Writing Feedback / Schooling helps kids to learn socialism and other important lessons - in school [5]

Please correct me as m practicing for toefl exam.
Parents are the first teacher of a child because they teach the most basic and initial lessons of life to their kid . Every child has his own ability to learn and to adopt things and so do the parents. Though each system of schooling , either home schooling or regular schooling has its pros and cons, I personally prefer regular schooling i.e. children should be educated at school.

As we human beings are social animals, we need company .we are more comfortable in a company rather than a secluded one. School gives us that facility .It exposes us to different students and different cultures even . As I mentioned earlier, every kid has his own line of thinking .Kids can understand various aspects for a thing .Similarly he can learn different views to look at a thing.The best example is of a half filled glass.If it is shown to students and ask them to share their observations.Few of them can observe its half filled and others can seen it is half empty.That means though object is one, different aspects are there to see it and regular schooling helps to inculcate it in kids.

"Life itself is the best teacher than any books" is the well known saying.School is the outer world for a kid and his home is his own world.By stepping into outer world .Kids can learn many things such as how to get acquainted with other kids and new environment of school .They can learn to get mingle with other kids .They can learn to make friends . They can learn to get adjusted with schedule of school i.e.time management and so on.

Schooling helps kids to learn socialism and other important lessons by going to school .These lessons helps kids to grow as an individual and to survive in this world as a successful person so I support children should be educated at school rather than home schooling.

Writing Feedback / Banning of smoking in public places; "Smoking is injurious to health" [2]

Please correct me and guide me if feel need of modification.
"Smoking is injurious to health" is the line that draws my attention, while watching a movie and it forced me to think why ? and I started to search for it and its unbelievable and really heart wrenching that very vast number of people are getting died yearly due to this smoking and top of it our India is among those top ten countries where this number is high.I am also in big favor for this banning as smoking is not only injurious to health of active smoker but to passive smoker even. Passive smoker can also get infected by lung cancer , bronchitis and asthma kind of life threatening illness.It is sheer wastage of your money even.As addicted person can smoke large no of cigarettes daily and spend lot of money on it.

Smoking is harmful to the environment even.Due to smoking large amount of poisonous smoke can get released into this environment .This ultimately lead to increase amount of carbon monoxide in our surrounding .It helps to pollute the air and results in air pollution.

In order to avoid all these bad consequences and to save our life as well as our planet ,avoidance of smoking is the only way as prevention is better than cure!

Writing Feedback / Doing the same job for whole life, is it challenging? [2]

Please correct me where ever am wrong.
As per human nature , no matter how lucrative job is, people may get bored doing the same job for long time. New ambiance, new people, new work environment and good amount of increment in salary makes job more challenging.As per me, doing the same job for whole life has advantages as well as loopholes even.

There are many reasons to feel so but the most important is human psychology. An human is social animal . He likes to be socially active with different group of people .New job at new place with new people gives him opportunity to interact with .Similarly by meeting with different people , you can come to know many different things and improve your knowledge on various aspect.Different jobs gives you opportunity to work in different environment as each job has its own specifications and it is challenging to cope up with these differences .

On the contrary , doing the same job, you can be master in your field and technically sound in your domain .This also helps you to get good amount of increment in your salary. Whereas by doing the same job for many years , you may get to know lot of people who are working in the same domain .This also help you to meet with different people with same area of work.

So as per me, doing the same job for whole life is challenging in itself as each job has its own challenges .It depends upon person to person how you take it as practice makes man perfect and if you are doing the same job then your getting salary for being perfect in your work and that is nothing but win win situation only .

Thank you.