Blue840
Jun 1, 2007
Writing Feedback / Expository Essay: Important holidays for me [3]
I am no expert, but your conclusion paragraph needs more work, add little details about why they're your fav. , but don't repeat yourself. Also, you might want to add alittle more to your 1st paragraph about Halloween also. Well, good luck on your G.E.D!! i just recently got mine and currently working on my Associates.
I am no expert, but your conclusion paragraph needs more work, add little details about why they're your fav. , but don't repeat yourself. Also, you might want to add alittle more to your 1st paragraph about Halloween also. Well, good luck on your G.E.D!! i just recently got mine and currently working on my Associates.