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Apr 26, 2009
Faq, Help / Question about EssayForum - How does this site work? [103]
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binu
Apr 26, 2009
Writing Feedback / We can know something about a person by the way he dresses. [18]
Thanks all for your great advice.
Thanks all for your great advice.
binu
Apr 24, 2009
Undergraduate / People face a dilemma where do they get the best suggestion from? [10]
Even though, I, myself am taking a baby steps in writing essay, I'll try to give some suggestions. Hopefully it helps.
We should not write Capital letters in middle of the sentence. For example, in first paragraph
Getting should be getting.
Even though, I, myself am taking a baby steps in writing essay, I'll try to give some suggestions. Hopefully it helps.
We should not write Capital letters in middle of the sentence. For example, in first paragraph
Getting should be getting.
binu
Apr 24, 2009
Writing Feedback / We can know something about a person by the way he dresses. [18]
Here is my revised essay. Please give me some feedback. Thanks to all for creative comments.
Should we judge someone by the way he dresses? Well, different people will have different views depending upon their way of thinking. In my opinion, a great deal of information can be revealed by their attire. The wealth and profession are two examples. Dresses also reflect the society they belong to.
In my view, wealthy people always wear brand-named clothes. Looking at the brand name, we can pretty much guess how his financial situation is. Similarly, beggars and homeless people will be seen in rags. But, as always there are two sides of the coin. Some people will not care about the clothes they wear or some may wear high end dresses beyond their means. However, majority of the rich people wear expensive dresses and poor people wear less expensive dresses.
Furthermore, profession is another information we can gather by uniform. We see doctors wearing white coat with name tag on it. Pilots wear uniform while flying planes. Firefighter, police officer, mailman, soldiers, nurses are few other examples who wear uniforms. When we go shopping, we see sales person wearing T-shirt with their company's logo on it. In my home country, school children wear uniform during school days. So, looking at their uniform we know the school they attend.
Lastly, in my opinion, dresses also reflect the society they belong to. People from different countries have different ways of dressing. For example, Japanese wear Kimono. Nepalese and Indians women wear Sari whereas men wear shirts and pants. Western people wear pants and shirts. Even within a country, the attire is different in different parts.
Humans have tendency to judge a person by their attire and I am no exception to that. Therefore, I believe that we can know something about a person by his clothing. However, we can not deny on the fact that there is always exception to everything. There are people who do not belong to above mentioned categories.
Here is my revised essay. Please give me some feedback. Thanks to all for creative comments.
Should we judge someone by the way he dresses? Well, different people will have different views depending upon their way of thinking. In my opinion, a great deal of information can be revealed by their attire. The wealth and profession are two examples. Dresses also reflect the society they belong to.
In my view, wealthy people always wear brand-named clothes. Looking at the brand name, we can pretty much guess how his financial situation is. Similarly, beggars and homeless people will be seen in rags. But, as always there are two sides of the coin. Some people will not care about the clothes they wear or some may wear high end dresses beyond their means. However, majority of the rich people wear expensive dresses and poor people wear less expensive dresses.
Furthermore, profession is another information we can gather by uniform. We see doctors wearing white coat with name tag on it. Pilots wear uniform while flying planes. Firefighter, police officer, mailman, soldiers, nurses are few other examples who wear uniforms. When we go shopping, we see sales person wearing T-shirt with their company's logo on it. In my home country, school children wear uniform during school days. So, looking at their uniform we know the school they attend.
Lastly, in my opinion, dresses also reflect the society they belong to. People from different countries have different ways of dressing. For example, Japanese wear Kimono. Nepalese and Indians women wear Sari whereas men wear shirts and pants. Western people wear pants and shirts. Even within a country, the attire is different in different parts.
Humans have tendency to judge a person by their attire and I am no exception to that. Therefore, I believe that we can know something about a person by his clothing. However, we can not deny on the fact that there is always exception to everything. There are people who do not belong to above mentioned categories.
binu
Apr 23, 2009
Writing Feedback / We can know something about a person by the way he dresses. [18]
Thanks twilocity for detail explanation . I am learning to write effective essay for upcoming TOEFL ibt. Thanks.
Thanks twilocity for detail explanation . I am learning to write effective essay for upcoming TOEFL ibt. Thanks.
binu
Apr 23, 2009
Writing Feedback / We can know something about a person by the way he dresses. [18]
Thank you all for your help. I really appreciate it.
Thank you all for your help. I really appreciate it.
binu
Apr 20, 2009
binu
Apr 20, 2009
Writing Feedback / We can know something about a person by the way he dresses. [18]
Thank you for your comment. I too think outlandish is more appropriate.
Thank you for your comment. I too think outlandish is more appropriate.
binu
Apr 20, 2009
Writing Feedback / We can know something about a person by the way he dresses. [18]
There are some groups of people who believe that it is possible to know something about a person. On the other hand there are fair amount of people who disagree with this. I belong to the first type of group. Two important things we could know from the dresses are how rich he or she is and person behavior.
In my opinion the first important thing we can guess is whether that person is rich or not. Definitely, rich persons will wear only brand name dresses. Depending upon the brand name of the dress we can guess how rich he or she is. We see movie actors and actresses always dressed perfectly. Nowadays news media is always talking about how first lady Michelle Obama dresses, and how good she looks.
Second thing we can see from the dress worn by the a person is his behavior. Like for example, if a person always wears freaky dresses, we can definitely consider him as punk. On the other hand if he or she always comes to work in suit and tie, that person will be taken as scholarly gentleman. We see homeless persons always in rags. The person who uses drugs looks disheveled.
However, there are always two sides of the coin. There are few people who don't like to dress up according to his their earnings. But that accounts to only small percentage. Therefore, I strongly agree that we can know something about a person by the way he dresses.
There are some groups of people who believe that it is possible to know something about a person. On the other hand there are fair amount of people who disagree with this. I belong to the first type of group. Two important things we could know from the dresses are how rich he or she is and person behavior.
In my opinion the first important thing we can guess is whether that person is rich or not. Definitely, rich persons will wear only brand name dresses. Depending upon the brand name of the dress we can guess how rich he or she is. We see movie actors and actresses always dressed perfectly. Nowadays news media is always talking about how first lady Michelle Obama dresses, and how good she looks.
Second thing we can see from the dress worn by the a person is his behavior. Like for example, if a person always wears freaky dresses, we can definitely consider him as punk. On the other hand if he or she always comes to work in suit and tie, that person will be taken as scholarly gentleman. We see homeless persons always in rags. The person who uses drugs looks disheveled.
However, there are always two sides of the coin. There are few people who don't like to dress up according to his their earnings. But that accounts to only small percentage. Therefore, I strongly agree that we can know something about a person by the way he dresses.