Writing Feedback / IELTS; Disparities in earnings of different professionals [5]

Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every profession has its one value and that why their salary differ. Nowadays that has changed. Professional workers (doctors, nurses, teachers) that make immense contribution to the society are paid less than sports and entertainment personalities. I concur with the opinion that professions, which are significant to the society, should be paid more so they would be able to improve in their fields and be motivated to succeed in their careers. In this essay a will provide an example that supports my belief.

In my country the health care is on the low level. Doctors and nurses are paid less than the speakers on the news. With the time they got frustrated with that fact and started to do protest around the country. They claim that their salary could not even pay the fees for their future studies and therefore cannot improve in their fields. In addition to this less and less students where enrolling to the medical universities. We were witnesses to the lots of deaths that happened because of the lack of professional workers. Not only doctors but also the whole country was frustrated by this horrible problem that the country was dealing with.

On the other hand the entertainment personalities were leaving the luxurious life. Their salaries were so high that they could afford to buy anything; Expensive shoes, bags, cars, luxury homes and villas and so on. I opine with ones opinion that they are a big contribution to the society but not to the extant that they over shadow the professional workers. They voyages should not rise only because the number of followers on instagram and twitter are going up.

In my opinion, every profession has its own value and its own contribution to the society. The government should make a scale of professions, which are essential and primary to the society, and professions that go below that scale and according to that the salary should be determined.

Writing Feedback / the two methods of manufacturing black tea [5]

The aim of this report is to describe the traditional and modern method of manufacturing black tea.
The first step of these two processes is collecting good quality leaves.
In traditional method only bud and two top leaves are picked up from the plants while in modern method air is passed through leaves on rack.

The leaves picked from the plants are put in the rolling machine where they are rolled flat and broken. Opposite to the traditional method, modern method put the leaves to the cutting machine so they can be cut, torn and curled.

In addition to this, enzymes from leaves are released in the rolling process and granular pieces are created from the cutting process. Furthermore, rolled leaves are spread on tiles or cement where oxidation or fermentation occurs giving the leaves copper colour.

The last step is where the tea leaves are fired or dried. IN old fashioned way, they are put into oven where 97% moisture is removed. Nowadays leaves are dried by air dryer and therefore flavour and aroma is released.

In conclusion, modern method gives quicker way of producing black tea.