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The curriculum and research environment - Master degree of AI - Australian Award Scholarship

2 - The information you provide is already known to the reviewer. What they need to learn from you is the...

ScholarshipTemuulen_1 - 2 days / Holt - 2 days
Land Surveyor - Q2 and A2 of my AAS statement

2 - You relied too much on AI for your response development, without really knowing how to properly use AI to...

Scholarshipenoch_online - Apr 14, 2026 / Holt - Apr 14, 2026
AAS for Master of Professional Engineering (Geospatial Engineering & Surveying)

2 - I could not help but immediately detect the AI written response in this statement. Though it reads like a...

Scholarshipenoch_online - Apr 14, 2026 / Holt - Apr 14, 2026
AAS Essay - Future contribution as a researcher and educator in animal nutrition

2 - You tend to become redundant in your opening references for each statement. It would be best not to constantly...

ScholarshipFafa_Hadi - Apr 13, 2026 / Holt - Apr 13, 2026
AAS Essay - How have you contribute to solving a challenge ? - Animal nutrition specialist

2 - Your discussion is too general. It is so general in fact that it fails to specifically respond to the...

ScholarshipFafa_Hadi - Apr 13, 2026 / Holt - Apr 13, 2026
AAS Essay - Animal Nutrition (Master of Animal Science)

2 - The paragraph about indinesia's food strategy should not be a stand alone paragraph. Instead, you should be merging these...

ScholarshipFafa_Hadi - Apr 13, 2026 / Holt - Apr 13, 2026
AAS Essay - Study impact on my career as a university lecturer in animal nutrition

2 - Why is it vital? What shortcoming does this face at the moment? This should respond to the community...

ScholarshipFafa_Hadi - Apr 13, 2026 / Holt - Apr 13, 2026
Applying master degree of AI. Supporting Statement for Australian Award Scholarship

4 - Yes. You need to mention it again in this section but in a different context from the previous response...

ScholarshipTemuulen_1 - Apr 1, 2026 / Holt - Apr 3, 2026
Skills Study Programme / Local Plays - My Essay Answer

2 - Your response is very much generalized and lacking in specific indications that you have familiarized yourself with the requirements...

Scholarshipcalla7 - Mar 27, 2026 / Holt - Mar 29, 2026
Construction Project Management - A development impact statement for commonwealth distance learning

2 - The presentation is too vague in response. You need to state the problem you hope to address at a...

Scholarshipabdullahseidu - Mar 24, 2026 / Holt - Mar 25, 2026
The MBA program in Australia - AAS- use the knowledge, skills and connections

2 - There seem to be some gaps in your English thought process that affects the way that you present your...

ScholarshipAlyaria - Mar 23, 2026 / Holt - Mar 23, 2026
Accounting, Business, and Finance - AAS- 3. study and your career

3 - @Holt thank you very much, you have been a huge help for me...

ScholarshipAlyaria - Mar 23, 2026 / Alyaria - Mar 24, 2026
Becoming a Music Director - The Bridge Program Fellowship - CROSSROAD Essay 1

3 - The essay cannot answer questions thoroughly and lack of clear coherence. You should further describe the emotional conflicts and...

ScholarshipAbdulfataidosumu - Mar 22, 2026 / songoku - Apr 6, 2026
Manaaki Essay 2026 Part 2 (RELATIONSHIP MANAGEMENT) 2nd version

2 - What was the circumstance by which you were exposed to this? What led to your discovery of this...

Scholarshipwildan41 - Mar 22, 2026 / Holt - Mar 23, 2026
Manaaki Essay 2026 Part 3 (Self Drive / Work / Motivation / Research)

2 - This essay is all abut character development and your self determination to succeed in a setting that may...

Scholarshipwildan41 - Mar 20, 2026 / Holt - Mar 21, 2026
Manaaki Essay 2026 Part 2 (RELATIONSHIP MANAGEMENT)

2 - Try to remain specific since you have identified branches earlier on in your response. What branch did you...

Scholarshipwildan41 - Mar 20, 2026 / Holt - Mar 21, 2026
Manaaki Essay 2026 Part 1 (Development Relevance)

2 - 1. While you skillfully explained the background of the situation that led to your masters course choice. The reasons...

Scholarshipwildan41 - Mar 19, 2026 / Holt - Mar 20, 2026
To bridge the gap - AAS-statement on solving a challenge

2 - What exposure immersion activity did you participate in that led you to this oberservation? Consider that the reviewer...

ScholarshipAlyaria - Mar 19, 2026 / Holt - Mar 20, 2026
AAS-Statement MBA Melbourne or Monash - Essay for purposed course and institution

2 - You have conflicting interests in the presentation. Either focus on developing your family business or helping SMEs grow in...

ScholarshipAlyaria - Mar 18, 2026 / Holt - Mar 18, 2026
AAS -Master of Human Resource Management - How will the proposed study contribute to your career?

2 - You speak of how the courses you will be taking will help you become a better professional. While that...

ScholarshipChamroeun Putthi - Mar 17, 2026 / Holt - Mar 18, 2026
Chinese Investment in Cambodia - AAS -Master of Human Resource Management - course and institution?

