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|Describe problems connected with overpopulation and propose resolutions to this issue
2 - @longpm2k Hi longpm2k! I'm not an expert, so please just ignore if my advice doesn't actually help... I think...
Undergraduatelongpm2k - 1 day ago / yui meow - 22 hrs ago
|UC Personal Insight Question #2: Every person has a creative side...
Undergraduateashymustard - 2 days ago / ashymustard - 1 day ago
|Efficiency of human with respect to social class (Common app essay)
2 - @Browny Welcome, Browny! I hope you have been lurking around and enjoying what we offer in this site. If...
UndergraduateBrowny - 2 days ago / Maria - 1 day ago
|Write about a person who has made a meaningful impact on you. Hasan Minhaj.
3 - @quavius Hey there. I'll be providing you with feedback on this essay - no worries! I hope that you...
Undergraduatequavius - 2 days ago / Maria - 1 day ago
|Studying abroad - My personal Statement for Apply GKS
3 - Your reasons for studying in Korea are not convincing. You just said general things everybody says. Don't mention you...
UndergraduateMulya Hadi 99 - 2 days ago / juliana1604 - 1 day ago
|Study Plan for learning language for KGSP Undergraduate Program - before and after entry
3 - thank youu...
UndergraduateZelk0vA - Sep 16, 2019 / Zelk0vA - 2 days ago
|My Statistics Personal Statement (GKS Undergraduate)
2 - I really think you're on the right track with this essay but it's missing one crucial detail. You do...
Undergraduateposeidonchild - Sep 15, 2019 / quavius - 2 days ago
|My Study Plan with the schedule of learning Korean and English for KGSP undergraduate Program
2 - Hi there! Glad i found someone that is applying for the same scholarship as me. I hope my advice...
Undergraduategiwang indri - Sep 15, 2019 / alyssa2036 - Sep 15, 2019
|Common App, Singapore's Third-Culture Kid
2 - @ferna9624 Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback serves you well in your application process....
Undergraduateferna9624 - Sep 15, 2019 / Maria - Sep 16, 2019
|Volunteer - description of your professional background and current work, including accomplishment
Undergraduateizahnelson13 - Sep 13, 2019 / izahnelson13 - Sep 15, 2019
|like a neutron - Computer Science and Beyond Common App Essay
Undergraduatesharvilgrg - Sep 8, 2019 / sharvilgrg - Sep 8, 2019
|MIT Pleasure Short Essay (PokemonGo): I don't know if I should even keep this specific topic
2 - @dzlhrt Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I apologize for the delay. However, I hope that this feedback becomes...
Undergraduatedzlhrt - Sep 5, 2019 / Maria - Sep 11, 2019
|DARTMOUTH supplement - introduce yourself mo'olelo
3 - @jasmine12 thank you! how did you like concept of the essay overall? @Holt I'd really appreciate your feedback....
Undergraduatembigl - Sep 2, 2019 / mbigl - Sep 11, 2019
|Common app prompt 6 (engaging activities) - Investing with Dad
2 - @quavius Hi there. Welcome to the forum! We're always open to other people being a part of our community....
Undergraduatequavius - Sep 1, 2019 / Maria - Sep 2, 2019
|Computing and Programming - Georgia Tech Supplemental Essay
4 - @Maria Thanks for the feedback. I guess I will pretty much have to write it scratch as it seems...
UndergraduateTheShubhi - Sep 1, 2019 / TheShubhi - Sep 14, 2019
|Commonapp essay on mathematics - share your story about an interest or talent
2 - @DodgeCharger Hi there. Welcome to the forum! As you are here, I wish you the best of luck in...
UndergraduateDodgeCharger - Sep 1, 2019 / Maria - Sep 7, 2019
|Independent Study and Research findings in Additional Information on Common App
2 - @Bastian Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope that you find this feedback to be beneficial for your...
UndergraduateBastian - Aug 31, 2019 / Maria - Sep 7, 2019
|Urbana-Champaign Essay review/edits Computer Science - Artificial Intelligence and Bioinformatics
3 - The third paragraph starts to share your specific origin story, like that of a superhero. In the third paragraph,...
UndergraduateAviPatel1 - Aug 31, 2019 / pc_pc - Sep 1, 2019
|Why a Model? - EXPERIENCES YOU HAVE HAD THAT HAVE HELPED TO DEFINE YOU AS A PERSON
2 - @buttercup3 Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope it's not too late to provide you with a brief...
Undergraduatebuttercup3 - Aug 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 5, 2019
|The Great Depression / Economics - Transfer Application Essay for Georgia Tech
3 - Hello, I admire your passion for your choice, and it seems like you have a big decision of your...
