Writing Feedback / TOEFL ESSAY - center for business vs agriculture (farming) research choice [3]

A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.

There are some developing countries that they need new invents for their effectively improving. My country is also a developing country. There are some fields of it that need very big researches. If there will be a university that wants to improve a research center in my country I would recommend a agriculture research center for my country. I have some reasons for it.

Firstly, my country is an agriculture country. It has enough resources for it. I mean resources of climate, so many workers and enough ground that required for successful agriculture development. Moreover there are already enough farms but they don't work very well. They can't product enough goods because of they haven't working techniques. They can't manage affects of climate; they haven't successful watering techniques and so on. Therefore it needs a research center which will research and gives some effectively techniques for improving this field.

Secondly, there are more opportunities that can also cause improving of business. For example, if it improves it will need some other companies that can support it with professional workers, with machines, and can transfer, can keep and can sell goods. Moreover, after improving agriculture sector employees of this sector will cause rising of demand and it will cause improving other fields and there will appear new business opportunities.

As a conclusion if there will be a university which wants to develop a research center in my country I would offer an agriculture research center. Because there are more opportunities to improve this field and if it improves it will cause improving business in the country.

Writing Feedback / Do you agree or disagree? People should read only real books. [5]

There are so many books that write about fictional events or persons. I think that all of these aren't beneficial for people. Everyone should to read about more realistic books. I can prove my idea by some reasons.

Firstly, realistic books teach us more about real life situations. Because in these we can find any life situation. Every author of these books tries to criticize each of life events by their own methods. So we can learn about life from these books. Because they not only show us real life situations but also give us chance to see these situations by eyes of professionals, educated persons. So we can see thinks of specialists who can clarify all of these events by specific way.

Secondly these books help us to be more realistic. Nowadays most of people live with wishes. Some of them don't care about their surrounding, their position in society. These kinds of books can help them to be more realistic. People can learn more from these books about don't take bigger aims than their potential, don't wish about unreal events.

As a conclusion people should to read that kind of books which can teach them more about life. So they can make it one of their instruments that help to improve their personality.

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