2 - I would like to commend you for not using AI to write your response statement. This presentation shows the...

ScholarshipChamroeun Putthi - Mar 17, 2026 / Holt - Mar 18, 2026
AAS-Why did you choose the Master of Business Administration?

2 - Your response is over the character limit but 333 words so you will have to edit the content presentation....

ScholarshipAlyaria - Mar 14, 2026 / Holt - Mar 14, 2026
I would like my NTU Scholarship Essay to be reviewed. I'm open to suggestions!

2 - As a 70% AI assisted essay, this response essay will not pass the AI detection software of the university...

ScholarshipJenesais - Mar 12, 2026 / Holt - Mar 13, 2026
Hyundai Motor Chung Mong-Koo - My CMK Scholarship 2026 Personal Statement

3 - Thank you very much for taking the time to read my personal statement and for providing such thoughtful feedback....

Scholarshipdoohyun2807 - Mar 6, 2026 / doohyun2807 - Mar 8, 2026
"Advancing My Education" - GOI-IES Scholarship Essay Review

3 - Thank you for the feedback I really appreciate...

ScholarshipJohnlech13 - Mar 3, 2026 / Johnlech13 - Mar 4, 2026
How art changed my life since a young age -

2 - The essay does not have a clear flow of thought. There are too many references in the essay that...

ScholarshipPepperwaiting - Feb 28, 2026 / Holt - Mar 1, 2026
Crime prevention - AAS Master of Public Policy - Why you choose this course and institution

3 - @Holt Hi, thank you for your comment, I really appreciate your time and advice especially about the AI. To...

Scholarshipperibaik - Feb 28, 2026 / peribaik - Feb 28, 2026
Language and academic skills - Study plan for SeoulTech scholarship (6 universities in Seoul )

2 - There is a big problem with this essay. It comes back as being 70-90% AI written. Which means, at...

ScholarshipHoangvu3108 - Feb 27, 2026 / Holt - Feb 28, 2026
PTDF SCHOLARSHIP 2026 STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR MSc ENVIRONMENTAL MANAGEMENT.

2 - I apologize but I do not believe that his highly polished essay stands a chance of passing the AI...

ScholarshipSaeedah - Feb 26, 2026 / Holt - Feb 28, 2026
FUBLRIGHT STUDY OBJECTIVES "HELP REVIEW"

2 - This essay is at least 50% AI generated in terms of improving the presentation. The format and writing are...

ScholarshipMOPATI - Feb 26, 2026 / Holt - Feb 27, 2026
GOI IES Essay 1 About Benefit of GOI IES to myself, HEI, Ireland, origin country

2 - It is difficult for me to comment on a personal statement that has been at least 80% AI generated....

ScholarshipOreki - Feb 22, 2026 / Holt - Feb 22, 2026
The Journey of Finding Myself - SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION ESSAY

3 - @Holt How can I improve it? Please contact us at essayforum.com@gmail.com and request Hold for professional assistance....

Scholarshipha phuong linh - Feb 20, 2026 / ha phuong linh - Feb 21, 2026
Online King Sejong / GKS - master's degree study plan (language)

2 - There is no need for you to delve into the foundation of your interest tin the language. What is...

Scholarshipandi123 - Feb 16, 2026 / Holt - Feb 17, 2026
GKS program / Korean drama - statement of purpose for master's degree

2 - The one thing that irritates the GKS reviewers are applicants who rely heavily on their characterization of Korea...

Scholarshipandi123 - Feb 15, 2026 / Holt - Feb 16, 2026
PTDF Masters Scholarship - Cyber Security

2 - You have effectively used AI hybrid writing to develop a masters letter of intent / motivational letter to meet...

ScholarshipJanetttt - Feb 13, 2026 / Holt - Feb 15, 2026
Supply chain management - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR APPLYING MASTER DEGREE

2 - Your essay carefully balances your human context with an obvious AI polish throughout the essay. It created an interesting...

Scholarshipstarstruck076 - Feb 10, 2026 / Holt - Feb 12, 2026
Passionate about textiles - Personal Statement Master at Brunel University

2 - Most masters degree students believe that they need to reference their childhood interest in a particular field or course...

Scholarshipbakhtawa445 - Feb 8, 2026 / Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Letter Of Intent For Turkey Bulsari scholarship, application for Medicine.

2 - The reason that you are having a difficult time editing this letter for length is simple. You did not...

Scholarshiprink - Feb 6, 2026 / Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Study plan in Taiwan - molecular immunology and biomedical research

2 - Okay. The actual study plan starts at paragraph 4. That is where this essay should begin. It should end...

ScholarshipThang0807 - Feb 5, 2026 / Holt - Feb 5, 2026
From flipping patties to winning awards GKS-G personal statement for Korean Studies major Emb.Track

3 - Thank you Holt for the feedback! I appreciate it!...

Scholarshipmkaru37 - Feb 3, 2026 / mkaru37 - Feb 4, 2026
Letter of Intent for Türkiye Bursları – Computer Engineering

3 - I agree with the consultant's main point. The letter focuses heavily on what you did, but it doesn't clearly...

