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Sustainable Engineering- Erasums Mundus

2 - You have not done enough research on the Erasmus Mundus Sustainable Engineering program. It shows in the way that...

Scholarshiptart_Ahmd - Nov 23, 2025 / Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Study plan research laboratory of Land Improvement and Management

4 - You do not neet to present your academic history in this case. Discuss the extent of your current field...

Scholarshiparri18 - Nov 20, 2025 / Holt - Nov 23, 2025
leadership and service - Women in Engineering - mastercard foundation

3 - sorry, I didn't give the full prompt on the essay. "Tell us about a current idea or project...

ScholarshipAattayo_sandra - Nov 19, 2025 / Aattayo_sandra - Nov 20, 2025
Nigeria ecosystem and education - Mastercard Foundation Scholarship Program

2 - There is no sense in including a reference to your father in the essay. It does not serve a...

ScholarshipMystro_Dynamic - Nov 18, 2025 / Holt - Nov 19, 2025
Transformation of Mining Challenge into Smart Mining in Developing Country

2 - As a Fulbright scholar applicant, there are several aspects that you need to discuss in your essay. These are:...

ScholarshipImamjafarsh - Nov 18, 2025 / Holt - Nov 18, 2025
MSC Sustainable energy system. University of Edinburgh. Mastercard foundation - Future goals

2 - The first paragraph is actually a bit interesting to read. Then you lost the focus of the Future Goals...

ScholarshipAattayo_sandra - Nov 17, 2025 / Holt - Nov 18, 2025
MSc in Sustainable Energy Systems - Mastercard University of Edinburgh

2 - Your reasoning is personal, which means it lacks the professional aspect that the program requires. Based on the prompt...

Scholarshipbiggy1621 - Nov 16, 2025 / Holt - Nov 17, 2025
GKS G - Personal statement Human AI Interaction interest

2 - The 2nd to 4th paragraphs are superfluous when applying for a masters degree acceptance. Try to focus on the...

Scholarshipkittyts - Nov 15, 2025 / Holt - Nov 16, 2025
Global Markets, Local Creativities - Motivation Letter

2 - Avoid giving information that makes it sound like it came from your job application resume. This appears to...

ScholarshipSeera - Nov 11, 2025 / Holt - Nov 11, 2025
Story Essay for Mastercard Foundation (Sustainable Energy Systems at University of Edinburgh)

2 - This is an extremely shallow reference that most scholarship reviewers actually find laughable. They prefer that students do...

Scholarshipbiggy1621 - Nov 8, 2025 / Holt - Nov 9, 2025
To work as a policy analyst - ERAMUS MUNDUS MAPP ISS-TRACK APPLICATION

2 - I find the start of the motivational letter a bit confusing. There is something missing in the middle. I...

Scholarshipheppichee - Oct 21, 2025 / Holt - Oct 22, 2025
GKS-U 2026 Personal Statement - Food Science and Food Engineering

2 - Your realization comes across as a plagiarized version of the John Stewart Mills ethical theory related to Ulitarianism. Yes,...

Scholarshipgeulsseth - Oct 6, 2025 / Holt - Oct 7, 2025
Undergraduate dental education in Sudan - Chevening Leadership

2 - You discussed your teaching experience. A teacher is not the same as a leader. Yes, you seem to be...

Scholarshipririavera - Oct 6, 2025 / Holt - Oct 6, 2025
Diverse social networks - Chevening Relationship building and influence

2 - Focus on your relationship with iRise Hub. Expand on the background of the meeting. What was the importance of...

Scholarshiparri18 - Oct 5, 2025 / Holt - Oct 5, 2025
Many educational obstacles - Chevening leadership essay

2 - Kindly review the prompts again. You should focus on a single leadership problem that best highlights your leadership skills,...

Scholarshiparri18 - Oct 5, 2025 / Holt - Oct 5, 2025
Essay for bachelor degree in a German university - data analyst

3 - @Holt I'm applying for International Excellence Scholarship which targets international applicants with excellent academic and extracurricular achievements. I'd really...

Scholarshipmanifesting - Oct 5, 2025 / manifesting - Oct 5, 2025
Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter in Environmental Engineering

2 - The problem with this application essay is that your high school education does not support your choice of college...

ScholarshipAndyNJ - Oct 3, 2025 / Holt - Oct 4, 2025
A plastic sheet - Chevening leadership essay

2 - When Chevening speaks of leaders in their home country, they refer to people who are contributing to the development...

ScholarshipSRaihan - Sep 28, 2025 / Holt - Sep 30, 2025
Natural aptitude or skill / values and behavior - Questbridge essay

2 - Do not give the reviewer a lesson in word definition and pronunciation. He will view that as insulting and...

Scholarshiplyassal - Sep 26, 2025 / Holt - Sep 27, 2025
Creating spaces outside the classroom - Questbridge essay

2 - Reviewers prefer when the students do not use exaggerated terms such as "I love". Since this is an academic...

