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Posts by oneclbb
Name: Jung Eun Lee
Joined: Apr 2, 2014
Last Post: Apr 10, 2014
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oneclbb   
Apr 10, 2014
Speeches / IELTS speaking - Describe a time when you helped someone [6]

Hey Dumi, I have a question. I really need this site as i have to get IELTS score before the Jun and i really want to increase my English skill. But I am not at good English so i have lack of ability to make command to others works. What should i do??? I am afraid that my command make others confusing, :'(
oneclbb   
Apr 10, 2014
Speeches / IELTS speaking - Describe a time when you helped someone [6]

yes i totally agree with what you said. i will not memorize it, but at least i have to have some ideas related to topics. :) otherwise i cannot say anything to examiner. :'(

I just want to know how to explain better and to know the way of native speakers speaking. I also want to check my grammar, and whether or not others understand what i am saying. Thanks :)
oneclbb   
Apr 10, 2014
Speeches / IELTS speaking - Describe a time when you helped someone [6]

Hi guys, this is speaking topic for IELTS. I think i made many mistakes on grammar and some sentences are does not make sense. Please correct my grammar and give me better ways to describe the sentence. I always thank to you.

Describe a time when you helped someone
- when was it
- who you helped him/her and why
and explain how you felt when/after you helped this person

3years ago, i stayed in the library till late night to prepare for final exam. While i was studying, i heard heavy rain sound. The rain seemed to be stronger, so i packed my things up to back home. Before i left the library, i spotted a blind standing in front of library entrance. I found out that she didn't have an umbrella. i asked her why are you standing here, and she said she is waiting till the rain is stopped. It was already late night so there was no one who could give her a helping hand beside me. Thus, i asked her address on the purpose of seeing her home. I shared my umbrella with her by her destination. Although It was about half an hour far from the library by walking and my all clothes and shoes got wet through, I felt good when she said " thanks" with her beautiful smile. Meanwhile, however, i feel a bit uncomfortable about it as she might not be happy with my kind if she thought that i pity on her. At the time i helped her, I should have considered and been careful about her feeling more. I thought give a hand to others is not that easy on the way home.
oneclbb   
Apr 10, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS: Solving the issues of growing traffic and pollution - Increase petrol price? [6]

Hi, i am preparing IELTS as well, my teacher said that answer the question is very important for IELTS writing. I think you just provide some solutions what the government should do instead of increasing petrol price, but you did not clearly answer the question.

I think you need to write proper examples to support your opinion and write the disadvantages increased just petrol price to reduce pollution and traffic.
oneclbb   
Apr 10, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 1: Underground railway systems; 'London has been the oldest' [6]

Hi, i am preparing IELTS exam as well. I am not at good english so i don't know whether my command is helpful or not. Hope it help.

I think it is better to describe six cities in your introduction. For example, the table compares the six cities in terms of their age, size and the number of people or passengers who.. (describe)

Good luck :)
oneclbb   
Apr 6, 2014
Writing Feedback / 'Advertisements make people feel like they are successful and special person' [7]

Hi all, this site is like a gift from GOD to me :). I am struggling with English, especially grammar but there is no one who can correct and modify my writing and grammar, and give me a feedback around me. But fortunately, i could find this site. I believe that this site is very helpful to improve my English skill. It would be appreciated it, if you edit my grammar and let me know better way to describe/ explain the sentence (improve grammar). :) Thanks for your help.

As a result of huge development of the mass media, people can hear many advertisements on TV, on radio, on the internet and in the newspaper. Even they can see advert on the public transportation and on the street. This means that people can be easily exposed by advertisement in their daily life. It cannot deny that advert has huge impact on people's mind about products both negatively and positively.

Many people say that advertising makes them to purchase unnecessary things. When people own the advertised products, they have a confidence as the possessions of well known products make them to feel like they are successful and special person. Also, product advertising makes people to believe that advertised merchandise have good qualities and functions so it works really well on them. When people succumb to these advertisements, they have impulsive buying. For example, women often rely on skin products advertising and they think the goods will help them to have a beautiful skin by removing all troubles on skin such as winkles and blemishes. In addition, diet product advertisement often attracts female's attention. They might trust that taking advertised diet goods assist to reduce a lot of weight in a short time and then make them good looking. Thus everyone buy more and more, thinking the products are necessary after they watch advertisement. Moreover, if there are big discounts on expensive products in advertisement, people purchase unplanned goods as they just do not want to miss the chance to get the goods at cheap price. Although the adverts are false and exaggerated, it does not matter to them. People easily mislead by advertisement and then buy products on impulse, and they purchase products which they do not really need to have when they see the advertisement. Therefore, I agree with the statement that advertising influence people to buy unnecessary goods.

It is true that advertisement makes our life better in some ways. However, I think that the advertisement has more impact on making people to buy things that they do not need.

this is incomplete writing as you can see, i just wrote the negative points. thanks.
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