|My desires became my fuel. Common App essay (Any topic)
NEW - the topic of your choice My desires became my fuel. The summer before ninth grade, my parents sold...
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|In this regard, peers have more of an impact than teachers do. To what extent do you agree or not?
2 - The essay has just the right number of words for a very good scoring consideration. The effort to properly...
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|IELTS Task 2 - Agree or Disagree Essay - Railroad vs Roads
3 - Your essay is well put, but I think you should explain more specifically in each paragraph in order to...
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|PROBLEMS AND PRACTICABILITY OF LIVING WHERE PEOPLE SPEAK FOREIGN LANGUAGES
NEW - LANGUAGE BARRIERS ABROAD Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious...
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|STUDYING IN TRADITIONAL CLASSES IS LESS BENEFICIAL THAN LEARNING ONLINE AT HOME
2 - This is a personal reflection of the writer. It is not a correct nor accurate prompt topic replacement....
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|Opinion essay Social networks are damaging our personal relationships.
2 - You cannot partially with an idea, then provide a definite reason with such strong support. The supporting idea...
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|Management and team building - My Chevening Leadership Essay - Leadership and Influencing Skills
3 - @houston17 the linking paragraph and the achievement is so cool. But, I think it is better if you could...
Scholarshiphouston17 - Oct 31, 2021aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
|Investigation and biological science - Letter of Motivation for Erasmus Mundus Scholarship.
2 - Remove these references that maybe considered repeated information in your later Issoup. The motivation should focus on your...
Lettersvanehers - Oct 30, 2021Holt - Oct 31, 2021
|College essay review - learning to love what i hated
NEW - Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself...
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|Selecting a job to meet the living standards
2 - The reasoning discussion of the writer mistakenly uses a comparative format. The examiner does not need to know about...
Writing Feedbackthusun103 - Oct 30, 2021Holt - Nov 4, 2021
|What are the advantages and disadvantages of leading a single life rather than get married ?
2 - You have failed the essay in terms of restatement considerations at this point. The prompt, as you have...
Writing Feedbackltthien - Oct 30, 2021Holt - Oct 31, 2021
|The necessity of schooling children - who should be the most responsible for this task?
3 - @Holt Sorry but the question was "Discuss both views and give your own opinion". Because there is a limit...
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|The time that family members spend gathering to have meals is reducing
2 - There is no need for you to affirm the statement. It is not part of the discussion instruction....
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|The proportion of government's money used for roads and transport in Italy, Portugal, UK and USA
2 - The examiner will be looking for the specific chart name/ identifier that will differentiate it from the other...
Writing Feedbackhonghanh8724 - Oct 30, 2021Holt - Oct 31, 2021
|Peers have more of an impact on students than teachers do?
2 - The essay is only 202 words long. This would normally be an automatic failing score but since the scoring...
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|In the future, the main reason for going to the mall will be for entertainment, not to shop.
2 - This is an automatic task failing scoll. The discussion should focus on only one side. Either agree or...
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|An alarming deficiency of basic life skills among high school students. To what extent do you agree
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|IELTS Task 1: PIE CHART - WATER USE PROPORTIONS
Writing Feedbackelinita123 - Oct 29, 2021rosigenious - Nov 5, 2021
|In some cities, the government try to reduce traffic by imposing congestion tax during rush hours
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|Task 2 ielts: Robots will play an important role in future
NEW - Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might...
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|Petrol and Oil - Writing task 1 : Line Graph.
2 - This is not a proper English word. It does not exist in any English dictionary version. Believe me,...
Writing FeedbackCadeyhere - Oct 29, 2021Holt - Oct 30, 2021
|The proportion of three types of businesses access to social media for commerce benefit
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|IELTS Writing task 2 - Telling children that they can achieve anything if putting their mind to it
NEW - In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. WHAT ARE...
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|The map illustrates the process of producing chocolate (there are ten steps)
2 - This is an incorrect image reference. A map is not used in this presentation. An illustrative diagram...
Writing Feedbackcrownbeea - Oct 29, 2021Holt - Oct 30, 2021
|Essay about sharing information in my sectors
2 - This makes the original topic vague in your restatement. Such a general reference will be marked as an...
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|I want to embrace my potential - my Chevening Essay (Leadership and Influence)
4 - @popochanel By using STARL method, I think you could elaborate more detail here on your achievement : -...
Scholarshippopochanel - Oct 29, 2021aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
|Chevening - Study in the UK - three university choices; LSE, QMUL, and Goldsmiths
4 - @asrykaloko "I discovered knowledge and professional gaps ..." What knowledge gap did you trying to explain? It...
Scholarshipasrykaloko - Oct 29, 2021aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
|The percentages of residents for various ways of drinking coffee and tea in five Australian cities
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|Ielts - The chart gives information about water use by sector in Brazil and Congo
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|I need help for my essay for scholarship in accounting qualification - ACCA FIA (max 400 words)
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