Undergraduate / the children full of hope (COMMON APP ESSAY) [6]

Great essay, thanks for sharing here I had never found any correction, I love the way that you had written.

Writing Feedback / This essay is going to explain the pros and cons of learning a foreign language at primary school [6]

Read your article, I found many words that you had selected is very long so instead of that try to frame your sentences with some small words that captures a 2-3 words in 1 words.

Writing Feedback / I strongly believe that primary school is the best time for children to learn a foreign language [2]

Try to make your paragraph more accurate by replacing it with proper word formations.

Writing Feedback / IELTS: Young people are not fit for key roles until they are well-trained and mature enough [5]

Yes, passive form is better to be used for an academic writing.

Letters / 'Why? It is the question of a child'; motivation letter for a Master in Material Science [3]

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Essays / Help in choosing a topic for Thesis in marketing. [3]

Most of the people who are doing graduation are getting assignments, for this students are getting a particular topic in which they have to do a research for completing their assignment. For these there are many thesis marketing topic. I would like to suggest you some ideas to select the topic of thesis in Marketing:-

Brand Identity and Foreign Language
Branding and consumer behavior
Repositioning fresh fruit sales within Tesco; A marketing approach
Developing new prices strategies for independent retailers in a period of fuel-based inflation.
May the above topic will help you. :)

Essays / write a "story" - should I literally just talk about everything I'm involved in? UT AUSTIN [3]

I am new in writing and I just join this forum to learn the learning for writings, It is really great experience for me to write any story and essay. I will write some lines for this topic but cant write the whole story because for it I have to put lots of effort.

Essays / 'just completed my Bachelors with honors in Electronics' - SOP for MS Computer Engineering [4]

There are many academic institution who are giving coaching and tuition in writing SOP on fresh bases. If you have dedications to learn this then it will not be difficult task for you to learn the technique of writing SOP.

Essays / Essay for joining the Navy [5]

Its better if you will take the help of any essay writing services and websites who will gave you the best suggestions to you or give you the best samples of essay.

Grammar, Usage / Another way to paraphrase the word "tuition" in "tuition fee" [5]

There are having many ways to paraphrase the word tuition fee, you can use the synonyms of tuition or fees to paraphrase it. To learn English or to learn about the writing skill there are so many ways so that you can practice about writing skill. Daily writing few lines or paragraph and search your mistakes there, then it can be very easy for you to learn the skills of writing.