ntlinh
Jan 29, 2016
Undergraduate / TAMK UAS - I want to become an Energy & Environmental [6]
Dear EF_Kevin and Vangiespen,
Thank you so much for your correction. I have rewrite the letter based on your suggestion. Please help me to take a look at this. This is still a draft, not final one.
When I was beginning a new life as a high school student, my mother always asked me about what subject I like to study or what job I wanted to do in my future career. One day I unexpectedly slipped one page of newspaper and read that a farmer invented a new source of energy from sesame. People complimented him on the first page but it seemed no further action was taken. I asked my mother the reason why they did not bring this achievement into industrial production. She said: "This must be done by young generation engineer like you." Maybe that time she only joked but a thought appeared in my mind: "WHY NOT?"
I started to study about what an engineer do in environmental industry. I found that being an environmental engineer, I would be able to construct project for developing new sources for renewable energy, as well as carry out environmental sampling and analysis. Thus, I decided to take Energy and Environmental Engineering as my future career.
For quite a time I have been searching for universities and have found that Finland is the place where my dream will be carried out. Finland is one the leading users of renewable energy in EU and in the near future this area will continue to grow as a global industrial sector.
After deciding to go to Finland, I made a plan what I needed to do in high school for preparing before university. First is learning English. Six years studied in International schools had given me a better foundation in English, however, I still found difficulties to speak confidential in front of foreigners. I then asked my mother to help me by letting me accompany her in some business trips with her customer to practice my speaking in daily conversation. I started to watch all English movie and read English newspaper. It was not easy task at the beginning since not all the actors were from England or USA. I also watched Discovery and National Geography Channel to improve my vocabulary in Engineering and Environmental for future study.
During practicing English, I also made a plan for Math and Physic studying. I registered for Natural Science category in High School and passed the entrance exam to go to the "Physic with Advance English" class. Side by side taking the extra-class after school, I joined in different industrial trips in hydroelectric power plant and thermal power station to go inside the structure and operation process for my coursework projects. What I had learned was not much, but it was given me a clearer sight what I will study and made me eager to experience the working environment during university.
My hardworking have been partially rewarded, I have achieved IELTS 6.5 in summer 2015. "Nothing is really over until the moment you stop trying!" This result is just a beginning. English is a global language and an essential tool to bring me to the world and I will continue to study, not only for the entrance exam but for my future knowledge, despite where I will study. I am now able to confidentially say that I have been well prepared to prove that I have passion and ability to become one of Tampere students.
I am not only going to Finland for studying, but also to achieve advanced knowledge and skills for working towards my personal career goals and international training experience. By applying to Tampere UAS, I will have an opportunity to study in multicultural and multilanguage environment with high modern system university. Furthermore, I will also have a chance to gain a double degree in Germany with good academic performance.
In a nutshell, all the above reasons lead to the fact that I am eager to join in Tampere UAS. It will provide me with a solid start in life so I will be able to make a first step in the way of becoming an Environmental Engineer.
Thank you again.
Tuan Tran
Dear EF_Kevin and Vangiespen,
Thank you so much for your correction. I have rewrite the letter based on your suggestion. Please help me to take a look at this. This is still a draft, not final one.
When I was beginning a new life as a high school student, my mother always asked me about what subject I like to study or what job I wanted to do in my future career. One day I unexpectedly slipped one page of newspaper and read that a farmer invented a new source of energy from sesame. People complimented him on the first page but it seemed no further action was taken. I asked my mother the reason why they did not bring this achievement into industrial production. She said: "This must be done by young generation engineer like you." Maybe that time she only joked but a thought appeared in my mind: "WHY NOT?"
I started to study about what an engineer do in environmental industry. I found that being an environmental engineer, I would be able to construct project for developing new sources for renewable energy, as well as carry out environmental sampling and analysis. Thus, I decided to take Energy and Environmental Engineering as my future career.
For quite a time I have been searching for universities and have found that Finland is the place where my dream will be carried out. Finland is one the leading users of renewable energy in EU and in the near future this area will continue to grow as a global industrial sector.
After deciding to go to Finland, I made a plan what I needed to do in high school for preparing before university. First is learning English. Six years studied in International schools had given me a better foundation in English, however, I still found difficulties to speak confidential in front of foreigners. I then asked my mother to help me by letting me accompany her in some business trips with her customer to practice my speaking in daily conversation. I started to watch all English movie and read English newspaper. It was not easy task at the beginning since not all the actors were from England or USA. I also watched Discovery and National Geography Channel to improve my vocabulary in Engineering and Environmental for future study.
During practicing English, I also made a plan for Math and Physic studying. I registered for Natural Science category in High School and passed the entrance exam to go to the "Physic with Advance English" class. Side by side taking the extra-class after school, I joined in different industrial trips in hydroelectric power plant and thermal power station to go inside the structure and operation process for my coursework projects. What I had learned was not much, but it was given me a clearer sight what I will study and made me eager to experience the working environment during university.
My hardworking have been partially rewarded, I have achieved IELTS 6.5 in summer 2015. "Nothing is really over until the moment you stop trying!" This result is just a beginning. English is a global language and an essential tool to bring me to the world and I will continue to study, not only for the entrance exam but for my future knowledge, despite where I will study. I am now able to confidentially say that I have been well prepared to prove that I have passion and ability to become one of Tampere students.
I am not only going to Finland for studying, but also to achieve advanced knowledge and skills for working towards my personal career goals and international training experience. By applying to Tampere UAS, I will have an opportunity to study in multicultural and multilanguage environment with high modern system university. Furthermore, I will also have a chance to gain a double degree in Germany with good academic performance.
In a nutshell, all the above reasons lead to the fact that I am eager to join in Tampere UAS. It will provide me with a solid start in life so I will be able to make a first step in the way of becoming an Environmental Engineer.
Thank you again.
Tuan Tran