Writing Feedback / The proportion of the most favourite tourist choices in Brighton attentions over 3 decades 1980-2010 [3]

The graph illustrates the proportion of the most favourite tourist choices in Brighton attentions over 3 decades from 1980 to 2010. Overall, it is important to note that, despite some fluctuations, the top rank changed from Festival to be Gallery in 1985 that fell sharply after reaching the highest number, but then the Pavilion overtook in the next following years.

There was a dramatic rise in the level of tourists in Art Gallery and Pavilion. They began at a fairly similar level of at 20% to 25% in 1980 but while Art gallery tourists were a significant fall in 1985 after reaching a peak of approximately 40 per cent which was followed by a sudden jump and then gradually decrease. However, Pavilion overtook art gallery in 1990, as the most favourite destination and almost a half of total tourist visited in 1995. Following this, the number decreased gradually to finish the period at 35%.

Pier and festival had different pattern. Pier fluctuated during 2 decades, which hit a lowest of 10%, though there was a sharp increase for the last period. Then, the festival proportion virtually growth for 30 years between 27% and 30%

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Writing Feedback / The line graph shows the amount of book expenditure for 4 different euro countries; IELTS 1 [3]

The line graph shows the amount of book expenditure for 4 different euro countries; Germany, France, Italy and Austria, during a decade from 1995 to 2005 and is measured in million US dollars. Overall, it is important to note that France, Austria and Germany had a little deviation in book purchasing in the end of 2005. Then, Austria rose sharply for the last following 5 years than other countries.

Germany and France were the majority in book purchasing. Germany stood at 80 million dollars in 1995, which the higher than 3 countries. The trend rose significantly during first four years but there was then a gradual fall during next four years, though it increased again to approximately 95 million dollars in 2005. However, the France trend grew noticeably over 20 years

In contrast, Italy and Austria had a similar pattern. From 1995 to 1999 saw a significant growth for the amount of Austria book expenditure but there was then a stable to 2001. Following this, the expenditure rose rapidly to finish period at more than 60 million dollars which approached the second majority. By 1995 to 1997, Italy trend fluctuated though they increased markedly the following years

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Writing Feedback / Task 1: Outokompu share price between 2006 and 2010 [5]

The chart illustrates the Outokompu stock price trend over a five-year period from 2006 to 2010 and is measured in Euro. Overall, it can be seen that, despite some fluctuations, the rate reached the peak in the end 2006 and almost virtually the highest score in the middle 2008 before jumped dramatically for the next following years.

First of all, the price stood at around €12 in early January 2006. Then, 2006 saw a significant rise in stock price with the level reaching the peak of more than €30 in the end of 2006. By 2007, it had fallen to approximately €22.

There was a significant improve during the first semester 2008 which was the second highest price. Then, it jumped sharply to €6 which was the lowest of that year. However, this figure increased dramatically over 6 months in 2009, but there was then a fluctuation until in the middle of 2010. Following this, the stock price was a virtually steady to finish the period at €11 that the level almost back to the starting point in early 2006.

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Writing Feedback / A comparison in the level of the readers at the Burnaby library from 2011 to 2014 based on gender [3]

The chart illustrates comparison in the level of the reader at Burnaby public library from 2011 to 2014 based on sexes. Overall, it can be seen that over the period as a whole the figure of reader increased significantly. While the female reader decreased dramatically, the male reader grew sharply in 2014.

Female reader level stood at fairly 5000 in 2011. The trend increased considerably for the next two years and reaching the peak of approximately 10,000. However, they jump suddenly only 8000 which were almost 2 times than the starting year.

At 2,500, the male reader figure stood in 2011. They rose gradually to 4000 in 2012 which made distance more far with another reader. By 2013, they had grown noticeably to 10,000. Furthermore, the number was as same as the female reader number. It overtook female reader in 2014 and reached the peak of approximately 15,000. The number was six times than the first year.

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