Scholarshiplyassal - Sep 26, 2025 / Holt - Sep 27, 2025
Unexplainable universe - short application essay

2 - Your question is confusing and without direction. The only clear reference is that you want to ask a question...

ScholarshipSanaa224 - Sep 21, 2025 / Holt - Sep 21, 2025
Chevening Leadership Essay - Crisis in Business

2 - Are you familiar with the idiom; "There is no I in Team"? Read your reference paragraph. It is full...

Scholarshipprnka - Sep 21, 2025 / Holt - Sep 21, 2025
Looking for Volunteer Friends - Chevening - Relationship Buildings

2 - The minute I read the word "community' in your essay, I knew that you had misunderstood the topic requirement....

ScholarshipFutureLeader - Sep 20, 2025 / Holt - Sep 20, 2025
Mental health in Indonesia - Chevening - Career Plan and Impact

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I'll improve my essay based on your suggestions and questions....

ScholarshipFutureLeader - Sep 17, 2025 / FutureLeader - Sep 20, 2025
My Networking Story From Frozen Logistics to Fresh Water Solutions - Chevening Networking Essay

2 - Do not bore the reviewer with irrelevant details. There is a reason that you were given writing questions...

Scholarshipprnka - Sep 16, 2025 / Holt - Sep 19, 2025
Education and business - Chevening Leadership Essay

2 - Try to use a more recent leadership action that you had to take. Your references are far too old...

Scholarshipprnka - Sep 16, 2025 / Holt - Sep 19, 2025
Chevening Networking Essay - Bridging People Through Projects

2 - Do not confuse the discussion by presenting you previous career. Focus on your current career that you hope to...

Scholarshipoutstandingfield - Sep 16, 2025 / Holt - Sep 16, 2025
Chevening Leadership Essay - Leading CSR in the Midst of Natural Disaster

2 - The discussion is too fast. You need to slow down and be more specific. Since we live in the...

Scholarshipoutstandingfield - Sep 16, 2025 / Holt - Sep 16, 2025
Chevening - Teacher from Indonesia

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I'll recall my other experiences and rewrite another essay on leadership....

ScholarshipFutureLeader - Sep 16, 2025 / FutureLeader - Sep 17, 2025
GKS 2026 essay, University Track. Mechanical Engineering.

5 - You don't need to downgrade one area like education quality to elevate another. Also, instead of listing a bunch...

ScholarshipMarty - Sep 15, 2025 / hinuyenthihue111 - Oct 4, 2025
Chevening Essay - Building Network in the Creative Industry

2 - As per the discussion instructions, you need to present information about your strongest network building collaboration. Just one. Not...

Scholarshipu_utmaut - Sep 12, 2025 / Holt - Sep 14, 2025
Extent of active participation in Ireland as a student Essay for Goi-Ies scholarship

2 - The essay must be revised. You are quite fond of using long winded introductions that do not really help...

ScholarshipIykeibe - Sep 11, 2025 / Holt - Sep 14, 2025
Cultural immersion - As a GOI-IES scholar, how will you extend yourself beyond your project/studies

2 - I believe that you should have 2 methods by which you will introduce your own culture and traditions to...

ScholarshipIykeibe - Sep 10, 2025 / Holt - Sep 14, 2025
A finance professional - Government of Ireland International Scholarship

2 - What is this? The reviewer is not familiar with it and he will not take the time to...

ScholarshipIykeibe - Sep 10, 2025 / Holt - Sep 13, 2025
Community-Based Research on Early Childhood Policy - Questbridge Supplemental + Why Duke

2 - I would reverse the presentation a bit. I would start with the fact that your brother is autistic and...

Scholarshiplolgiancarlo - Sep 9, 2025 / Holt - Sep 11, 2025
Creative Director / Graphic Design - Leadership - Chevening Essay

2 - Kindly provide a single paragraph introduction to Studio MU. You immediately dove into your participation and leadership roles in...

Scholarshipu_utmaut - Sep 9, 2025 / Holt - Sep 11, 2025
acrid smell of burnt rubber and gasoline - questbridge bio

2 - I believe that you should clarify your status as a sibling in this instance. Are they your biological or...

Scholarshiplolgiancarlo - Sep 5, 2025 / Holt - Sep 6, 2025
Clean technology and sustainable innovation - Statements for Study loan

2 - You need to be comfortable with fully revealing your family's financial situation to the reviewer. That means, you need...

ScholarshipQaishhh - Aug 18, 2025 / Holt - Aug 21, 2025
Mechanical Engineering - Statement for Study loan

2 - I strongly recommend that you revise the start of this essay. The last thing a reviewer wants to read...

ScholarshipQaishhh - Aug 18, 2025 / Holt - Aug 21, 2025
Research, data exchange, or public health innovation - PERSONAL STATEMENT GKS-U 2026

2 - Who said this? This is a direct quote from whom? Do not use a quotation as a hook...