Undergraduatejakefire10 - Aug 30, 2019 / quavius - Sep 6, 2019
|UT-Dallas Prompt B - Minecraft and how it affected me as a person
2 - @Noah_177 Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find this feedback to be helpful for your writing...
UndergraduateNoah_177 - Aug 29, 2019 / Maria - Sep 5, 2019
|"Genius Festival" - Personal Statement
3 - @Maria I write this essay for college application (personal statement). Tks for your advice <3...
Undergraduatechi_l_2002252 - Aug 29, 2019 / chi_l_2002252 - Sep 11, 2019
|Your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo; my interest in computer engineering
2 - @tennis_ball1 Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Seeing as you are new here, don't be afraid to keep coming...
Undergraduatetennis_ball1 - Aug 25, 2019 / Maria - Aug 29, 2019
|I want to pursue a degree in Computer Engineering or Mechanical Engineering - AIF reply
3 - @Maria Thanks a lot! I'll keep working on it. BTW, I don't know if it's unique enough to appeal...
Undergraduaterazor0424 - Aug 23, 2019 / razor0424 - Aug 29, 2019
|Becoming a USNA graduate - Congressional Nomination Essay
2 - @colt2002 Hi there. Welcome back here! I hope that you've found the forum to be helpful for your writing...
Undergraduatecolt2002 - Aug 23, 2019 / Maria - Aug 28, 2019
|Being bullied - Story for common app essay- prompt 7
2 - @quanhquanh Hi! Welcom to the forum! I hope this feedback can help you on your endeavours. First, be...
Undergraduatequanhquanh - Aug 21, 2019 / hcpsleeil - Aug 25, 2019
|Taiwan trip - the impact of this experience and the greatest learning outcome for you
2 - @Kelly Pender Hi there. Apologize for the delay. I'm here to provide you feedback on your writing. I'm...
UndergraduateKelly Pender - Aug 21, 2019 / Maria - Aug 28, 2019
|Electronics, hardware, software - Undergraduate Admission - Georgia Tech
UndergraduateKiBash - Aug 20, 2019 / KiBash - Aug 25, 2019
|University of Michigan Supplement Essay--My Time in the Navy
2 - @saubesas Hi there. I see that you're new here. Welcome to the forum! I hope that you find this...
Undergraduatesaubesas - Aug 20, 2019 / Maria - Aug 27, 2019
|MIT Essay : Cultural Background and Identity. Essay Evaluation
2 - @Ronitsingh1405 Hi! I hope this feeback can help you! When I read this essay, I feel like it is...
UndergraduateRonitsingh1405 - Aug 19, 2019 / hcpsleeil - Aug 20, 2019
|common app essay for college about an epiphany - OPEN TO ALL CRITIQUES
Undergraduatehcpsleeil - Aug 19, 2019 / hcpsleeil - Aug 20, 2019
|A step to bring me closer to Harvard World Model United Nations 2020
3 - @Maria Hey Maria, nice to meet you! I agree the thesis statement will sound more convincing! Thanks! I will...
Undergraduateagungprwr - Aug 18, 2019 / agungprwr - Aug 18, 2019
|Electrical circuit - My Columbia Engineering Essay
Undergraduatedeladenoo - Aug 17, 2019 / deladenoo - Aug 29, 2019
|Essay about my qualities shown through my love for tea
3 - Hi! I personally love the concept of this essay. I think it is extremely unique and oringinal, but I...
UndergraduateGrace123 - Aug 17, 2019 / hcpsleeil - Aug 19, 2019
|Congressional Nomination Essay - beyond graduation from the Naval Academy
3 - @colt2002 Hi. It's good to see you here. As always, I truly hope this feedback becomes useful for you....
Undergraduatecolt2002 - Aug 17, 2019 / Maria - Aug 18, 2019
|My Lullaby: College admissions essay 2020 Topic A :Tell us your story
2 - @fiorepuli Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope you will find the feedback you receive here to be...
Undergraduatefiorepuli - Aug 13, 2019 / Maria - Aug 15, 2019
|Grow up - Story for common app essay- prompt 7
2 - @pa_123 Hi. Hopefully this feedback will be helpful for your writing endeavors! Focusing on the logical sequencing of...
Undergraduatepa_123 - Jul 30, 2019 / Maria - Jul 31, 2019
|My work creations - essay admission for SCAD
2 - @ssaa8227 Hello there! Welcome to the forum. I'm going to provide you with a thorough writing feedback; I hope...
Undergraduatessaa8227 - Jul 26, 2019 / Maria - Jul 26, 2019
|Sonography - Rutgers School of Health Professions, Entrance Essay
3 - @Maria Thank you for your correction. If I can ask, do you think the content itself is relevant to...
