alfa7
Sep 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / TED summary Task Every Kids Need Champion [6]
Hello Dioba, I want to you obtain my suggestion for your essay, here we go:
... entire life either the school-house or the way to the schoolhouse.
you should use "-" to combine two words as one word has one meaning.
She is come from educator families , both of her ...
be careful with verb plus "s/es" which depends on subject.
... left a legacy of relationships that could never lost.
please becareful with your essay and repeat words, do not use too many repeat words. you can reducing or use adverbial clause.
note: keep writing and go ahead.
Hello Dioba, I want to you obtain my suggestion for your essay, here we go:
... entire life either the school-house or the way to the schoolhouse.
you should use "-" to combine two words as one word has one meaning.
She is come from educator families , both of her ...
be careful with verb plus "s/es" which depends on subject.
... left a legacy of relationships that could never lost.
please becareful with your essay and repeat words, do not use too many repeat words. you can reducing or use adverbial clause.
note: keep writing and go ahead.