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Apr 7, 2014

Writing Feedback / IELTS: more and more people are going to other countries for significant period [5]

Hello, everyone.
Thank you for reading my essay.: )

TOPIC: These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant period of time, either to find job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties

Over the last two or three decades, an increasing number of people tend to go abroad for their careers or education. As a result, starting a life in another country is becoming quite popular in our society. However, is this development positive, or are there more drawbacks than advantages? In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of living in a foreign country and try to draw some conclusions.

I will start by looking at the advantages. One of the major plus points of moving another country is the face that you could enjoy your new surroundings, and life seems like a holiday. Obviously, facing different customs it is extremely different to your home country.

Secondly, living in a foreign country for a while could help you to get some benefits in learning foreign languages. For example, if you take education in another country as a student, you will achieve next level of the foreign-language.

On the other hand, you could face some serious problems when you are in this situation. Such as, having a feeling of isolation due to communicating in a second language or a culture shock and the general cost of living and so on.

In conclusion, although it is clear that go to other countries face a range of problems, it is undoubtedly possible to start a life in there. You need to improve the positives of the better lifestyle father than the negatives of different languages and cultures. Personally, I believe the benefits in terms of personal growth eventually outweigh any drawbacks.

chaaaany

Apr 7, 2014

Writing Feedback / IELTS: E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, .. [4]

personally, I think you could write more in your conclusion. : )

chaaaany

Apr 7, 2014

Writing Feedback / These days, more and more people are going to another countries.IELTS [2]

Concurrently, taking a year out to live and study abroad is being popular among young adults. For many, it's a chance of new scenery and unforgettable life changing experience. Whereas, it consists of benefits and downsides of moving abroad. In this essay, I'll draw some reasons why the number of people who go abroad has increased dramatically and examples of drawbacks of it.

To initiate, one of the most advantages of living abroad is that people have a chance to mix with new friends from different culture backgrounds and learn how to cope with various unexpected life pressures. In addition, the new life exchanging experience enables to broaden your horizon that you start think differently in your society. Moreover, studying and living abroad provides your job prospects with high guarantee career because of effective international education.

On the other hand there are some disadvantages of abroad life that you can't receive any support from your friends and family because of dilemmas such as culture shock or homesickness. Furthermore, it's difficult to start afresh from scratch that people can't immerse to alien life condition for instance climate and native folk habits. To be more specific, oversea people differ from each other because of lifestyle and climate, hence it leads to feel more solitary. Moreover, language barrier is another major issue for all people who come from abroad, so most of students find it difficult to mix with regional language.

All things considered, the popularity of moving abroad is increasing significantly among young people because of effective study and good quality of life attractive ones. However, there is some downside of broad life period because of isolation and language barrier. Personally, I believe that the positive sides of moving abroad outcome the negative ones.

chaaaany

Apr 7, 2014

Writing Feedback / IELTS: Reading news in the internet or newspapers ? [5]

With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, reading news or information online is becoming more and more popular in our society. Meanwhile people tend to use the Internet everyday instead of reading in papers. Some people believe that reading in papers will be an old fashioned in the next decade. In my view, I only partly agree with this statement and I will show my opinion below.

To start with, a growing number of people believe that reading news on the Internet is quite effective. This is because they say it is easier than reading newspapers. People tend to use the Internet rather than newspapers. For example, if you want to search for some information, you will use your phone and click on some websites instead of reading papers. In addition, many people think that using the Internet is much more convenient. Moreover, they believe that reading something in papers is quite a waste of time, because they need to get it first then open it and read it. Therefore, today most people are more likely to read news online.

On the other hand, many people hold the view that reading newspapers are not only an old trend but also a wonderful trend. This is because they say it has been part of our society since the beginning of civilization. Moreover, spending too much time online is harmful to the human bodies. For instance, if you look at a screen for a long period of time, you could have eyes strain. Furthermore, avid readers are more likely to read newspapers, they want to touch it and have more objective.

To sum up, an increasing number of people are using the Internet quite often today, due to the advance functions. In my view, there are also some unforgettable points of reading newspapers. Human being always needed to share news, and papers are the way they have done it.