|TOPIC: No matter how few possessions you own or how little money you have, loving wildlife and
4 - I do not know which examination you are preparing yourself for, but 493 words seem to long for an...
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|Vegetarianism is better for everyone's health because there is no meat in such diet
5 - Hi, despite the fact that i am not a contributor, i would say that you might have to consider...
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|Some people consider that several subjects like Maths and Philosophy should be optional for study
2 - This is not a comparative essay. This is a single opinion essay which you failed to respond to in...
Writing Feedbackanh tran - Jun 10, 2020Holt - Jun 11, 2020
|[IELTS] In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people..
Writing Feedbacklana9598 - Jun 10, 2020lana9598 - Jun 11, 2020
|Task1 The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population in urban areas
4 - Hi, I just want to give some more contribution for the overview only, aka. "Overall, all trends of...
Writing FeedbackOsama0435 - Jun 10, 2020TQB - Jun 14, 2020
|See 2 pictures about Colwic Arts Center between 2005 and today
3 - @Minhcho Hello I'm just a learner and I'm preparing my IELTS. I just discovered some mistakes in your...
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|IELTS TASK 1 - The charts below show that what UK graduate and postgraduates students who did not go
Writing FeedbackLdh123456 - Jun 10, 2020Holt - Jun 10, 2020
|Task2: It is argued that because of globalisation we will lose our cultural identity
3 - There are a few mistakes in your essay : - Secondly, globalization not only allows people to immerse ......
Writing FeedbackOsama0435 - Jun 10, 2020VicAl25092020 - Jun 10, 2020
|Masters admission - Letter of motivation - Management
2 - There is no clear motivation in your essay. That is because you aimed to present a personal statement as...
Graduatelclinse - Jun 10, 2020Holt - Jun 10, 2020
|Comparative between house and dormitory.
3 - @Kimdung Hello I'm preparing IELTS and I'm just a lerner. However I just found some mistakes in your...
Writing FeedbackKimdung - Jun 10, 2020Osama0435 - Jun 10, 2020
|Police brutality and the effect of the black community
2 - Let's start with the basics. Your thesis statement is not clear. Your covered topics are too broad and are...
Research Papersravenwa1 - Jun 10, 2020Holt - Jun 10, 2020
|IMAESC- Motivation letter Erasmus Mundos Scholarship - Adult Education for Social Change
2 - Your motivation letter is overly dramatic. It is also way too long. You have to shorten the letter because...
Scholarshipdannccarranzai26 - Jun 9, 2020Holt - Jun 10, 2020
|Population of elderly people - IELTS WRITING TASK 1: LINE GRAPH
5 - The essay will receive a non-passing GRA score. The overall paragraph presentation is composed of run-on sentences which do...
Writing Feedbackmrfox9x - Jun 9, 2020Holt - Jun 10, 2020
|[IELTS]The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by 2050
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for detaled feedback. I believe, it is opinion with word extent, Cant I partially...
Writing Feedbackaline90909 - Jun 9, 2020aline90909 - Jun 9, 2020
|Whether university students should study whatever they like or not
3 - Some grammartical and spelling errors are as follows : - It should be "Whilst being able to choose subjects...
Writing Feedbackonce0831 - Jun 9, 2020VicAl25092020 - Jun 11, 2020
|IELTS 1 - The table compares the data in terms of forested land in different continents of the world
5 - @Holt Thank you Mr. Holt. I really appreciate that you let me understand what is my weakness in...
Writing FeedbackOsama0435 - Jun 9, 2020Osama0435 - Jun 10, 2020
|Masters admission - Letter of motivation - business and entrepreneurship
3 - @Rohi1 Impressive vocabulary. I think little bit of explanation on how you overcome challenges you faced in your business...
GraduateRohi1 - Jun 8, 2020rijumaharjan2052 - Jun 17, 2020
|Tourism: International tourism is now more common than ever before. Is this a positive trend or not?
3 - @Gracie89 Hello Gracie I'm preparing my IELTS too. If you have time, please read some of my threads...
Writing FeedbackGracie89 - Jun 8, 2020Osama0435 - Jun 10, 2020
|Essay: why Design, do you fit for the chosen stream?
3 - Shorter version Technology is getting smaller as every day passes and tactile is near getting obsolete,we are marred...
Graduateralph1494 - Jun 8, 2020ralph1494 - Jun 9, 2020
|Punishment is the only way to help children learn right and wrong. Agree or disagree?
3 - You need to upload the complete discussion prompt next time. I am unclear as to the whole discussion instruction...
Writing Feedbackratecsa - Jun 8, 2020Holt - Jun 9, 2020
|AAS - Practical Examples of using the knowledge, skills and connections you'll gain from scholarship
Scholarshipdandheedge - Jun 8, 2020dandheedge - Jun 9, 2020
|IELTS 1: PIE CHART: THE AMOUNT OF WATER USED IN SAN DIEGO, CALIFORNIA AND THE WORLD.
2 - Your summary overview is almost a direct cut and paste of the original presentation. You did not even try...
Writing Feedbackphuong10d2tb - Jun 8, 2020Holt - Jun 8, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: DIAGRAM: the process of manufacturing bricks for the building industry
2 - Learn to use alternate words to help you highlight your LR abilities. Synonyms for diagram are: blueprint, design, description,...
Writing Feedbackphuong10d2tb - Jun 8, 2020Holt - Jun 8, 2020
|People discharged carbon dioxide - Practising IELTS 11 test 3 writing task 1
3 - You need to mention units as tons and use verb in past tense such as reached and declined instead...
Writing FeedbackCarolinewhite - Jun 8, 2020phuong10d2tb - Jun 8, 2020
|Contribution to Human Resource Development Needs
Scholarshippahlevireza - Jun 8, 2020Holt - Jun 8, 2020
|Australia Awards Essay 1: Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? To fill the gap.
2 - Your essay does not offer a clear reason for choosing the course. Be sure to use one specific masters...
Scholarshipprw - Jun 7, 2020Holt - Jun 8, 2020
|IELTS Writing 1 Hydroelectric power station
3 - Overall, I think you have a good description essay. I can only suggest you to pay more attention...
Writing FeedbackRomanKoch - Jun 7, 2020TQB - Jun 13, 2020
|[IELTS] Essay about language learning topic
2 - The question is not whether you agree or disagree. The question is whether you believe advantages outweigh the disadvantages....
Writing Feedbackyeinbo - Jun 7, 2020Holt - Jun 7, 2020
|Scholarship Essay for Australia Awards - INTRODUCING CITIZEN-CENTERED COURT SERVICES IN MONGOLIA
2 - You have to rewrite the whole essay. You only have 2000 characters to work with in this presentation. You...
ScholarshipKhosoo09 - Jun 7, 2020Holt - Jun 7, 2020
|[IELTS] Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries
Writing Feedbackapetrova - Jun 7, 2020apetrova - Jun 7, 2020