Undergraduatekhong9198 - Jul 25, 2019 / khong9198 - Jul 25, 2019
|Heart Covered in Spider Webs - NYU Film and Television, Personal Story
2 - @DarthPhaedr Hello there. Let me provide you with writing feedback on your content. Firstly, I appreciate the extensive...
UndergraduateDarthPhaedr - Jul 21, 2019 / Maria - Jul 21, 2019
|Computer science, the witch. Georgia Tech Typical Day Essay
2 - @Lyanlima Hello there. I'll provide you with writing feedback. Firstly, I think that the general tone you're building...
UndergraduateLyanlima - Jul 19, 2019 / Maria - Jul 20, 2019
|Millions of immigrants - Ewha womans university UNDERGRADUATE ESSAY
Undergraduatealeylelluyah - Jul 16, 2019 / aleylelluyah - Jul 16, 2019
|My AU Youth Volunteer Application for Cohort 10
2 - @dolo Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with writing feedback on this content. Be cautious...
Undergraduatedolo - Jul 10, 2019 / Maria - Jul 12, 2019
|Business administration - KGSP UNDERGRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT
NEW - could you help me and give me your opinion on my personal statement. should contain: - Motivations with which...
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|My adulthood - story for commonapp essay
UndergraduateChimfwembe2000 - Jul 3, 2019 / Chimfwembe2000 - Jul 4, 2019
|Hindu Community - Emory Undergraduate Common Application Essay- Prompt 3 Essay Help
UndergraduateVishnu V - Jul 1, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|The influence of my father and his loss - Columbia application essay
2 - @littlecurious Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, I...
Undergraduatelittlecurious - Jun 30, 2019 / Maria - Jul 1, 2019
|From handpumps to Books - my commonApp personal
2 - @ughcollege Hi there! It would be beneficial and helpful for us to have a brief background of the...
Undergraduateughcollege - Jun 10, 2019 / Maria - Jun 10, 2019
|Study Plan to get Study Permit in Canada for Computer Science Undergraduate
2 - @HasanZobaer Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I'll try to assist you with your essay. First and...
UndergraduateHasanZobaer - Jun 9, 2019 / Maria - Jun 10, 2019
|"One small step" - UW Transfer Personal Statement
UndergraduateJoeLollo - Jun 6, 2019 / JoeLollo - Jun 12, 2019
|Healthcare and Family - Essay about introducing me essay
UndergraduateMartinez1011 - Jun 3, 2019 / Martinez1011 - Jun 5, 2019
|University of Technology Sydney - Study plan for Australia visa
3 - @loan1210 Hi there! Let's look through your essay in terms of content; and I hope I can provide...
Undergraduateloan1210 - May 26, 2019 / Maria - May 27, 2019
|Single mom pharmacy admission
2 - @Stewartalyssa25 Hi there! Welcome to the platform. I think that the direction that you want to take your...
UndergraduateStewartalyssa25 - May 21, 2019 / Maria - May 21, 2019
|School drum-call - the experiences which help me to grow up
2 - @Jenn12 While I think that the introduction is creative, I also believe that balancing that creativity with being formal...
UndergraduateJenn12 - May 11, 2019 / Maria - May 11, 2019
|How do you plan to lead a project or create awareness on Poverty Eradication in your home country?
2 - What I suggest that you can do is directly contact smaller educational institutions and create campaigns within these smaller...
Undergraduateshalahuddinn - May 4, 2019 / Maria - May 4, 2019
|Compare and Evaluate between IKEA and Apple
2 - I would suggest that to avoid making mistakes, you should always opt for a simpler format for your sentences....
Undergraduatexinzhan - Apr 13, 2019 / Maria - Apr 13, 2019
|AAS Supporting Statement - data analyst course.
2 - I would opt that you try to not be repetitive with your usage of words. When you find yourself...
Undergraduatethornberry712 - Apr 12, 2019 / Maria - Apr 12, 2019
|GKS engineering summer program - Solutions to Real Problems
Undergraduateandressag - Apr 12, 2019 / andressag - Apr 13, 2019
|Statement of purpose for POSCO ASIA FELLOWSHIP
2 - Your introductory paragraph is lengthy and dragging. You could better this through cutting down your phrasing and ensuring that...
Undergraduateadeembas - Apr 10, 2019 / Maria - Apr 11, 2019
|For interview about entire university
2 - I like the structure of (current post, previous post, why this post) in answering the "Tell Me About Yourself"...
UndergraduateDhae_89 - Apr 4, 2019 / terminal28 - Apr 4, 2019
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