Scholarshipwhythere44 - Feb 1, 2026 / momoo00 - Feb 18, 2026
Gks Ug Personal statement for computer engineering

2 - I am not sure why you posted the same essay twice in the box. It did not help me...

ScholarshipNavya - Feb 1, 2026 / Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Letter of Intent for Turkiye Burslari Scholarship - Undergraduate, Automation and Control

2 - You can further develop your graduation thesis in the essay to show your theoretical and skills development at an...

Scholarshiphiraeth - Jan 30, 2026 / Holt - Jan 31, 2026
Msc Marketing - 300 word scholarship essay

2 - You have written a scholarship essay that is heavily AI assisted. While it makes your application look polished and...

Scholarshipminhln02 - Jan 20, 2026 / Holt - Jan 21, 2026
GKS-U Embassy Track Application, Visual Communication Design

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the review, I'll change it based on what you said! ^-^...

Scholarshipcel27hala - Jan 18, 2026 / cel27hala - Jan 19, 2026
Economic activity and people's lives - SOP FOR ERASMUS MUNDUS GLOCAL PROGRAM STUDY TRACK B

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I tried to do in last minute what you said....

ScholarshipAnt3333 - Jan 14, 2026 / Ant3333 - Jan 15, 2026
Craft is a form of inheritance that continues to breathe through time - applying to MAGMa

2 - I would have to say that this is a solid piece of writing in relation to an EM scholarship...

Scholarshipazkasami - Jan 14, 2026 / Holt - Jan 15, 2026
Path towards Medicine at Semmelweis (Stipendium Hungaricum)

2 - Having repeated several times in the essay that Cambodia badly needs doctors and surgeons, I would have liked to...

ScholarshipPhalvichet - Jan 13, 2026 / Holt - Jan 15, 2026
Stipendium scholarship bachelors for engineering

3 - I see thank you, 4534 characters is where my essay is right now including spaces. Should I cut...

ScholarshipSerod - Jan 13, 2026 / Serod - Jan 15, 2026
NTU Scholarship Essay - Showcase of Leadership

2 - I realize that this is a word limited essay but the way it was portrayed was one dimensional to...

Scholarshiplucas_hanz - Jan 13, 2026 / Holt - Jan 14, 2026
How to convey feelings to the reader in a motivational essay - Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - The essay is not going to stand out among the sea of applicants. That is because of the one...

Scholarshipakiro - Jan 8, 2026 / Holt - Jan 10, 2026
Microorganisms and fermentation - Study plan to Taiwan Scholarship

2 - Since this is a study plan, the first paragraph of this essay is totally unnecessary. It does not contain...

ScholarshipThang0807 - Jan 8, 2026 / Holt - Jan 10, 2026
Theory and real-world impact - Erasmus mundus motivational letter

2 - While EM actually accepts undergraduate scholars into their program, they only accept exceptional undergraduates who show academic excellence, internship...

ScholarshipMadika - Jan 5, 2026 / Holt - Jan 7, 2026
It Starts with Small Act toward Bigger Impact (Erasmus Mundus: GLOCAL - Track I)

3 - Well noted. Thank you for the suggestions, Holt! I'll try to revise this ASAP for your final suggestion....

Scholarshipapnindyaa - Jan 3, 2026 / apnindyaa - Jan 4, 2026
children's books - Erasmus Mundus CLMCE Program (Motivational Letter)

2 - The essay is very personal to you, but highly confusing to the reviewer. You speak in great length about...

Scholarshipzien - Jan 3, 2026 / Holt - Jan 3, 2026
Personal Statement for GKS scholarship (Embassy Track)- Graduate in Spanish Philology

2 - This portion should be discussed in the language study plan essay. Delete this paragraph from this essay as...

Scholarshipkatedeska - Jan 1, 2026 / Holt - Jan 2, 2026
Motivation Letter for the IMSISS Erasmus Mundus Application - Conflict Institute

3 - Thanks so much for taking time,to critically highlight the areas that need improvements in my essay.I am making the...

Scholarshipester_policy - Jan 1, 2026 / ester_policy - Jan 2, 2026
ERASMUS MUNDUS INT'L MASTERS IN GLOBAL MARKETS AND LOCAL CREATIVES: GLOBAL MARKETS & DEVELOPMENT

2 - This is the information that the reviewer will be looking for. You started with some pretty irrelevant information...

ScholarshipTHEOPHILUS - Dec 31, 2025 / Holt - Dec 31, 2025
Seek your inputs-Statement of Purpose-Erasmus Mundus GLOCAL-Sustainable Business Development

2 - This aspect should be highlighted as the foundation of your motivation. Being a very strong statement coming from...

Scholarshipsonle1024 - Dec 29, 2025 / Holt - Dec 30, 2025
Fashion Design major - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS

3 - Thank you so much I really appreciate your help. I'll fix my personal statement....

Scholarshipnorceulea - Dec 24, 2025 / norceulea - Dec 27, 2025

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