sukhjit
Aug 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS: It is essential to have the death penalty to reduce violent crime. [9]
very impressive writing, I'm not able find any mistake in it.
very impressive writing, I'm not able find any mistake in it.
sukhjit
Aug 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS:apprehensive mind; learning a foreign language at primary/secondary school [6]
Some grammatical mistakes but good vocab and Good Ideas about the topic.
Some grammatical mistakes but good vocab and Good Ideas about the topic.
sukhjit
Aug 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS: Is change good for people or not? [6]
[/b]Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others , however think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both views and you opinion.[b]
In this high speed generation, there is only one thing that does not alter, changing. There have been much debate over this topic whether changes is good things for life or not. However, I personally believe that changes is very necessary for life to have something new in our life.
Sometimes, people fed up their daily routine life and they want changes to enjoy. For example, if the water stays long time at the same place, then it will start smelling. Furthermore, changes play the prominent role in the inventions. Only those people can do this, who want to reach at the top level in their career. Moreover changes are very helpful to development of mind, because people face a lot of problems and failure, which teaches them how to to handle the different situations.
On the other side, some people like to live in their traditional lifestyle because of their habits and unpredictable future. Everyone has habits that do not let them change. Nevertheless, the important issue is that some people are afraid of their future to be altered. For instance, people who are working for their families and do not have another source of income, they are not able to accept changes. Secondly, due to security and familiarities with others people do not want to change their hometown. Moreover, life in traditional way, keeps alive our culture and mother tongue.
In nutshell, people adopt changes according to their needs and situations. Therefore, the best way we can deal with it, is trying to keep pace with changes.
[/b]Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others , however think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both views and you opinion.[b]
In this high speed generation, there is only one thing that does not alter, changing. There have been much debate over this topic whether changes is good things for life or not. However, I personally believe that changes is very necessary for life to have something new in our life.
Sometimes, people fed up their daily routine life and they want changes to enjoy. For example, if the water stays long time at the same place, then it will start smelling. Furthermore, changes play the prominent role in the inventions. Only those people can do this, who want to reach at the top level in their career. Moreover changes are very helpful to development of mind, because people face a lot of problems and failure, which teaches them how to to handle the different situations.
On the other side, some people like to live in their traditional lifestyle because of their habits and unpredictable future. Everyone has habits that do not let them change. Nevertheless, the important issue is that some people are afraid of their future to be altered. For instance, people who are working for their families and do not have another source of income, they are not able to accept changes. Secondly, due to security and familiarities with others people do not want to change their hometown. Moreover, life in traditional way, keeps alive our culture and mother tongue.
In nutshell, people adopt changes according to their needs and situations. Therefore, the best way we can deal with it, is trying to keep pace with changes.
sukhjit
Aug 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / ILETS:Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects [7]
Very good ideas.
Very good ideas.
sukhjit
Aug 2, 2013
Writing Feedback / [IELTS] Tourists should follow local customs or host should welcome differences [4]
Very good ideas and grammar, but there should be a relevant example which proves your statements and need to elaborate your opinion, it should not be in the conclusion.
Very good ideas and grammar, but there should be a relevant example which proves your statements and need to elaborate your opinion, it should not be in the conclusion.
sukhjit
Aug 2, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS: Table graph writing, modes of travelling in England. [3]
khanhlinhpham
Thanks for the assistance because I was confused that how to make it impressive. But you give me an good now I'll try to write it like this.
khanhlinhpham
Thanks for the assistance because I was confused that how to make it impressive. But you give me an good now I'll try to write it like this.
sukhjit
Aug 1, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS: Table graph writing, modes of travelling in England. [3]
Topic: The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparison where relevant.
The statistical data of table graph reveals the different modes of traveling in England between the years of 1985 and 2000.
In 1985, average distance distance traveled per person by walking was 255 miles, that was nearly followed by trains and approximately five times higher than the bicycle and long distance traveling. Distance traveled in local buses and other modes was 429 miles and 450 miles respectively. Cars covered maximum distance that was 3199 miles and lowest went to taxi that was merely 13 miles.
Likewise, in the end of 20th century, again cars denoted maximum proportion of distance that was 4806 miles, whereas the lowest distance recorded at 41 miles by the bicycle. Through walking, a person traveling 237 miles, that was almost half of second highest distance traveled by other modes. The local bus and train used to travel 274 miles and 366 miles respectively.
Overall, the total distance traveled by all modes was 4740 miles however in 2000, it increased to 6475 miles.
Topic: The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparison where relevant.
The statistical data of table graph reveals the different modes of traveling in England between the years of 1985 and 2000.
In 1985, average distance distance traveled per person by walking was 255 miles, that was nearly followed by trains and approximately five times higher than the bicycle and long distance traveling. Distance traveled in local buses and other modes was 429 miles and 450 miles respectively. Cars covered maximum distance that was 3199 miles and lowest went to taxi that was merely 13 miles.
Likewise, in the end of 20th century, again cars denoted maximum proportion of distance that was 4806 miles, whereas the lowest distance recorded at 41 miles by the bicycle. Through walking, a person traveling 237 miles, that was almost half of second highest distance traveled by other modes. The local bus and train used to travel 274 miles and 366 miles respectively.
Overall, the total distance traveled by all modes was 4740 miles however in 2000, it increased to 6475 miles.
Table Graph
