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Name: Kurnia Fia Marshanda
Joined: Sep 1, 2015
Last Post: Dec 31, 2015
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School: Sebelas Maret University

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Fia0910   
Dec 28, 2015
Writing Feedback / Technique of using ICT for young learner [3]

Hello, please help me to check my essay for my final exam,

Information and communication technology or ICT are a combination of the hardware and software designed to implement information processes, through the utilization of the computers and network technologies. Technology can also be an effective media for teachers to get reference for their learning. There are two techniques for teachers using ICT to teach English for young learner.

The first technique is illustrative. The illustrative could enhance by using multimedia, such as video, audio, or picture. Because when teacher use multimedia, the student will attracted to notice the lesson and they more easily to get the information, because they will remember the picture or the sound.

The second technique is perceptive. Perceptive is ability to understand a student needs and interest. Because teacher has to understand what their student interest, it will more helpful for teacher to give a material. Such as if the student likes a stories, teacher can play a digital story. By playing a digital story student will attracted to listen to the story, it also useful to improve their listening skill.

From those techniques that ICT is useful for teachers to teach their student.
Fia0910   
Dec 28, 2015
Graduate / This is my personal statement of purpose for graduate admission with Information technology [4]

And Moreover, with strong support from my parents ...
And In addition, it was during my Undergraduate years ...
The project is designed to have two planes...
which are so as important in today's world as we shall ...
... problems related to testing and debugging a software
If I am given gave the chance of joining your university...
Fia0910   
Dec 18, 2015
Writing Feedback / The skills that we can improve from Facebook [8]

ahh sorry,
how about this

Facebook is one of media social where the users can connect with other people in the world. They use Facebook because it is not only for connecting with other people, but also can be a media of learning English. Facebook can help to improve the English skills of English second learner. There are three skills that we can improve from Facebook.
Fia0910   
Dec 17, 2015
Writing Feedback / The skills that we can improve from Facebook [8]

this is my other essay, please help me to correct my essay

English is one of many languages in the world. English is very important because English is already become an international language. Because of it all of countries as English lesson which have to learn. There are many ways to learn English, for example from Facebook. Facebook is believed can help to improve the English skills of English second learner. There are three skills that we can improve from Facebook.

Facebook can improve writing skills. Facebook is one of media social where the users can connect with other people in the world. From Facebook we can improve our skills by chatting and make a group of learning English. The skills that we can improve is writing skills, because by chatting with other users, especially the foreign users that use English language, we can discuss about something or share our story with them and of course we will use English to talk with them. By make a group of learning English we can also improve our writing skills, because from group we can share information or get new information. In group we can discuss about our work and let the other users to correct our grammar or give a feedback to us, so we can learn about our weaknesses. In group we also find the others work, we can try to help them.

Facebook can improve comprehension skills. From Facebook we will find many fanpages which is we can like to get information from it. Fanpage we can improve our comprehension skills, because from them we can read a information that they share in fanpage, however they just give a link and caption it make us curious to click the link and read, so it is helpful for us to improve our comprehension skills, and also it helpful to increase our vocabulary.

Finally, Facebook can improve speaking skills. From Facebook we can improve our speaking skills by using video call. From video call we can talk our foreign users, it can helpful to improve our speaking skills, because we can learn how to say something without dictionary and try to think fast.

From those, we can use Facebook as a media of study. As we know that Facebook is very familiar to people in the world. We can get the benefits of Facebook to improve our skills of English.
Fia0910   
Dec 17, 2015
Graduate / Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view - Family or Friends? [3]

It is hard to answer at this question because everyone isEvery persons are different or has their own personality,
On the whole, enjoying with friends or in a family has the same importance.

The greatest advantage of living in a with family is to have help when there are problems about health or financial problems.

Because family's ties are is forever
Fia0910   
Dec 12, 2015
Essays / Introduction about technology which can improve English skills [10]

how about this, i complete my essay

How YouTube and English discussion forum can improve our English skills
Nowadays internet is very common for people. People can easily access internet for free language tutorials through websites such as YouTube and English discussion forum. Thus, it is believed that technology can help to improve the English skills especially for English second learner. How can YouTube and English discussion forums improve English skills? There are number of reasons that I will be discussing within this essay.

The first is YouTube can improve listening skills. YouTube is a video sharing website that users can watch or upload a video. From YouTube we can improve our English skills by watching the videos, especially videos with English language. The skills that we can improve is our listening skills, because by watching videos we are not only watch a video, but we also listen the audio, so that is very useful.

The second is English discussion forum can improve your writing and reading skills. English discussion forum is a group that we can discuss about English. In English discussion forum there are many users from other countries, so we can share information there or we can get new information from there. In English discussion forum we can improve our writing skills, because we can ask someone to check our work, then someone will correct our grammar error or someone will give us a feedback about our work, so we can understand about our weaknesses. From English discussion forum we also can improve our reading skills, because in that forum we will find the other works, so we can read and try to understand about their work and try help them. So it would be useful to improve the reading skills. In English discussion forum we are also can improve our vocabulary, because if there are many words that we do not understand, we can search it in our dictionary then our vocabulary will increase.

From those we know that internet is useful for us as an English second learner to improve our English.
Fia0910   
Dec 12, 2015
Essays / Introduction about technology which can improve English skills [10]

hai, i am a student of English Diploma Program, i have an assignment to write an essay about technology can improve English skills, but i think i have a problem with my introduction, please help me

this is my introduction:

"Nowadays internet is very common for people. They use internet to search articles, watch videos in youtube, or have a dicussion in forum group. Internet also can used to improve English skills trough youtube and English forum. How can Youtube and English forum improve English skills?"
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