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Sep 6, 2016
Writing Feedback / IELTS practice for task 1 about maps of Meadowside village and Foton [5]
Good afternoon bro, your essay is essay to understand, may i give you same suggestions :
The maps show same changes in the two locations between Meadowside village and Fotton from 1962 to nowadays.
Overall, it can be seen that at the first map those locations did not have street to connect, while in these days both of areas not only have way but also some new building which are built in the middle of those points, hence those look one area.
Good afternoon bro, your essay is essay to understand, may i give you same suggestions :
The maps illustrate changes which happened in ...
The maps show same changes in the two locations between Meadowside village and Fotton from 1962 to nowadays.
It could be seen that in the first period, the places were s...
Overall, it can be seen that at the first map those locations did not have street to connect, while in these days both of areas not only have way but also some new building which are built in the middle of those points, hence those look one area.