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Posts by ticklelisaelmo
Joined: Dec 30, 2012
Last Post: Jan 1, 2013
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ticklelisaelmo   
Dec 31, 2012
Undergraduate / My mother had breast cancer/ COMMON APP [11]

My mom battled with Cancer; Columbia supplement - which field and why?

Rough draft. Still need that spark, I feel. Help please?

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ticklelisaelmo   
Jan 1, 2013
Undergraduate / 'At that point in their lives, everything is clear and everything is possible' - The Alchemist [4]

"At that point in their lives, everything is clear and everything is possible... But, as time passes, a mysterious force begins to convince them that it will be impossible for them to realize their Personal Legend ... It's a force that appears to be negative, but actually shows you how to realize your personal legend" (Coelho 21). In The Alchemist, Santiago goes through a long journey to achieve his personal legend - to find the treasure in his recurring dream. His dream did not guarantee that he would find the treasure and his journey presented much uncertainty that he would. However, this "mysterious force" helped him realize that he wanted to achieve this dream. It did not matter that he got robbed, had to work for a crystal merchant or was held captive by warriors because he realized his personal legend. After reading this book, I recognized the importance that obstacles play in achieving goals. Those obstacles help us realize how much we want to succeed rather than how difficult it would be to. Being the first person in my family to go to college, facing difficulties is inevitable. I am uncertain of how much I can achieve, but I am determined to follow my personal legend. Sometimes it may seem as if I have no sense of guidance as to how to succeed in college; but, this is the "force" that will actually drive me to success. This force will motivate me to further my education and become someone who will have the power to give back to my community.

Did I quote correctly??
Any help is truly appreciated!
ticklelisaelmo   
Jan 1, 2013
Undergraduate / west meets south; Common app - Experience [4]

At the end of the week, the kids from my group ended up teaching taught the non-Californians a few Chinese phrases - and in return, we were given a brief history of Southern football.

you mean taught right?

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