Writing Feedback / increasing weight against declining health. [6]

IELTS
Question :- In some countries the average weight of the people is increasing and their health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what means could be taken to solve them.

For the past decade we are witnessed to this dramatic changed occurred to our life styles. An up surge in westernization and urbanization took their control over our lives, which results in the increase of waist size by turning down our health. This change struck over many countries, which are now carving them from inside. There is not one cause to portrait but many; so here I am going to deal with them and the possible measures to solve them.

The first and main cause is the change in working habits, from the early occupation like farming, fishing they jumped into desk-bound work, which not only made them sluggish and fragile but also increased their level of stress. According to many researchers most people rely on food to reduce stress, these all ends up in obesity and ill health.

Second is the food pattern, now we depend more on fast food than traditional one because of the lack of time and energy. This adds up on the calorie not nourishment, which is one of the leading causes for heart problems. According to a research in America heart attack is the leading cause of death than any other deceases. Which is the end result of our modern lifestyle.

Third are the travelling means and the easy access to online ordering, makes them couch potatoes and immobile. When this calorie accumulated over years increases it will start showing in our systems in form of different ailments has deleterious effect on our wellness.

By knowing the cause we can find measures to resolve it. Like rearranging office environment by making everything available at walk able distance will initiate employers to move around. Providing gym and yoga facilities under the same roof will stimulate them to joint. By reversing them to adopt traditional food habit will be another major step towards health. This kind of encouragements should be started at the earliest stage of life, so that it would be easy for them to follow.

In conclusion, without the awareness regarding the harm they are bringing upon them due to this sedentary lifestyle every other step will go in vain.

Writing Feedback / Formal examinations are the best way to assess students' performance? [NEW]

IELTS:- Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as course work, projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement.

It is through education we carve our future citizens. Therefore, a proper assessment is required to know their efficiency in academic level. For the past three decades, formal examinations were considered to be the best way to assess students' learning ability. But this scenario changed a few years back when the education board realized the importance of weighing students on each level of their performance rather than on their bookish knowledge. Here I am going to discuss the lead of continual assessment over formal method.

Continual assessment is based on the student's involvement in different level such as in projects, assignments, presentations, class inputs. This also generates student's enthusiasm in doing well when they come to know that they are been evaluated on every level of their action and will take their work activities seriously.

It is unfair to assess students based on their answer sheets because according to me it only assists you in measuring student's memory level not understanding. In formal method of assessment examination is considered as the only mean of evaluation which brings a lot of pressure upon those students who won't able to by heart the text as it is. This pressure is released when we broaden our assessment scale through continual assessment.

Again in formal method students are evaluated on the basis of their preparation they had done during exam days, so any ill health or misfortune happens at that time will lead to poor outcome.

Though formal assessment has its draw backs, it helps teachers to understand student's knowledge regarding the topic. In my opinion, continual assessment should also be given equal weight as that of formal examination methods inorder to get a better results.

Writing Feedback / IELTS; Should players be payed highly or not? [6]

IELTS :-
Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified, while other think it is unfair. Give your opinion.

Sports have an inevitable part in the growth of a nation. This is importance of sports has been explored years back by Romans and Greeks. Even today its fame is not disrupted. Up to a point I agree with the above statement because sports have a great role to play in the progress of a country. Hence we give weight to sports professionals.

Even United Nation knows the fire power of sports, which motivated them to establish United Nation Organization Sports for Development and Peace (UNOSDP). They use this to bring nations together and also to resolve cold war. Therefore the part of players is significant.

Sometimes winning the game becomes the issue of National pride. So you can imagine the stress upon each player and how much it is important to win. Best example is India - Pakistan match which build an immense pressure upon them.

Sports are a massive bodily activity where you cannot guarantee about anything. A small fracture or an ill health may cost their living. Death is not rare phenomena here, RamanLamba, Al Lucan are the sad part of this truth.

When we are sitting in the comfort of our home, they are playing arduous to win. They have to play in every odd conditions where we don't want to be in out. Physical strain should also be taken in account.

However, many politicians, and sports authorities covered themselves up in sports for getting benefits beyond our imaginations. Common wealth game 2010 is the best illustration for it. This should not be permitted in any case, because our valuable money is going to wrong hands, considering this point I feel it's totally unfair to spend money on without knowing where it goes.

On other hand in my perspective players deserves to get this money because they stake their life on this game.

Writing Feedback / Why should we prefer English language over other language? [7]

Why should we prefer English language over other language?

Language is the highly developed form of communication and is one of the distinguished characteristics of a human being over animals. It has been developed over years and every country has its own. But as the interaction between nations increased so as the necessity for a common language emerged, and as a result English language got its priority.

Another reason for its fame is because of the British invasion over various countries has blessed them with the opportunity to learn it. Though it considered just as a secondary language it got its fire power by the progress of globalization.

Education was the first to be struck by its stardom. English got its easy grip over the curriculum and its significance up surged over years. This change took place because of the ingenious efforts done in the field of science and technology, and the major contributors were English prominent countries. Text books, journals, research papers were all published In English, which also forced students to excel in it.

Professional front is another area which is completely swept away by this revolutionary change. Despite of mother tongue, English is included as official language. One reason is because of the economic growth is highly weight by the interaction with other developed nation either through politics or job. Up surging BPO, MNC, International Hospital and Hotel are the product of it.

However, I will never abate the learning of other language because it has a crucial role in keeping cultural milieu alive. But in question of giving priority to English language, I have no second thought about it.

Writing Feedback / Some people think change is good, other not. Explain both points. [4]

Doing same task everyday might make your work easy but it as well makes you bore. I am a person who believes in moving along with changing current. We all feel some sort of bored and saturated by our work and desperately wait for a weekend or vacation to relax. This is the best illustration I can give here to pin down my point.

I want to discuss the effect of change in our life. This alteration in our routine not only elevate our mood and refreshes us but also help with our innovative ideas and creativity. Various brain storm sections are being organized to bring new thoughts and ideas.

Assigning different project and updating employers with new technology and tools will increase brain activity. In a research it is found that after 27 years there is a decline in brain activity, which might be because of robotic work environment. Where we are trained to do certain work and we do it till retirement, this hampers brain's activity.

The effect of this current also struck our education system, where our curriculum are being changed and more interactive activities, sports and arts are being added to mould all rounder's for our country.

However, sticking to their mundane work and doing it repeatedly over and again can make them an expert on that area, and can raise their ability to finish it before hand, but without updated with new knowledge and technology, I won't think it's worth doing it. Because 'when in Rome, do as Romans' is the best policy to follow

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