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IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - WASTE OUTPUT

3 - There are some plural errors in your writing as the phrase "both company" should be changed into "both companies"....

Writing Feedbackvananh1009 - May 28, 2024thaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024
Writing task 1: The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money

3 - there are some errors in your writing such as "an rise" . The overall plays an important part in...

Writing Feedbacklilinhxk - May 27, 2024thaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024
Blood of Hope (Columbia GS Admission Essay)

7 - @marietovlerone This essay is really beautiful, and in my opinion, the drama of the beginning can work in your...

Undergraduatemarietovlerone - May 25, 2024scnwanna - Jun 13, 2024
In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products

2 - There is no need for a measured response in this statement. You are only being asked to agree...

Writing Feedbacknhat1303 - May 24, 2024Holt - May 28, 2024
IELTS Task 2 - technology imporoves communication and transport

3 - Hi, I just a student and i can just give you feedback about ideas development, and kinds of that...

Writing Feedbackits_dylan - May 23, 2024viscaria - May 29, 2024
GKS Essay: A Vision of Educational and Cultural Synergy Major: NURSING

2 - There are several aspects in this essay where you should be discussing more of your experiences. You should add...

Scholarshipomomoh_peace - May 23, 2024Holt - May 28, 2024
Motivation Letter to Apply for Ministry of Foreign Affairs and International Cooperation Grants

3 - The 1st paragraph, you miss a dot (.) here "while pursuing my studies". 2nd paragraph, you listed some...

Letterssholdril - May 23, 2024viscaria - May 29, 2024
Seoul National University Graduate Program - Social Welfare - personal essay

2 - Thanks for letting me know that you were focusing on the "risk" aspect of the suggested writing topics. I...

Graduatemkim10612 - May 22, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
My Study Plan for Masters in China

3 - You have to write details about your academic background; for example, your achivement in competition, extra curriculum,......

Scholarshiprickwayne - May 22, 2024Phuonglynnh - Jun 1, 2024
Success: Hard Work Or Luck

2 - Rather than reviewing this as a task 2 essay, I will review it as an English grammar practice essay...

Writing FeedbackOksipyzh2 - May 21, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Burmese Value and Christian Education

2 - The paragraph is missing vital information that would make it a valid, acceptable, and informative paragraph. You need to...

Writing FeedbackZoro2000 - May 21, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Motivation letter for Masters Program on Applied Computational Mechanics at Skoltech University

2 - Sadly, you wrote an academic biography instead of a motivational statement. So the majority of this essay, except for...

LettersAli Ur Rehman - May 20, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Determination in Sports-Personal Statement

2 - I am not sure about how to review this personal statement. It does not follow the requirements of the...

Undergraduategnooch - May 20, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later

2 - I am not sure what you are trying to say with this point of view. What authenticity? The...

Writing FeedbackNghi Nguyen - May 20, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Some students take a gap year after graduating high school to work and travel. Discuss

3 - The idea and brainstroming very good but i think it too long and not sure you can write this...

Writing Feedbackthuy18181 - May 20, 2024Phuonglynnh - Jun 1, 2024
Rough Draft. Enhancing Critical Thinking online learning environments

2 - You could further develop the content of this paragraph by continuing to explain what activities can be used...

Writing FeedbackVeloz73 - May 19, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
WRITE A PARAGRAPH DESCRIBE DIFFERENT TYPES OF YOUR IDENTITY

2 - There are several problems with your paragraph presentation. The first problem I saw was in the way that you...

Writing Feedbacktiengiang1222 - May 19, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
The proportion of part-time employees in four countries

2 - The summary overview is too short to be an acceptable analytical statement. You need to have at least 3...

Writing Feedbackhuyentrang301 - May 19, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Global warming - an environmental problem or event

2 - You have an acceptable discussion presentation here. The thought process is clear and you show an understanding of the...

Writing Feedbackgoh masit - May 19, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
folic acid addition to flour

2 - Do not use specialized words in the essay. The main point of the test is to prove that...

Writing FeedbackZablok - May 18, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for youth.

2 - You will receive a higher score if you instead frame your writers opinion as follows: I partly agree...

Writing FeedbackPhAhn - May 18, 2024Holt - May 27, 2024
Reading and language skills - WRITING TASK 2 - ACADEMIC

2 - You awre using the incorrect response format. This is not an extent essay so indicating the strength of...

Writing Feedbackqnhu2105 - May 18, 2024Holt - May 23, 2024
University of Toronto Engineering Essay: Extracurricular Activities

2 - The response is too vague. It only skims the top of your experiences. There is no actual involvement narration...

Undergraduateakmaster101 - May 17, 2024Holt - May 21, 2024
Pollution problems cause damage to the environment today. Do you think the problem can be solved?

2 - There are several reasons as to why this essay will be given a failing score by the examiner. The...

Writing FeedbackCothaclac - May 17, 2024Holt - May 21, 2024
Development in urbanization - TASK 2 - ACADEMIC

3 - I will recommend proofreading the response multiple times. For example, change "hazzard circumstances" to hazardous circumstances as it is...

Writing Feedbackryan0807 - May 17, 2024akmaster101 - May 17, 2024
Letter of Recommendation for undergraduate college / commitment and consistency

2 - The problem with this letter is that you are claiming to be the counselor at the school. So the...

Lettershxddsu - May 16, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language

2 - The definition of a paragraph is a block of writing comprised of at least 3 sentences. For an English...

Writing Feedbackhoatrongvuonca - May 16, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
[Writing Task 1] Reasons why people moved to capital city of a particular country

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback!!...

Writing Feedbacknhxinhh - May 16, 2024nhxinhh - May 18, 2024
Students should learn all subjects at school, not the ones they like. Do you agree or disagree?

3 - Like Holt said, you should aim to be as close to 250 words as possible. Additionally, you should separate...

Writing FeedbackThao Bui - May 16, 2024akmaster101 - May 17, 2024
Many people now like living in the countryside because they think there are many good things there.

2 - The essay has too many words in it. You cannot write more than 300 words during the actual test....

Writing FeedbackRosecute2k10 - May 16, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
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