Faq, Help / Posted my essay in the wrong category - what to do? [6]

thankyou... will try to be so from now onwards...

Writing Feedback / "a memory from my armed past" ; Enormous peaks of Himalayas [5]

maybe you were supposed to write gang where you wrote camp(successful rap of the camp)

Undergraduate / Diagnosed with severe Anxiety & moderate Depression; Significant experience [3]

good tips and corrections Tian... and a powerful imagery Cody... i have a little objection over the word "ridicule" in the very first para and some others like that... is this objection justified...?????

Writing Feedback / IELTS; Why we need music? To keep our mind in peace [6]

When musical instruments are played,they produced (produce ) special type of sound or voice which is called music. There are many kinds of music in this world like rock music,pop music and jazz music etc. Now the question arise why we need music?The answer of (to)this question is,because of having great interest and effect ](we have immense interest in the effects) in music . For example,when we work all the day and become very restless so we need some kind of refreshment to keep our mind in peace. For this we often hear ](listen to) some kind of music.Music vanish all our worries in a single moment of time (music eradicates all our worries within some moments) . We also use music to spend our leisure time. We are at a loose end and prevent ourselves of boring we listen music ]( when we have nothing to do we avail the help of music to keep away the boredom)[/ font]. Now, I began (begin) to talk about the contradiction between traditional music and international music.No doubt,international music is heard all over the world but the value of traditional music is also has its own importance. Through International music one can be introduced about ](to ) the other languages and literature. International music has produce an ability to learn others languages in natural way.But the importance of traditional music is very vast ](immense ). We can aware (get awar eness) about our culture and heritage through only (only through) our music because it is sung (composed is the better alternative ) by our native people and musicians. So at last I conclude traditional music is much more important than international music which is being heard over world.

the topic lacks attraction but still appreciation is due...:)