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Name: Anosha Hossain
Joined: May 20, 2014
Last Post: May 20, 2014
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From: Bangladesh
School: The city school intl

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Anosha29   
May 20, 2014
Undergraduate / COMMON APP - previous commendable experiences, activities [3]

Hey, I have another essay to write. I'll be glad for the reviews :)

I have to write on previous commendable experiences, any extra curricular activities you hope to pursue after you have entered the university and your plan after graduation from APU

In my high school years I have participated in science fairs. In my first science fair I did a project on benefits of remedies from natural resources (it was an individual project), example: honey, lemon, lavender oil, green tea etc. I have presented few natural remedies to demonstrate how those natural remedies work. For instance instead of using washing powder which contains harsh chemicals, they could be using mixture of coconut oil based soaps, lemon essential oil and vinegar to wash their cloths. I also notified my guest and my judge about the benefit of these natural remedies for our health. For example green tea increases metabolism, the polyphenol found in green tea works to intensify levels of fat oxidation and the rate at which one's body turns food into calories. I even gave out flyers to the quests and judges of different natural remedies and its usefulness. Even though I wasn't able to win any prizes that year, I have received overwhelming reviews from my teachers.

In my second science fair, my group and I did a project on chemical reaction of iron nail with copper sulphate reaction and with water. We had two nails and tubes, one filled with water and another with cooper sulphate. We robed the nails and dropped them in two tubes. After awhile a brown coating was formed on the surface of the iron nail and the color of copper sulphate solution changed blue to green. This reaction shows that iron is more reactive that cooper as it displace copper from its solution.

In my last year, my classmate and I did a presentation on natural disaster, about tsunamis, earthquakes, volcano explosions and devastating flood prepared. And how to prepare themselves and all the safety regulations if any of them ever have faces with those circumstances. Also I have participated in school competition for Mathematics and English. These events boost my confidence, as now I have no difficulty on cooperating with anyone I work with and able to present myself to the audience without any sort of nervousness.

I have attended several after school clubs such as sports club, chess club and played sports such as volleyball, football and basketball in and out of school. I do believe physical fitness is essential.

Back in 2008, I have volunteered for Lions Clubs International (LCI) which is a secular service organization. All the volunteers were taken to Cox's Bazaar to distribute warm clothes and food to the poor for the winter. We also did a presentation that how LCI organization dedicated to leadership development through community service. And I want to do more volunteer work in the future through Habitat APU.

Within my graduation I have desire to get a chance to work in a multinational company in Japan or where I get an opportunity as a chartered accountant or a financial analyst. Along with doing a job, I intend to do charity works to help developing countries such as mine Bangladesh and other African countries.
Anosha29   
May 20, 2014
Writing Feedback / Some people claim that technology advancement is a sign of human progress [4]

First you have to imply the advantages of technology in our life, not only in our daily life but also globally. You can search the net for it, or read some books about technological advancement then you processed by however and begin the disadvantages. Technology can easy our life but also drain it spiritually. For instance kids these days are not taken outside to play and instead they sit home and plays video game all day. As they're not attending or receiving any physical activities, they might be target of obesity. This is just one example you could arrange it better than I did and expand it, In conclusion what you really feel write about that, whether you stand for it or against it. However you have to proceed and give an explanation for you decision.
Anosha29   
May 20, 2014
Book Reports / Comparative essay on Hamlet / Various other Books [2]

You have found the difference between the stories, that's good. Try to hold onto to those difference. I can't tell you for certain, what'll come on you test. Another thing you could do is brainstorm the essay's major points. And try to remember them, therefore whatever you get on you test you'll be able to answer it.
Anosha29   
May 20, 2014
Undergraduate / Reasons why you wish to attend APU - STUDYING ABROAD [4]

Hey, I have written my college essay on the topic "Reasons why you wish to attend APU and how you intend to approach your studies with your first choice or college" and not quiet satisfied with it, I'll be glad to get some reviews.

University is a time for new and exciting experiences as well as a time to explore diverse and innovative ideas. What could be better than traveling to a foreign country to learn about their ideas, history, and culture? I believe study abroad is something that every college student should do to help avoid ethnocentrism, to expand their horizons, and to appreciate everything the world has to offer.

Japanese has a rich culture and well-known for their work and attitude ethics. Japan is also known to have one the safest environment and surfing through websites, Beppu is not only safe environment to live in but also an attractive city. As it is a tourist area there are plenty of job opportunities, besides studying I'll be able to work too by which I can cover my living expense as much as I possible, it'll be less burden to my family financially. I have always longed to go abroad for my further studies and going to APU, not only I'll be going aboard but also stay in my region. Learn more about the Asia region's markets and relation additionally international aspects too.

APU's multicultural environment caught my attention. Being able to live in Asia and still be connected with all types of different culture people from around the world. I think it will help me to assimilate other's culture and traditions and interact with people all around the world. It has international week where people not only can learn about different culture also can celebrate them. The most impressive trait is that I don't have to learn Japanese before I get there; therefore I won't be losing a year to learn a new language, I'll be learning it along I finish my course. And in the end of graduation I know an entire new language. Not only APU's multicultural environment interests me, but also the Japanese culture too.

Choosing a major is a hard decision that everyone has to tackle at some point of life. I have been engrossed in accounting and finance for a long time now. A survey shows that in Japan teaching of accounting and finance being firm-specific through comprehensive in-house training the Japanese system is in a better position to produce accountants capable of adapting accounting systems to the different work situations which result from technological changes and automation. Japan is known to be one the most technological advanced country; thus I assume that by studying in APU not only I'll be specialized in accounting and finance theoretically but also technological will give me greater advantage in the future. Japan also has top notch companies; it'd be a great privilege to get a chance to work in those multinational companies. APU has great lecturer from all around the world. Along

I think through APU I can achieve all my dreams and hopes.
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