Consular
Sep 27, 2014
Consular
Sep 27, 2014
Letters / Director's admission letter to an International student> [7]
To Whom It May Concern:
As the Consular of Pioneer High School and a Director of Bizerte 2022 Non-profit Organization, I had the opportunity to work with some of the best community volunteer students. One of them is Med Anouar who, after having known him for the past two years, proved to be a studious, hard-working, and responsible member of our organization and high school. So I was more than happy to assist him in his quest for admission to your university. I recommend him for undergraduate studies there based upon many reasons.
Med Anouar is a dedicated member of the organization. He donates countless hours and energy to the organization. He has not only worked with members but also helped to implement plans and programs such as charity campaigns that include raising funds to help the poor and the sick. He think that voluntary work enrich the lives of those around him when it comes to the needy and broadens people's involvement in community services when it comes to the wealthy. Med Anouar's leadership and hard-work have been invaluable to organization's programs, most of which have been started from the ground up. He organized plenty of events, in collaboration with other organizations and clubs: call entrepreneurs, officials and youth to participate in the community. He insists that the collaborated hard work has the final say in life.
His wisdom and foresight has helped him resolve many issues within the community that our organization assists. One of these events sticks out particularly for me because it showed his wisdom, foresight, and ability to be a negotiator, early, at the age of fifteen. He brought an end to the school aged violence caused regionalism of the students whom we were tutoring in Tunisia by having them sit down for a meeting. It was at this meeting where he explained to all the parties concerned about what makes us all Tunisian, regardless of our skin color, race, or ethnicity. He managed to uproot the eternal tearing conflict between social-classes. He encouraged them not to use bullets but instead learn to discuss and compromise. He handled the meeting with such initiative and confidence that I knew I was talking to a born leader and I have yet to come across another young member of our organization who can rival him on those terms. He remains one of the bravest students that I ever come across with them during my 30-year career.
In my opinion, Med Anouar's unwavering devotion to his community exemplifies strong moral fiber and character. That is why I am giving him my strongest recommendation for acceptance to your college. As he graduates high school, I and all of High School staff are so sad to see him go, but realize that he is destined to affect great things far beyond the narrow confines of a small town.
To Whom It May Concern:
As the Consular of Pioneer High School and a Director of Bizerte 2022 Non-profit Organization, I had the opportunity to work with some of the best community volunteer students. One of them is Med Anouar who, after having known him for the past two years, proved to be a studious, hard-working, and responsible member of our organization and high school. So I was more than happy to assist him in his quest for admission to your university. I recommend him for undergraduate studies there based upon many reasons.
Med Anouar is a dedicated member of the organization. He donates countless hours and energy to the organization. He has not only worked with members but also helped to implement plans and programs such as charity campaigns that include raising funds to help the poor and the sick. He think that voluntary work enrich the lives of those around him when it comes to the needy and broadens people's involvement in community services when it comes to the wealthy. Med Anouar's leadership and hard-work have been invaluable to organization's programs, most of which have been started from the ground up. He organized plenty of events, in collaboration with other organizations and clubs: call entrepreneurs, officials and youth to participate in the community. He insists that the collaborated hard work has the final say in life.
His wisdom and foresight has helped him resolve many issues within the community that our organization assists. One of these events sticks out particularly for me because it showed his wisdom, foresight, and ability to be a negotiator, early, at the age of fifteen. He brought an end to the school aged violence caused regionalism of the students whom we were tutoring in Tunisia by having them sit down for a meeting. It was at this meeting where he explained to all the parties concerned about what makes us all Tunisian, regardless of our skin color, race, or ethnicity. He managed to uproot the eternal tearing conflict between social-classes. He encouraged them not to use bullets but instead learn to discuss and compromise. He handled the meeting with such initiative and confidence that I knew I was talking to a born leader and I have yet to come across another young member of our organization who can rival him on those terms. He remains one of the bravest students that I ever come across with them during my 30-year career.
In my opinion, Med Anouar's unwavering devotion to his community exemplifies strong moral fiber and character. That is why I am giving him my strongest recommendation for acceptance to your college. As he graduates high school, I and all of High School staff are so sad to see him go, but realize that he is destined to affect great things far beyond the narrow confines of a small town.
