Writing Feedback / Essay on September 11, 2001 [4]

Greetings!

I want to agree with Sarah that you've chosen an interesting topic and made some good points! However, I also have some suggestions for you! I think in this essay it is desirable to express your own thoughts and opinions! Try to answer the question, why the events of September 11th 2001 took place and what actions can be undertaken to solve the problem using your own words and ideas! Don't hesitate to use such phrases as "I think", "I suppose", "I suggest"! They can really help you make a good impression on a teacher! Using these phrases will let your teacher see you not only have researched a problem, but also understand it and can make your own conclusions!

Best wishes!

Andrey,

Essays / Essay on not regretting things - how to start? [8]

I would recommend you to use examples described in "How to stop worrying and start living" book by Dale Carnegie. A lot of useful information can be found in this book! This author gives you a lot of examples, which can really help you to start!

Andrey

Research Papers / help with research paper on legalizing Marijuana [4]

Try to start your research paper with pointing out the fact that marijuana has already been legalized in some countries and this process had no negative consequences! Try to compare marijuana with alcohol, focus on the demage caused by alcogol abuse and legalizing alcogol!

Andrey

Essays / In what way will Scholarships contribute to your life career? [8]

I want to agree with EF_Team2 that getting started is always the hardest part! So, I would recommend you to start with predicting the future. Making a conclusion, try to explain how it is important to be a professional and what important role scholarships can play in your life career!

Writing Feedback / Stress - cause and effect paper [3]

I would also recommend you to use "How to stop worrying and start living" book by Dale Carnegie. A lot of useful information can be found in this book!