Undergraduate / Being a Korean immigrant - ApplyTexas Essay Topic A [3]

Hi,I am just trying to give some corrections. I hope i could help

American who was very generous to teach me about American culture, like the way people talk and express their emotions. I gradually met other friends to talk with, and I felt likeI was slow in assimilating the culture

But over all, i love your experience, it was also happened to me

Undergraduate / Windows on Williams - My Neighborhood and its impact [5]

Hi,

I think it would be better
I will study for endless time and go to get an education for years just to have a better life for us

Graduate / "The best way to predict future is to create it" - SOP fr MS in Power systems [2]

Hi,

The research interests of the faculty are extremely compatible with those of mine as some of the faculty members are pioneering people in their fields

I think using 'expertise' would be better than 'fields' because it sounds more academic.

Thanks,