Undergraduate / UNC ESSAY: A MICROMOMENT OF CONNECTION (400 WORDS) help [4]

UNC Professor Barbara Fredrickson - an expert in positive emotions - has defined love as "micro-moments of connection between people, even strangers." Tell us about a time when you experienced a "micro-moment of connection." What did you learn?

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I was probably eight or nine years old at the time, it was the first time I had every traveled on an airplane or even out of the country. I headed to Colombia, South America to a place so unique from anything I had yet experienced. It was four hours out of the two months I spent there, visiting relatives I did not know existed, that I experienced one of these "micro-moments of connection".

I spent four hours at a catholic school for girls; this experience affected me in a way that I did not understand at the time. The school in general was run down. There was not even a cafeteria! Just small concession stands where the students could buy their food, and those who could not afford it had to starve until returning home. This was so different from our schools in North Carolina. I remember thinking, as a naïve eight year old would, why the school could not just give out its food free.

After touring the school my sister and I walked outside to where our aunt was waiting with huge plastic bags full of clothing for the girls. As soon as we walked back holding the bags, too big for our arms, kisses, hugs and blessings bombarded us. My English teacher once said, "You need at least twelve touches a day to feel loved". Well on this day I felt more than love, I truly felt connected to these girls in a way that as an eight year old I never had. The students became alive saying that we were their favorite people in the world, that they loved us, that we were their saviors. All we had done was bring in clothes for them, their reaction made me feel like I could change their lives.

This experience is one of the most positive moments in my life. When I was younger this moment was what I considered the best part of the trip, now I see that not only was it one of the best moments but it is something that I can take with me for the rest of my life. I found out that something that I thought was small could change someone's day, his or her week, and maybe even his or her life. After this revelation it has lead me to understand and connect with people. I try to help anyone, by maybe holding the door, complementing someone, or just simply hearing what someone has to say. Doing this has taught me that doing the simplest things can change someone's mood for the better. This is the reason I want to major in political science; so I can one day help those who cannot help themselves.

Undergraduate / 250 WORD ESSAY: AN ELABORATION OF AN EXTRA CURRICULAR ACTIVITY- FEMINIST CLUB [2]

this is just a quick short answer about an extra curricular activity i did really quick, any comments or suggestions are accepted.

Feminist Club is an organization recently created at R.J. Reynolds High School. The club initially received a lot of repercussion from students and teachers alike who were ignorant to what feminism is. Although, these situations happened the group persevered. The club did whatever it could to get our message out to the community. Throughout the year, we collected old clothing then donated it to the local battered woman's shelter. Another activity we did was sell food with a 25-cent higher price difference for men, to simulate the wage gap. The members and I posted flyers around the school with statistics about gender gaps. All of these things educates the students and staff alike. This year not only more students joined but men as well as women. It truly feels amazing to know that we are making a difference in the lives of women and in our community. I want to continue changing things that will not only better our society but also the lives of everyday people. This is the reason I aspire to study political science, so I can one day help those who cannot help themselves.