Writing Feedback / Technological advancement hamper the development of a country's traditional skills? [3]

To begin with, our life has enormous improvement by help of developing of country. At the same time, technology and ways of life on a break of extinction. Many people think that we need to try and keep them alive but I disagree with them. The purpose of this writing is to analyze this issue .

The era of Stone age has passed and many changes took place in our life. It's suggested that we have a huge amount of improvements to compare with our ancestors and obviously they occur by developing of countries. Everlasting demands of people in different aspects of our lifestyle lead to impressive development in varying scopes. These days life is much easier than it was a few decades ago. Also we have to keep in mind that fact "time and development inextricably go hand in hand with each other".

In the Stone Age our forefathers lived by hunting and fishing. These days we do not have to do the same activities. We can easily go to the market and buy what we need. Recently, fire is the one of the usual things, but for our ancestors it was hard to produce the fire. Moreover, they had uncomfortable habitats and eternally struggled for survive.

In conclusion, it's suggested that we have to keep our traditions and remember hard days of our ancestors. Despite that fact, we will gain more benefit if country will continue to develop. In my opinion we do not have to reiterate life of forebears and I did not see any reason to keep the traditional ways of life alive.

Writing Feedback / IELTS ; Is travelling around the world a good thing? [3]

Nowadays more and more people are spending their leisure time by travelling around the world.Some people think that such way of spending the time helps to know about new things.However,thera are some who belive that it is harmfull.

First of all,i want to say that travelling is the most popular activity at present.A huge amount of people annually travel to alot of countries from different places.Travelling is nort just spending time in another country.It also means to make new friends.You will have conversation with them from which you get enormous amount of information about their daily routines or life style.From such a good way of contact,you will gain a lot of benfit.For instance,you will know about their traditions and culture.This factors will enlarge your acknowledge about the world.

On the other hand,you can easily have "culture shock".It means that you will not understand their traditions.For example,we Asians eat horse meat.But our guests and not indegeneous people can not imagine how we eat it.

The second negative aspect is harmfull countries.Recent days,yau have wide range of chosing where you want to go.But there are some coasts and districts with awfull services.For decades,they can not go hand in hand with technology and they could not grew like country.So that there are some problems with medicine.From this reason,you can easily take disease or illness.

On the contrary, our world has some countries with excellent economic status.in these countries you can desrve large amount of opportunity in different aspects of travelling.To illustrate,sailing,rowing and so on...

To sum up,it can be suggested that travelling one of the most achievements of modern life and I agree with people who believe that travelling will enlarge your knowledge.