Speeches / English language status in your country and note making for students good academics performance [2]

I am trying to improve my discuss/explain skills. While trying these are what I came up with. Any review/suggestion/how to improve/error?

Topic: explain the reason for the high status the English language has enjoyed in your country.
In this era of globalisation, where most parts of the world use English as a medium of communication and international relationship. My country like every other countries do not want to be left out of this rapid globalisation and transformation. My country wants to have a say in the world global market where English is widely regarded.

In conclusion, English has been enjoying high status in my country because it is our adopted language and it well regarded through the world.

Topic: note making/taking is a prerequisite for a good academics performance of students in tertiary institution.
Human brain is capable of holding slightest information but when information are not noted it becomes waste. In a tertiary institution atmosphere where lecturers dictate information, students end up assimilating little of the information being passed. Making note would give the students the opportunity to discover information that were mistakenly omitted by the lecturer or the ones they missed while the lecturer was dictating.

Making note gives opportunity to better review, further review and create a better atmosphere for study.

-E. Adeyemi

Research Papers / Agbado, an outskirts of Lagos [2]

Prompt: describe the environment you're raise, community, house, family etc and how it contributed to who you're.

Did I answered the prompt? Any error?

Agbado Ijaiye, a community commonly referred to as an outskirts of Lagos. The community has limited resources, no accessible public library, no well funded public school and academics enhancing programs. My school is either with no well equipped laboratory, no library for students to have access to academics materials and there is no reading room for students to study during leisure time.