|The chart illustrates the contribution in percentage of two different sectors (Task 1 IELTS)
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|Comparing life with parents to living on campus
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|IELTS Cause/Problem Essay question on children spending less time with their parents
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|The proportion of population who used the Internet in three different countries between 1999 & 2009
2 - A trending statement needs to cover the most common information for the sources provided. You did that properly...
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|GKS-U An only child with 4 siblings aspires to become an IT Engineer
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|Compare pie charts show the proportion of the energy produces from different sources in a country
2 - The summary overview lacks content. Always enumerate the information sources prior to setting up the trending statement. You cannot...
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|The percentage of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living.
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|Why have men's sports been give far more attention by society than women's s? IELTS Writting Task 2
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|Gks Undergraduate Essay; I have been deeply intrigued by the world of business
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|The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. The process is quite lengthy and complicated
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|It starts with a self-awareness - Chevening leadership and influence essay
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|"The challenges I had to go through to finally learn a language" - Common app personal statement
2 - Well, this is certainly a very impressive take on the struggle of a foreign student to learn the English...
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|How MS B analytics program align with your goals and values? How will you contribute towards cohort?
2 - You should be discussing points that would show you are more than qualified for the program. You are not...
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|The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Summarize the information - 7 stages involved
2 - You have summarized the presentation too much. In your desire to present the quickest version of information possible, you...
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|Why I want to become an anesthesiologist assistant
2 - Do you have an underlying condition that requires you to have regular check ups? Is this one of...
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|'How does this affect Lebron's legacy' - National Merit Essay: Influential Person
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|Catalyst of Change: Pursuing AI Dreams from Mexico to Korea (GKS scholarship)
NEW - personal statement Hi guys I will apply for the GKS scholarship, via university what do you think of...
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|Present your ideas about what you should or shouldn't do to live green
2 - This is a well written essay. it shows that the writer has a good grasp of the English language...
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|Commonwealth Development Impact Statement Part 1 - journalism challenges
2 - The impact statement you have chosen to use does not necessarily reflect the sentiments that you have presented as...
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|My academic journey - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay
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|Writing task 1 Ielts: young people's expectations for change in five different areas
2 - Yes, statistics were provided in the image. However, you need to identify the type of image before you...
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|The percentage of time adults spent on different activities in a country in 1958 and 2008
2 - You have misrepresented the number of pie charts in your summary overview. You need to use the plural form...
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|Artist Statement - SAIC (School of the Art Institute of chicago)
2 - Since this is an artist statement, try to develop more insight into how you got your start in photography....
UndergraduateRuan_sds - Oct 3, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
|The charts show the percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia
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|Task 1 writing ielts - carbon dioxide released by four different countries
3 - @laiphuongthao two nations,Italy and Portugal Following up were Sweden... in the given order, respectively/correspondingly. on the other hand, You...
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|The given line graph compares the quantities of three companies' waste output for 15 years
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|Reasons why friendship is gradually dying
2 - You have provided reasons for friendships ending. Those do not necessarily reflect the death of friendships. You are speaking...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Plastic Bottle Production Process
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|Business Administration GKS personal statement undergraduate
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|Leadership and Influence - Chevening Essay - An Ex Employee, Currently Business Owner
NEW - Greetings! Really appreciate your help with this Leaderhip and Influence essay for Chevening application. Any input is welcomed. Thank...
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