lele1987
Jun 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / Country has a lot of special things to offer and many of them are reflected in movies [4]
Thanks Dumi for your advices!
Thanks Dumi for your advices!
lele1987
Jun 2, 2013
Writing Feedback / Country has a lot of special things to offer and many of them are reflected in movies [4]
please check my essay and give for me feedback. Thanks!
Nowadays, movies have become popular in the world and it also is a large entertaining industry. Watching movies can help spectator in order to learn about something new from other countries. People can learn about cultures and customs, histories and languages.
Firstly, from watching movies, people can learn some other countries's cultures and customs. Some kinds of movies reflect cultures and real life in countries. For example, with Vietnam's movies, spectator can have an exact view about Vietnam's countryside and people who lives there. One of them, about Vietnam's food and drink also are mentioned, maybe it is ChĆ°ng cake, which is traditional cake of Vietnamese in Tet holiday or rice which is main food of Vietnamese. They are some of special things of Vietnam's cultures.
Secondly, with historical movies, absolutely you can learn about other countries's history. China is a country which is very famous with historical movies and they have invested a lot of money for this kind of movies. Basically, they have succeeded because almost spectators have known Chinese history.
Lastly, watching a movie is a best way so as to help people to study another language. Nowadays, there are a lot of movies which was translated to other language to be suitable with spectator, but many of people want to watch a movie with its original language because they can learn language from it. Language in a movie maybe is not the same as at school and they can learn how to practice it in suitable contexts in real life.
To sum up, a country has a lot of special things to learn and many of them was reflected in movies, and watching movies is one of choices to learn about it.
please check my essay and give for me feedback. Thanks!
Nowadays, movies have become popular in the world and it also is a large entertaining industry. Watching movies can help spectator in order to learn about something new from other countries. People can learn about cultures and customs, histories and languages.
Firstly, from watching movies, people can learn some other countries's cultures and customs. Some kinds of movies reflect cultures and real life in countries. For example, with Vietnam's movies, spectator can have an exact view about Vietnam's countryside and people who lives there. One of them, about Vietnam's food and drink also are mentioned, maybe it is ChĆ°ng cake, which is traditional cake of Vietnamese in Tet holiday or rice which is main food of Vietnamese. They are some of special things of Vietnam's cultures.
Secondly, with historical movies, absolutely you can learn about other countries's history. China is a country which is very famous with historical movies and they have invested a lot of money for this kind of movies. Basically, they have succeeded because almost spectators have known Chinese history.
Lastly, watching a movie is a best way so as to help people to study another language. Nowadays, there are a lot of movies which was translated to other language to be suitable with spectator, but many of people want to watch a movie with its original language because they can learn language from it. Language in a movie maybe is not the same as at school and they can learn how to practice it in suitable contexts in real life.
To sum up, a country has a lot of special things to learn and many of them was reflected in movies, and watching movies is one of choices to learn about it.
lele1987
Jun 2, 2013
Writing Feedback / To what extent do you agree with going abroad for university studies? [5]
i think in this paragraph you should use "For example" to begin a sentence and use "such as" in other sentence. Ex: Nowadays, we study English for a lot of reasons, such as, get a better job, study abroad and emigrate to other country,
i think in this paragraph you should use "For example" to begin a sentence and use "such as" in other sentence. Ex: Nowadays, we study English for a lot of reasons, such as, get a better job, study abroad and emigrate to other country,
lele1987
Jun 2, 2013
Writing Feedback / Increasing a number of students are choosing to study abroad [6]
i think grammar always is an important problem with us when we want to study English, my English grammar has improved a little when i started to read English grammar in Use (Cambridge - Myrphy), you can try to consult it.
i think grammar always is an important problem with us when we want to study English, my English grammar has improved a little when i started to read English grammar in Use (Cambridge - Myrphy), you can try to consult it.
lele1987
May 23, 2013
Writing Feedback / Living in the countryside better in Vietnam [6]
Thanks for your advice, i will try to improve this.
Thanks for your advice, i will try to improve this.
lele1987
May 22, 2013
lele1987
May 22, 2013
Writing Feedback / Living in the countryside better in Vietnam [6]
I am a new member, and this is the first essay that i try to write and thanks for your comment for my draft.
Nowadays, under the population and climate change, living in the countryside is one of the best choices for people. There are three reasons that why people prefer live in the countryside to a city.
First, countryside has the best environment for people, which is very good for human's health. There are cool air, fresh food and comfortable weather. There are not many vehicles or too much noise and you will have a great time to relax after work.
Second, the relationship between people and neighbor is better in the country side is better than in city. In city, people are too busy to care about it, but in the countryside, there are some different things. Everyone, who lives in the countryside, they are very friendly and they can share with you everything and that is very interesting.
Lastly, in the countryside, with the development of infrastructure in the countryside people can feel comfortable with their life with internet, entertainment center, suppermarket center. They can choose a lot of ways to take care of their health and choose a good school for their children to study
In conclusion, living in countryside is considering as one of the best choices that helps people improve their life.
I am a new member, and this is the first essay that i try to write and thanks for your comment for my draft.
Nowadays, under the population and climate change, living in the countryside is one of the best choices for people. There are three reasons that why people prefer live in the countryside to a city.
First, countryside has the best environment for people, which is very good for human's health. There are cool air, fresh food and comfortable weather. There are not many vehicles or too much noise and you will have a great time to relax after work.
Second, the relationship between people and neighbor is better in the country side is better than in city. In city, people are too busy to care about it, but in the countryside, there are some different things. Everyone, who lives in the countryside, they are very friendly and they can share with you everything and that is very interesting.
Lastly, in the countryside, with the development of infrastructure in the countryside people can feel comfortable with their life with internet, entertainment center, suppermarket center. They can choose a lot of ways to take care of their health and choose a good school for their children to study
In conclusion, living in countryside is considering as one of the best choices that helps people improve their life.
