Writing Feedback / My pets - chicks; Yun Tai Mountain attractions [3]

Well, during the summer vacation in the year when I was 10, my parents and I went to Yun Tai Mountain that is one of famous tourist attractions in Henan Province.

On the last day of our trip, we went to the Souvenir Street where there were various kinds of souvenirs for visitors to select. My parents just bought some wood carvings that could represent local styles. For me, I bought 4 adorable chicks. You know, they were not the usual chicks that farmers raised in the farm but the one species of pheasant. By the way, they were not the national protected animals so they can be bought and raised as pets.

When we got home, I made a nest for them with cotton and hay in my yard. Everyday in the afternoon, I would go to the park that was not far away from my home to catch insects for them, sometimes, I also took them to the safe lawn where few stray cats played around and make them run freely. Days with them went by quickly and happily. Maybe it's hard to believe that they had accompanied me for 7 years, but they really did. You know, they got me through my secondary school and high school. In fact, they were not just my pets but my friends who heard a lot of secrets of me and saw my most secret faces. I always talked to them and they seemed to be able to understand me, like dogs.

So, I guess you can understand that how special and precious they were for me.

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