Writing Feedback / Information about the comparison density in several areas from 1900 to 2000. [4]

IELTS TASK 1 - World population in 1900 and 2000

The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000.

The pie charts described information about the comparison of population in several areas between year of 1900 and 2000. During those years, Asia was the most populous regional, while the other small regionals were the least dominates population in the world. Overall, the total number of people in the world increased almost 4 times from previous year.

Asia population dominated more than a half of population in the world which was 60% in 1900 and decreased to 54% in 2000. During the same period, citizen of European region, as the second populous areas in the world, also dropped to nearly 11%. Conversely, the number of people who lived in Africa went up from 4% to 10% in that period.

Other regions and North America had same growth during those years. They felt off at 3% and 5% respectively. However, Latin America was the only regional that had upward trend among the third least population countries. The growth rate started from 3% to 8% over the period.

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Writing Feedback / Effect of the Internet in human's live - information anytime and anywhere; IELTS TEST 2 [2]

Internet makes human lives more convenient. Do you agree or disagree?

Human activities become easier because of the internet. Some people agree yet the others are against that idea. While the internet provides many an easy way to access information, I rather believe that it also makes human become lazy.

Information that we need, can be accessed easily due to internet. This is because the internet requires much more information in one package. For example, if we want to know information about news, sport, and technology, we can browse them in google, while video and music can be explored in Youtube. We do not need to turn on television or buy a newspaper. Therefore, the internet gives us a simple option to obtain more information anytime and anywhere.

The convenience of internet, in the other side, makes human become lazy. It is because we just need to type a keyword and everything will appear in a few seconds, although we do not know about the truth of the information. I personally experiences before, as a student, I had so many assignments related to journal and paper. To finish my homework, I just need to type the keyword in google machine and there would so many sites that could answer my question. Because it was so easy, I rarely read a book or went to library to get more information. It not only makes me become lazy but also lack of knowledge. Therefore, the internet causes people become lazy due to its practical.

To conclude, even though internet provided a simple way to finish all of people's business, I tend to argue that its convenience encourages human not to trying too hard to obtain their goals. Where possible, it is better if people use internet wisely and effectively.