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Posts by sailorjupiter
Joined: Dec 24, 2012
Last Post: Dec 26, 2012
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sailorjupiter   
Dec 26, 2012
Undergraduate / Why I chose Economics- Johns Hopkins Supplement [6]

oh actually...if that's the word limit, its going to be difficult to add a couple of sentences on that..hmm in the JHU application, was there any place where you had to write why you picked JHU? If so, then it would be redundant to add it again in this essay..
sailorjupiter   
Dec 26, 2012
Essays / I like anime related things ; Leisure activity [3]

Hey, I'm brainstorming..and I'm contemplating about writing about how I like anime related things like..I'm going to talk about anime, manga, jpop, yaoi,shoujo, bishies in my intro.. Is this topic appropriate...? ORR..should I play safe and pick the violin instead...?...
sailorjupiter   
Dec 26, 2012
Undergraduate / "dream big"; YALE Supp _ Why Yale ? [8]

..If I were you, I wouldn't even bring it to their attention that you didn't visit the campus..you're going to get negative points for just saying that.. think about all the other students who visited yale..They all are going to write about how they visited the campus and that's why its their dream school, and you're saying how didn't visit it but its your dream university. Just take that part out if you can or indirectly reword it in some way. Also don't just dwell on Yale's academic prestige. Try to incorporate diversity. Yale (and other ivies) loves that...
sailorjupiter   
Dec 26, 2012
Undergraduate / Why I chose Economics- Johns Hopkins Supplement [6]

I agree with the other poster. You need to go to the economics department at JHU and find out what's so great about it...maybe pick some econ project that the students at JHU did and tie it in to your essay...
sailorjupiter   
Dec 24, 2012
Writing Feedback / Magical Girl Warrior; Sailor moon essay [7]

How acceptable would a sailor moon essay be guys? ..something like this..its just an example, I'm going to completely change it though..

One of my favorite childhood shows (and current favorites) is Sailor Moon, the trope codifier for Magical Girl Warrior. It effectively launched a genre, and inspired a whole lot of great works in anime, manga and beyond. Many have Sailor Moon to thank for getting into anime, and many have it to thank for CREATING anime and manga. It's referenced all over the place. And launching a genre that consists of girlies, that using magical powers to fight evil, That's a pretty significant accomplishment. As TV Tropes says, Sailor Moon "fused the Sentai and Magical Girl genres, forever redefining the latter. It has become known as the archepal Magical Girl show and has been widely imitated and parodied." When Naoko Takeuchi insisted on writing a female superhero, legend has it her editor laughed and sarcastically suggested she be a schoolgirl and crybaby who saved the day too. Well, she showed him that could work.

Gender is a huge theme of Sailor Moon, and it makes no bones about this or its goal to inspire and empower girls, or its appeal to girls. This is a show where women are given the most power, and it's meant to appeal to women. Naoko Takeuchi straight out said in one of her liner notes that Sailor Moon is by a woman, for girls and about girls. And it is unflinchingly positive about this. The storyline itself goes through several themes- it's a coming-of-age story with mythological references , redemption, betrayal, jealousy, the never ending nature of war, the goal of peace, the root of evil in the world,parent-child relations, loyalty, royalty and loss of identity. Many superhero tropes are played with too- gender is a part of Sailor Moon, but it's not just about gender, it's an epic storyline in its own right that happens to focus on empowering women, which is why I love it so much,.
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