Consular
Sep 20, 2014
Writing Feedback / TOEFL: excellent knowledge is better than ability to adopt oneself. [4]
The organization of the essay is good but to make it clear I think that arguments should be longer I mean you need more analysis to touch the goal of the essay.
The organization of the essay is good but to make it clear I think that arguments should be longer I mean you need more analysis to touch the goal of the essay.
Consular
Sep 14, 2014
Letters / Professor is asking to recommend an International student via common Application - College [14]
Thank you I understand now.
Thank you I understand now.
Consular
Sep 14, 2014
Letters / Director's admission letter to an International student> [7]
I would be glad if you correct my letter (I am a director and a non US citizen)
To Whom It May Concern:
As the Director of High school and a Director of a Non-profit Organization, I have the opportunity to contact with both community volunteers and Students. I consider xxx to be one of the most studious, hard-working and responsible members of our organization as well as one of the best in High School. After two years, I have come to know him with two perspectives and would like to recommend him as a candidate for your undergraduate Studies.
xxx brings value everywhere:
xxx a dedicated member of the Organization. He donates countless hours and energy to the Organization. He has not only worked with members of the Organization but also helped to implement plans and programs that will enrich the lives of those around him and broadens people's involvement in community services. xxx's leadership and technical skills have been invaluable to Organization's programs, most of which have been started from the ground up.
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I would be glad if you correct my letter (I am a director and a non US citizen)
To Whom It May Concern:
As the Director of High school and a Director of a Non-profit Organization, I have the opportunity to contact with both community volunteers and Students. I consider xxx to be one of the most studious, hard-working and responsible members of our organization as well as one of the best in High School. After two years, I have come to know him with two perspectives and would like to recommend him as a candidate for your undergraduate Studies.
xxx brings value everywhere:
xxx a dedicated member of the Organization. He donates countless hours and energy to the Organization. He has not only worked with members of the Organization but also helped to implement plans and programs that will enrich the lives of those around him and broadens people's involvement in community services. xxx's leadership and technical skills have been invaluable to Organization's programs, most of which have been started from the ground up.
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Consular
Sep 14, 2014
Undergraduate / not many opportunities for women to get education - college essay [4]
Personally,I don't get the meaning of your essay.I know that english is not your first english that's why you must first write the letter with your native language in order to built a strong focus the main points that you will talk about.Unless, this essay will not add to your admission.
Personally,I don't get the meaning of your essay.I know that english is not your first english that's why you must first write the letter with your native language in order to built a strong focus the main points that you will talk about.Unless, this essay will not add to your admission.
Consular
Sep 14, 2014
Undergraduate / "For the Love of Physics" / "Creativity" - favorite books, poems, authors, films, plays, music... [4]
Since all the correction have been made, I just want to add that if you include another piece of writting to boost your essay.
Since all the correction have been made, I just want to add that if you include another piece of writting to boost your essay.
Consular
Sep 14, 2014
Student Talk / Suggestions for getting recorded interviews transcribed [6]
I think you just go to an official translator like AMIDEAST in Middle East so that they translate the transcript and give you a GPA out of 20 I guess.
I think you just go to an official translator like AMIDEAST in Middle East so that they translate the transcript and give you a GPA out of 20 I guess.
Consular
Sep 10, 2014
Student Talk / Suggestions for getting recorded interviews transcribed [6]
thanks but how can I contact Admission office
what if the transcript is with a foreign language? How can I do this task without hurting his admission?
thanks but how can I contact Admission office
what if the transcript is with a foreign language? How can I do this task without hurting his admission?
Consular
Sep 10, 2014
Student Talk / Suggestions for getting recorded interviews transcribed [6]
I am asked to send official transcript for an International student - how can I deal with that ?
Hi I am a school director and I am asked to send offical transcript for an International student
how can I deal with that ?
In our country we do not use GPA? how can I get or do this transcript !!!
Please help me!!
I am asked to send official transcript for an International student - how can I deal with that ?
Hi I am a school director and I am asked to send offical transcript for an International student
how can I deal with that ?
In our country we do not use GPA? how can I get or do this transcript !!!
Please help me!!
