Writing Feedback / IELTS ( TASK 1 ) Expenditure on Health & Education , UAE as % of GDP [5]

The bar chart illustrates the budget for Health and Education in the UAE from 1985 to 1990 whereas the line graph gives information about the figure for Infant Mortality and Life Exectancy between 1970 and 1992 .

Overall , spending money on Education made Life Expectancy and Infant Mortality improved .
The most outstanding feature of the chart is that the outlay on Education always came first in all of three periods . In 1985 , Education appeared to take the largest proportions in expenditure with 10.00 % , while the outlay on health was only 8.00 % . In 1990 , there was a slightly down ward trend in the expenditure on health from 8.00% to 7.00% . In contrast , education experienced a significant rise from 10.00% to 14.00% in 5 years . In 1993 , the exenditure on Health grow considerably from 7.00% to 10.00% and that on education climb marginally from 14.00% to 15.00% .

Regarding the line graph , there was a gradual reduction in infant mortality from 70 to 20 per 1000 births between 1970 and 1992 . On the other hand , the life expectancy witnessed a slightly increase from 60 to 70 years in the same period .

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Writing Feedback / IELTS: outlay and expense on fast foods in the UK [5]

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain.
The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below .
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The bar chart illustrates the outlay on fast foods in the UK in 1990 whereas the line graph gives information about the figure for the consumption of fast food from 1970 to 1990 as indicated on the x-axis .

Overall , people in the UK spend a lot of their money on hamburger but their consumption of fish and chips is the highest .
It can be seen clearly from the barchart that in the high income group , the budget for hamburger came first with 42 pence while that for fish and chips was only 16 pence . In the average income group , the spending money on hamburger witnessed a significant drop from 42 pence to 32 pence . In contrast , the expenditure on fish and chip rose considerably from 16 pence to 25 pence . On the other hand , in the low income group , people spent their money on fish and chip more than hamburger .

Moving to the linegraph , the consumption of hamburger rose dramatically from 80 grammes to 500 grammes between 1970 and 1990 while that of pizza experienced a marked reduction from 300 to 200 in 15 years . After that , there is a slight climb in the consumption of pizza from 1985 to 1990

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