Writing Feedback / TED Summary: HOW TO GROW A FOREST IN YOUR BACKYARD [2]

hello @Abu_Gosok

could i give you little bit suggestions
here we go

1. "Shubhendu Sharma TALKS on TED with an appealing" because --> when S (he, she, it ) meet Verb must put S

2. "He was an industrial engineer before DECIDING" because ---> after before you must put noun. change he decides BECOMES deciding

Writing Feedback / Folklore: Yukki Onna The Snow Woman [3]

could i give little bit suggestions for u
here we go

1. "Minokichi realized that his wife SEEMED like the daemon who ... --> you use past tense seem should be past tense.

2. "She wanted to kill him but they are have many children" --> erase aux ARE, have can be defined aux

thank you

Writing Feedback / Prosanta Chakrabarty told, that his passion in life is looking at some hidden wonders of life [3]

Hello @Iedha01
could i give little bit suggestion to you
here we go

1. "These cave fishes has evolved in a slightly different ways" it should be " These cave fishes HAVE evolved in a slightly different ways. because --> (fishes is categorized PLURAL)

thank you

Writing Feedback / TED Summary Why I Read a Book a Day? By Tai Lopez [3]

hello @Yonathan
could i give you several suggestion for u

1. "The first are spend" it should be "The first is spending" because --> verb 1 must not put aux. be pay attention with subject verb agreement

2. "Tai Lopez want every people treating books like a friend" it should be " Tai Lopez wants every people who treating books like a friend" because ---> Tai lopez is singular in short you must put aux namely S after want.

thank you