hikuma21
Aug 12, 2016
Writing Feedback / Article Summary : TED's Secret to Great Public Speaking by Chris Anderson [7]
Hello, I've read your summary and now I will give you some suggestions.
1. Well, I remember abouta friend of mine (it is not efficient, better to use my friend ) in university who......
2. You would better give otherrequest(requests) but do not ever ask me to explain it to others...
By the way sorry if I carry out some mistakes in comment, I hope we can get better progress in writing, specially in summary the articles.
Hello, I've read your summary and now I will give you some suggestions.
1. Well, I remember about
2. You would better give other
By the way sorry if I carry out some mistakes in comment, I hope we can get better progress in writing, specially in summary the articles.