thaobui1907
Feb 22, 2016
Writing Feedback / Teenagers should obtain more life skills which will be useful in the real world - IELTS [2]
Honestly, it is become valuable if students work in community service.
I think you should avoid using the same words as what they used.
... skill which connecting in many job fields or university majority. Yet, seldom of schools are is serving to improve students life skill.
Teenager students should be introduced with give by giving them opportunities how to communicate with each other in the work or solve some issues together. (I think this is not a good sentence)
However, secondary-education students must be understand about responsibilities when their be a part of group to finishing some job.
Honestly, it is become valuable if students work in community service.
I think you should avoid using the same words as what they used.
... skill which connecting in many job fields or university majority. Yet, seldom of schools are is serving to improve students life skill.
Teenager students should be introduced with give by giving them opportunities how to communicate with each other in the work or solve some issues together. (I think this is not a good sentence)
However, secondary-education students must be understand about responsibilities when their be a part of group to finish