Writing Feedback / qualities required for a happy marriage [5]

Marriage is defined as a legal union of man and woman as a husband and wife to spend the rest of their lives together as one. As it is a life-long promise of two people joining together as one to depend on each other and share every thing they possess, it is considered as one of significant decision in many people's lives. Sustainability of happy marriage is significant in order to achieve relaxation and pleasure in life and it can be attained with qualities such as ability to compromise, good communication and love.

Compromise is one of significant factors in success of a happy marriage yet it is known as one of the hardest task to be accomplished during the marriage. The marriage is known to be the union of two people to live as one; however it is impossible to practice this theory in reality as two people continue to keep their individuality. For instance, each person has their own likes and dislike; therefore problems arise in every marriage. Two people can not always agree to same issue, and it is their job to find the best resolution to the conflict. The ability to cope with these conflicts determines the path of marriage.

Good communication skill is identified as another base aspect of successful marriage. The good communication skill interconnects with compromise. For example, constant conflicts are a major cause that leads a marriage to disaster. These conflicts can be easily resolved by talking it out and hearing other person's perspective. Through good communication skill, compromise between husband and wife will be made more easily, and effectively.

The path of marriage can be determined based on many different aspects. The marriage does not continue to be the way every couple desires it to be by itself. The sincere effort of husband and wife is the true aspect of determination of a marriage. Being open and able to look at issues at a different perspective would certainly contribute to the success of a marriage. Marriage is one of difficult homework given to every person and it is their duty to discover the best way that will support their marriage to become good and comfortable marriage.

*These are the part of my essay i've got so far. I'm currently working on my 4th paragraph.
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Letters / importance of learning new culture and language(for volunteer position) [4]

The volunteer position of London Korean School has attracted me since beginning of my high school year. Since beginning of grade 9, I dreamed of being one of the team members to teach young students about extraordinary Korean culture and heritage. Many young students stand in the middle of balance beam trying to balance two sides of heritages. Balancing both side of heritage equally is probably one of the hardest tasks given to these children. Having two cultures at the same time may seem like another difficult math question where it seems impossible to find a solution to it. However, I believe this should be viewed as a great opportunity to experience variety of cultures and languages. During the summer in Korean School, I would like to teach these children how to turn their perspective of having two cultures as an advantage rather than a disadvantage. This would be a great chance for young children to learn how fun it is to experience different cultures and languages and develop themselves to be more sociable and globally well-rounded person who can look at issues from many different perspectives. I believe young Korean children should have opportunity to achieve knowledge about remarkable beauty of Korean culture and language. London Korean language and heritage school is the perfect place to attain these opportunity and I would thrive to be part of the volunteer team of Korean language school.