Scholarshipscholarshiphun - Aug 10, 2025 / Holt - Aug 11, 2025
Finding Purpose - personal statement

2 - Unfortunately, your deeply personal essay does not follow the actual writing prompts for the GKS scholarship. You need to...

Scholarshiptoquillax - Aug 8, 2025 / Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Chevening - Engineer, a draft about Leadership and Influence Essay

3 - Thank you for your feedback. So, a couple of follow-up questions: 1. You mentioned to omit the...

ScholarshipAlphaA101 - Jul 19, 2025 / AlphaA101 - Jul 20, 2025
Divorced parents - Statement of Financial Need - Monash University

3 - @Holt Thanks! I'll look into it...

Scholarshipfierysteam - Jul 19, 2025 / fierysteam - Jul 20, 2025
Aspirations in Business Administration - GKS-U EMBASSY TRACK

2 - Who? The reviewer does not know nor care about this person. You need to provide a short history...

ScholarshipKaelani - Jul 16, 2025 / Holt - Jul 16, 2025
"More than financial support" - DAAD Motivation Letter for upcoming year

2 - I would not open the essay with a reference to the failure of someone else's business. That is because...

ScholarshipDeepaaaa11 - Jul 15, 2025 / Holt - Jul 16, 2025
Personal statement Psychology (university track)

2 - This essay cannot be submitted to the GKS-U screening committee. I understand that you may have come across this...

ScholarshipFaith y - Jul 13, 2025 / Holt - Jul 13, 2025
PERSONAL STATEMENT - GKS-U 2026, University Track (Keimyung University)

2 - This section should be removed since it is better suited to the Goal of Study or future plan...

ScholarshipKaelani - Jul 11, 2025 / Holt - Jul 13, 2025
Personal Statement GKS-U – Sociology Major (Kangwon National University)

3 - @Holt I do think that i have a good performance in university. I was in a leadership position for...

Scholarshipnika000 - Jul 9, 2025 / nika000 - Jul 10, 2025
Goals of plan & study plan (psychology)

2 - This is not an acceptable Goal of Study and Study Plan because it does not provide the required information....

ScholarshipFaith y - Jul 4, 2025 / Holt - Jul 6, 2025
BIO-HEALTH TECHNOLOGY GKS-U PERSONAL STATEMENT

2 - Expand on this aspect talk more about why this award is important. What item was sold? How was...

Scholarshipayaxri - Jul 2, 2025 / Holt - Jul 6, 2025
Psychology and counseling center - Future plan after finishing GKS program

2 - You will be required top spend at least 2 years in South Korea after you graduate from the program....

ScholarshipFaith y - Jun 30, 2025 / Holt - Jul 1, 2025
Monash Asia Equity Scholarship - Computer Science Advanced (Honours)

2 - The essay lacks a direct connection with the programs that Monash university offers under the program you will be...

Scholarshipfierysteam - Jun 30, 2025 / Holt - Jul 1, 2025
"Trying new things" - Language study plan before and after Gks

2 - This is not an effective language study plan. It does not show that you have been making long term...

ScholarshipFaith y - Jun 26, 2025 / Holt - Jun 27, 2025
Healthcare system - Goal of study , study plan for gks during my degree program

2 - Try to develop a more concrete goal of study. Your presentation is too generic. It shows that you do...

ScholarshipMoon_Moon - Jun 21, 2025 / Holt - Jun 21, 2025
Sharing my desire to pursue nursing/personal statement for gks scholarship

2 - It appears that you are applying via embassy track with this application. I would suggest that you apply using...

ScholarshipMoon_Moon - Jun 15, 2025 / Holt - Jun 15, 2025
My language study plan for GKS-U scholarship program (before and after coming to Korea)

2 - Prior to your arrival, the reviewer needs to see evidence that you have done both self study and enrolled...

ScholarshipMoon_Moon - Jun 11, 2025 / Holt - Jun 12, 2025
GKS-U personal statement - major in airline services

2 - This is a very interesting and well developed personal statement. It is a beacon of inspiration and truly introduces...

ScholarshipAdeurani - Jun 5, 2025 / Holt - Jun 5, 2025
Psychology study plan GKS scholarship

2 - One essay at a time please. I can only offer you official advice regarding your language study plan. Everyone...

ScholarshipEcstacy - May 27, 2025 / Holt - May 29, 2025
Biotechnology - MAECI SCHOLARSHIP SIENA AND PAVIA

3 - @Holt Thank you for this advice. that exactly what I am doing, although, I don't have work experience, so...

Scholarshipzob00010 - May 8, 2025 / zob00010 - May 11, 2025
gks sop - majoring in biological science

2 - The essay is extremely difficult to follow. I can sense your excitement in writing the essay, which caused you...

ScholarshipIanKookoo - Apr 30, 2025 / Holt - Apr 30, 2025

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