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Posts by polsestart
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polsestart   
Dec 7, 2012
Writing Feedback / describe the table illustrating expenses [NEW]

the table is given in the file attachment.^^

The given table illustrates the percentage of expenses consumers spent on three kinds of items, namely Food,drinks,tobacco; clothing,footwear and leisure,education in five different countries in 2002.

overall,each country's proportion distributed unequally in three kinds of items. The group of food,drinks and tobacco accounted for a largest proportion of all whlie leisure and education only made up a tiny minority.Consumers seemed to spend a medium amount of expenditure on cl5othing and footwear,fluctuating from 5.4 % to 9.00%.It can be seen that Turkey was the country whose consumer spending on these items was much higher than others( total about 43.12%); in contrast, the Sweden's one was the lowest just nearly a quarter.It is noticeable that the Spain and Italian consumed a nearly same amount of money that made up 27.29% and 28.29 respectively while the Ireland people consumed a relatively large number,28.91%,6.43%, 2.21 % in Food ,drinks and tobacco;clothes and leisuse/education respectively. This number only ranked after Turkey and was 5.57% lower than that in Turkey.

To conclude, each country spent a different amount of money on different types and it is obvious that in 2002 people of these five countries spent a small expenditure on group of leisure and education than that of others else.
polsestart   
Oct 16, 2012
Writing Feedback / Happiness directly relates to economic success [4]

Jenny,thanks very much for your comment.
i think i need to insert some transitional word such as " firstly,secondly...etc" to make the paper more smoothly.
Anyway,i find that your example about the economic success is very useful.
polsestart   
Oct 16, 2012
Writing Feedback / Happiness directly relates to economic success [4]

it is undeniable that happiness directly relates to economic success nowadays.From my point of view, the success of economy plays an important role in happiness of each other for may reasons.Firstly, having a fair finance,people can spend their money comfortably without worrying about any problems.They will be happier if they can buy something that is necessary for their life.Secondly,especially ina famiy,if your mother or father earns much money,it means that your family is able to afford essential things such as personal means of transport, family equipment,a lot of fees..etc.so the life of your family will be happier.Where as many people think that without the economic success,people still find their happiness.It is partially true because people can not only find their happiness in facilities but in spiritual life.But when put into the situation of the poor,you will realize that they have to face many problem with a large mumber of work,and most show their tireness.Therefore,they hardly find their real happiness.In addition, families in which there is no economic success,the argument between the parents and other members is unavoidable.In short,happiness can be affected by many factors,but it directly relates to the success of economy.
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