains various parts on the engine. He taught me the best way to catch a fish while tailgating at the same time. We often spent hours in the back yard playing catch. He taught me the basics of how to pitch a baseball.

My father is the one who inspired my future education and careers goals as well. With my dad being in the Air Force, I was naturally exposed to all varieties of airplanes. From this exposure, I grew many passions - a passion for knowing how and what drives these marvels into the air, and a passion for reaching beyond what is imaginable. I someday hope to turn these passions into a profession. My dad expressed the importance of education in today's society. Without a proper education, my future career growth would be very limited. When I decided how wanted to pursue my potential education, such as attending the University of Texas, my father gave me the resources to better educate myself on this matter. He told me how much different it is from high school. When the time came to apply for colleges, he gave me advice for filling out college applications.

Many people probably say that their dad is the greatest, but mine really is. My dad taught me to be disciplined and to work hard for everything that I desire. He taught me ambition and optimism. In addition, he gave me the basic knowledge and tools that are required for any future success. My dad has prepared me for the future to the best of his ability. I cannot be any more thankful to him.
Backes27   
Jan 13, 2009
Student Talk / Application Question January [127]

If the deadline is the 15th, am i allowed to still send it on the 15th?
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