Letter about building a factory in my neighborhood-feedback

sniper 1 / 1

Jul 12, 2013 #1

Dear Councillor,

I am writing a retort to the recent announcement about the construction of a factory in my neighborhood.While.majority of the residents argue that building a factory is outweighed by the risks I believe that a factory may have their benefits too.

Firstly,constructing a factory may increase the total income of our population as it can provide dwellers with more employment opportunities.For instance,those who have not enlightened themselves can carry out simple tasks such as relocating.Another point is that,building a factory can improve the living standards of the inhabitants since,constructing the factory will improve the local infrastructure.In addition to this,some facilities such as water and health facilities will be renovated.

Furthermore,there will be a vast enhancement in the public transportation as the workers in the factory has to come to work on a daily basis.As a result of these widespread changes the bread and butter of the residents will improve.

On the whole,as far as I am concerned, building a factory is outweighed by the assets.Moreover,if the factory can be managed successfully the factory and the local residents can have mutual benefits.

Yours Faithfully

rozha 15 / 34

Jul 12, 2013 #2

I think that it will be better if there is an isolated area specialized in developing the industry so that every company can choose their own place to build such kinds of construction, which will not affect the life of other people.

OP sniper 1 / 1

Jul 12, 2013 #3

Okay I will try to change my opinion :)

dumi 1 / 6795

Jul 12, 2013 #4

I am writing a ~~retort~~report to the recent announcement about the construction of a factory in my neighborhood

It's good if you posted the prompt so that we can understand the contents better. I assume that this letter to express your concerns over building a factory in your neighborhood.

I am writing a retort to the recent announcement about the construction of a factory in my neighborhood.

This with reference to the recent announcement made on construction of a factory in our neighborhood, XXXXX (you need to give a name there)

While.majority of the residents argue that building a factory is outweighed by the risks I believe that a factory may have their benefits too.

Although the majority of the residents feel that this would disturb the peace and harmony in our neighborhood, I personally believe that this project will bring great benefits to our community.