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Last Post: Sep 21, 2016
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nomoto79   
Sep 21, 2016
Scholarship / Health system in Belize. Detailed Plan of Study For Scholarship Application Purposes [2]

Hallo ivan23,
i have checked your writing, i want to give some corrections

1. at this sentence: "The latter, which I am interested in" should be "The latter, I am interested in".

2. at this sentence: "The desire to pursue a MSc in Health Policy" should be "The desire to pursue MSc in Health Policy"

thank you, wish useful, keep writing.
nomoto79   
Sep 21, 2016
Writing Feedback / Ted Summary - Hans Rosling - Debunking third world myths with the best stats you have ever seen [3]

Hallo fadhilmd25,
i have read you writing, i have some corrections

1. at this sentence: "... lack of evidences, which need to be solve by using a proper statistic" should be "... lack of evidences, which need to solve by using a proper statistic"

2. at this sentence: "Furthermore, he said that one of the problems that"

thank you, keep writing :)
nomoto79   
Sep 21, 2016
Graduate / SOP for Admission in Cellular and Molecular Medicine [3]

Hallo Loverresearch,
i have read you writing, i have a correction

1. at this sentence: "His death jolted our family, but developed a curiosity in me to learn about diseases,drugs and how they affect our body" should be "... about diseases, drugs, and how it can affect our body "

thank you, wish it useful, keep writing.
nomoto79   
Sep 21, 2016
Writing Feedback / Let Us Socializing about Alzheimer's disease !! [3]

Let Us Socializing about Alzheimer's disease !!

Alzheimer's disease is the most common cause of dementia. The dementia describes a set of symptoms that can include memory loss and difficulties with thinking, problem-solving or language. These symptoms occur when the brain is damaged by certain diseases. During the voyage of the disease, proteins build up in the brain to form structures called 'tangles' and 'plaques', this leads to the loss of connections between nerve cells, and in the end to the death of nerve cells and loss of brain tissue.

It mainly affects people over 65 and mostly twice as many women as men, it may be that Alzheimer's in women is appertain to a lack of the hormone estrogen after menopause. Alzheimer's is a progressive disease which damages the part of brain piecemeal and become more malignant.

The effects of Alzheimer's diseases are lose items (like glasses) in the house, forget someone's name or hard to find the right word in a conversation, easy to lost in familiar occurrence, often forget appointments, become harder to concentrating or solving the problems, sometimes becoming confused at suddenly.

The treatment consume some drugs that fit to type of Alzheimer's, non drugs, support, and activity . Perhaps promote greater awareness of this condition.
nomoto79   
Sep 21, 2016
Graduate / 'First impression' - SOP for UX designer give some suggestions [3]

hallo nehakhatri17,
i have read you writing, and i have some corrections

1. at this sentence : ... which gave me a deep understanding about per spective, composition , depth and color theories "

2. at this sentence: ... advertising and communication skills which gives me confidence"

thank you, wish it useful, keep writing.
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