Writing Feedback / A lot of students from rural areas and poor families cannot go to school due to lack of money [3]

Today, society is striving to offer educational opportunities to everybody equally. Many people believe that charging students no money will be a good way to enhance education. I totally agree with this statement for several reasons.

Firstly, education is privilege of each individual. However, in reality, a lot of students from rural areas and poor families cannot go to school due to the fact that the institutional fees are unaffordable.. For example, in Vietnam, the candidates who get the highest score in the entrance examination to universities are majorly poor. After the examination, the fact is that many of them have refused to proceed university life because they do not have money to afford for the next following for years in cities. As a result, Vietnam has seen a huge loss in the number of talented people, who are the future decision-makers of country. If the distance between the rich and the poor is not the matter of college admissions, many students will be fostered to go to school without concern for money. Consequently, people who have enough qualifications can be disciplined in the professional environment of universities and in the future, when they are prosperous, they will devote their efforts to building up society more affluently.

Furthermore, there are some people who state that if students do not have the obligation to pay for their education, they are likely not to appreciate what they have. However, it is obvious that in present society, fees for students' study are not paid by them, but by their parents. I am from a rich family, and my parents choose the most expensive school for me to study. Nevertheless, as a disobedient teenagers, I hate going to school and have a liking for playing truants to live my interests such as photographing. Therefore, it would be better that instead of forcing people who have no desire for academic study to go to college, goverment should open vocational schools for them and admit the candidates who are competent for free universities.

In conclusion, money for university study should not be required because it has no relation to responsibility or appreciation of any students but the most special one to utilizing their ability equally regardless of their economic situations.

Writing Feedback / Does money go along with happiness? [3]

Happiness is a hard -to-define word, especially when it comes to the factors that create this term. One of those things is money. Many people consider it a pragmatic part, however, who can ensure the happiness of human beings without money?

First, 'No money' means 'pressure'. The poor often suffer from stress in their struggle with life than the others. They have to pay for things needed for standard life: tax, insurance, houses or even food with a question on their mind: 'What will I eat tomorrow?'. Besides, if they have adolescence in family, these children will perceive another somber scene. There are many statistics done showing that studying among rich students, these pitiful teenagers are likely to escape from peers, and live on their self-isolated-own. Little by little, they will be under the impression that they are completely unimportant, and hide in their cover regardless of outside society.

Moreover, not only haunted in mental systems, people lacking of money are forced to go down with diseases. Given that they are even reluctant to spend money buying things they need, they have little exposure to nutritional food. Besides, most of the poor's houses do not meet the requirement of a good living condition. They tend to be dank, dirty, and full of viruses which could be an ideal for diseases to outbreak. As a result, the chances are that the poor are the first to be infected. Under the luxury of treatment of hospitals, they become much poorer, especially if that disease turns to be terminal such cancers. Spending more money, getting less healthy, happiness is impossible to be born in minds.

In conclusion, money partly contributes to the happiness of our life. I believe without money, happiness merely means 'happy-less'.

Writing Feedback / Puppy love should be agreed or not? [2]

Puppy love

Love is a lifelong word, directly or indirectly, reminding us of each milestone we have suffered from no matter which stage we are: an infant, a juvenile, an adult. There always exists a link bridging the gap between those stages; it is puppy love. As far as I am concerned, people are still wondering whether this kind of love should be advocated or not. However, I hold a strong belief that puppy love has had a great deal of sufficient impact on our upbringing.

Initially, puppy love plays a crucial role in completing our personalities. In progress of this love, teenagers tend to be in high spirits due to the first feeling of love and being loved. They begin to take care of each other as well as show their best sides so that they are likely to conquer the heart of their "other half". For instance, a boy who has a habit of being unpunctual will try to get up on time, dress up trimly in order to abolish his slovenliness in one's blue eyes. In turn for the improvement in conscience of the boy, a girl in puppy, in all probabilities, becomes more feminine, fathoms other's feeling. As a result, these changes will remain in adult life as well as forever after naturally.

In the second place, puppy love provides us with indispensible lessons nurturing our life experience. Some people say that this kind of love merely lasts in a short period of time, which puts people under the impression that love is a ruthless game, worthless being deep down to. Nevertheless, the truth is partly in contrast with the above statement. Love in juvenile is the freshest one irregardless of any fallacious profits. An hard-working girl in puppy love will help lend her lover a hand to solve assignment with no "contract", while in the "adult love", some girls are in favor of being stick to a rich man in order to rely on his prosperity in the future. Therefore, what they could learn from love-at-high-school how to give and receive unconditionally. Although the fact about time limit could be right, however, what is going to evaporate is what we appreciate most, especially when some people were utter innocent at the teen-age; which reminds them in the modern life full of chaos that how they used to be in the past so that they consider it a precious gift from the heaven.

In conclusion, puppy love is a controversial issue. No matter how it features in our life, it cannot be denied that this love contributes to our life memories some unforgettable pages about what we are today.