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Posts by Naveen 54
Joined: Jun 28, 2013
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Naveen 54   
Jul 17, 2013
Writing Feedback / Living individual or staying in apartments is better [5]

Where each and every person present day is interested to live in apartments instead of independent home because mostly they feel insecure. Living in city they can get any information/food etc... They can easily locate anything in compared to individual homes. People who are interested in constructing individual home they will choose particular area for constructing and due to this they will be far away from city.

According to my view living in city premises is better option, mainly for office/school/shopping etc. Living in apartments we can interact easily with neighbors, we can move friendly with others and share well our good times and best things which located in city. If our family members/neighbors suffering from bad health we can help them easily, and help them in moving forward in their respective path.

While living in individual house we have some advantages like growing plants/pets we can live freely in compare to apartments. Living individual makes us to feel alone when everyone is busy with their works in home; it also feels insecure to live individual. While constructing individual home we have to be aware of security mainly because we live separately and individually. If we need help regarding personal/house hold repair, no one will locate nearby and may take hours to rectify the job to be done.

If we stay in apartment we feel secure and if any problem occurs, many will come forward to help finical/support. We can all to be together like a single family and helping out each and every problem to rectify as soon as possible. Students of same age can easily interact and they can easily help out in studies/not only studies they can play game like together and beautiful memories will take place.

Finally living in spacious home is advantages but we have to take care a lot. Relationship also matters in every aspect. Most of them will feel insecure to live in individual home even though having huge amounts, because money doesn't exist life long relationship play major role in all aspects. So I feel happy when I stay in apartments.
Naveen 54   
Jul 16, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS Task2 - people relationship has changed because of technology [3]

In this essay i want describe effective forms of technology on social contact and distinguish whether those are effective/not.

Now we are witness..?? (witness means which a person who sees an event happening, especially a crime or an accident) that a family who their members are even in different continents, because of job opportunity and educational position. Therefore, all members of family will be contacted each other by telephone, mail or virtual/online connection by internet .

It's not witness, Now present people are living far away from home for work/study to have better future. Therefore they completely based on communication in electronic email/video call etc.

They can relate each other by virtual connection.

It's not Many presses.. you can say simply "media".. and local/international TV networks spread the news all over the world

hey y do use "or" always?? apply "/" instead of "or".

hey your English is fine but sentence formation is not right way and lot of grammatical mistakes. Try to elaborate your essay and have some preview before starting essay.
Naveen 54   
Jun 28, 2013
Writing Feedback / Some people enjoy reading novels and short stories. Others like watching movies. ? [6]

The above paragraph is illustrated between two people one prefers to watch movies and one who like to read books a lot. While reading some novels and short stories we can understand why the book is published and on what basis it came into light. Most of the authors prefer to publish books on basis of their own life experience. Well books give us lots of knowledge, while we are in kinder garden stage teacher and parents prefer us to read and one good book is equal to good friend.

People have different kinds of mind sets some prefer to read book and some watch movie. It mostly depends on their state of mind. For example while we travelling we are mostly found of book because we can easily pass away the time, some mysterious book makes us to read a lot because we found it's interesting. Basing upon book most of the people have changed their life style.

Short stories and novels are enjoyable in compared to movie. While watching movie we may have fun for particular time and we may forgot the story after some years, but books be with us always so whenever we found of having work stress , if we read for ones for a particular time we may feel happy. People mostly prefer to read books instead of watching movies.

I spend my leisure actually by reading books most of them I come across my life were inspired me a lot to change my attitude when I am not in a state of accepting new challenges which I have to accept. I have gained a lot of knowledge by book, reading book and understanding it while take a lots of time but finally we have a glance about the book.

Moreover, watching movies make us understand long stories in a shorter time, time is really precious for people who live in a busy society, the appearance of movie allow people could understand a lot of novels in limited time. Students are more likely to have option to see the movie classics not the lengthy novels. Employees prefer to watch some shorts films by digital products when they travel to work on the subways or trains. By doing this, people could spend time enjoying other interesting things.

Hence, reading novels and short stories is helpful but we don't have time to read a book present day. So most of them will prefer to watch movie.
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