Reasons why you wish to attend APU - STUDYING ABROAD

Hey, I have written my college essay on the topic "Reasons why you wish to attend APU and how you intend to approach your studies with your first choice or college" and not quiet satisfied with it, I'll be glad to get some reviews.

University is a time for new and exciting experiences as well as a time to explore diverse and innovative ideas. What could be better than traveling to a foreign country to learn about their ideas, history, and culture? I believe study abroad is something that every college student should do to help avoid ethnocentrism, to expand their horizons, and to appreciate everything the world has to offer.

Japanese has a rich culture and well-known for their work and attitude ethics. Japan is also known to have one the safest environment and surfing through websites, Beppu is not only safe environment to live in but also an attractive city. As it is a tourist area there are plenty of job opportunities, besides studying I'll be able to work too by which I can cover my living expense as much as I possible, it'll be less burden to my family financially. I have always longed to go abroad for my further studies and going to APU, not only I'll be going aboard but also stay in my region. Learn more about the Asia region's markets and relation additionally international aspects too.

APU's multicultural environment caught my attention. Being able to live in Asia and still be connected with all types of different culture people from around the world. I think it will help me to assimilate other's culture and traditions and interact with people all around the world. It has international week where people not only can learn about different culture also can celebrate them. The most impressive trait is that I don't have to learn Japanese before I get there; therefore I won't be losing a year to learn a new language, I'll be learning it along I finish my course. And in the end of graduation I know an entire new language. Not only APU's multicultural environment interests me, but also the Japanese culture too.

Choosing a major is a hard decision that everyone has to tackle at some point of life. I have been engrossed in accounting and finance for a long time now. A survey shows that in Japan teaching of accounting and finance being firm-specific through comprehensive in-house training the Japanese system is in a better position to produce accountants capable of adapting accounting systems to the different work situations which result from technological changes and automation. Japan is known to be one the most technological advanced country; thus I assume that by studying in APU not only I'll be specialized in accounting and finance theoretically but also technological will give me greater advantage in the future. Japan also has top notch companies; it'd be a great privilege to get a chance to work in those multinational companies. APU has great lecturer from all around the world. Along

I think through APU I can achieve all my dreams and hopes.

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Thank you so much. If you find anymore mistakes, please feel free to notify me. I'll be gratitude for your help :)

... I found some more fixes in what I suggested in my previous post.
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I always longed to continue my studies in a foreign university. Studying at APU would not only offer me that opportunity, but also would provide me with the flavor of regional exposure.

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