Posts by Ridma

Ridma

Jun 9, 2015

Writing Feedback / Pretty, attractive girl with great voice - we spend a lot of time together. Best friend paragraph. [6]

linhdemon- I'll try to correct this.
I had many friends during twelve years spam in my school. Ryan was my best friend among these friends. We acquainted each other at the primary school. At first glance , I felt that she is very pretty and attractive.We went school every day together. Not only that but also, we went shopping and watched ghost films together.Those days were the happiest in my life.Moreover, her voice is very sweet and beautiful, so she used to sing for me when my mood is bad. Her singing always appease me. In addition to that she advises me and stand by me when I am in trouble or difficulties. she advises me what is wrong,what is right, what should do and what should not do. Gradually I realised that she is a very important character in my life.I just want to say her "Ryan, you are the greatest friend that I me in my life.

Ridma

Jun 9, 2015

Writing Feedback / PEOPLE GET A JOB - it's a necessity in everyone's life [4]

aseprudi- let me express my idea regarding the first para

Obtaining a recognisable job is a main aim of human life. Selection of a occupation is a personal matter and pathways to getting jobs are depend on the qualification of particular job. There is a belief that the university education is compulsory to get a good job while others argue that work experiences will be more helpful for that.

I personally believe that starting work just after leaving of school do not assure getting of well paid job.

Ridma

Jun 9, 2015

Writing Feedback / Good and bad impact of having a lot of TV channels [4]

Thank you very much.

Ridma

Jun 8, 2015

Writing Feedback / Good and bad impact of having a lot of TV channels [4]

Some people say that having a lot of TV channels is good, while others argue that it reduces the quality of programmes. Discuss the both views and give your own opinion.

With the wide advancement of information technology, media also have been developing similarly. Among these electronic media televisions have gained big improvement and as a result of that a lot of TV channels are launched frequently. There are several disputes regarding having many TV channels as some are seen it positively while others think it reduces the quality of programmes.

Firstly, there are variety of TV channels such as commercial TV channels, educational TV channels like "Discovery" and sports TV channels like CSN. Having these TV channels are provided great selection of programmes to people. On the other hand, if they missed programmes like news from one channel, they can watch it another. Moreover lot of programmes and news are telecast by these channels with a great variety. Hence, people can gain vast amount of information and great deal of entertainment. Furthermore, a plenty of job opportunities are supplied through these channels and a lot of artists can present their creations conveniently than earlier.

Every coin has two sides, so in this case there are advantages as well as dis advantages too. The big competition between these channels is compelled to telecast any kind of programmes that can attract more spectators. Moreover, these channels are aimed commercial purposes in great extent. For instance, in Sri Lanka, lot of channels are telecast mega teledrammas and other recreational programmes of foreign countries without thinking impact on local culture and the system.They give job opportunities for less experienced people as necessity of big crew to run channels. A lot of commercial breaks are added during programmes and it harms not only for continuous flow of programmes but also enjoyment of viewers.

According to aforementioned facts, there are both positive and negative influences in having several number of TV channels. My personal view is that enforcing censorship laws reasonably and taxes, governments can control quality of TV programmes. In addition to that people also have responsibility to refuse unquality programmes.