Writing Feedback / Some literature state that the most factor of air pollution influenced by fuels. [5]

You have a very nice topic to write about and it's so full of points if you can develop it well.

Kindly rewrite your opening paragraph giving an overview into pollution.

Scholarship / Chevening Application - Leadership - Ebola Response [5]

Dear Line,

You have a very interesting story telling instincts and i do know you are a leader with a proven track record.

The Ebola Scenario was great as an example but you can emphasize more on how your personal influencing skills helped more than the minute you wrote.

Writing Feedback / Affordable traveling to other countries has a positive impact on us. [2]

Excellent overview there. Its great if you can bring a different perspective by narrating how you have benefited through travelling.

With that,you have backed up your assertion with valid points.

Scholarship / Why I chose the 3 courses? Each make balance between theoretical knowledge and practical application [2]

Dear Haneen,

Your introduction was intriguing enough to captivate the interest of the reviewer but you have not done to the prompt.

Pick each course from each university as you have selected and explain why each suit your choice and connect your past,present and future.