Undergraduate / Intellectual individuality/open curriculum ; Brown /Architect of your education [3]

What about:

I seek an environment where it is encouraged to express intellectual individuality, where opportunities to combine subjects I love are limitless. That place is Brown.

Brown would allow me take charge of my education and study independently. To pursue my concentration with the option of Environmental Issues and Pollution Prevention. To pursue a degree in Environmental Science as well as Chemical Engineering. I will not be restrained. By maximizing my education, I can add an environmental twist to my chemical engineering studies.

With Brown's open curriculum, I have the freedom to further explore my interests by participating in research with the CES, the WIIS or the ECI.

Reading your response I wonder if I I grasped the concept of being an Architect of your education well. Can you give me an idea of what it means?

Undergraduate / 'Scientific exploration' - CalTech supplement essay [5]

Since the prompt says "What is it about Caltech's opportunities and resources that will best fuel your intellectual curiosity and develop your passion for science, technology, math or engineering?" it might be a good idea to include some specific courses or programs or research opportunities etc. somewhere

They want to know what in the curriculum or the college specifically you think will help you achieve your goal. what do you think CalTech can do for you better than other schools could

Undergraduate / 'unstable situation in my country' - Brown: If you could do anything without failing [11]

sure, no problem!

Undergraduate / 'unstable situation in my country' - Brown: If you could do anything without failing [11]

Thank you @chewbaccablack !

Undergraduate / 'unstable situation in my country' - Brown: If you could do anything without failing [11]

The thing is I already talk a lot about diversity and discovering the world and living in different places, speaking five languages in my commonapp. That's why I wasn't sure.

Thank you!

Undergraduate / 'unstable situation in my country' - Brown: If you could do anything without failing [11]

do you think the first one is better than the second?