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Confidential Report on Applicant for Graduate Study



Daniel_LEE 3 / 5  
Apr 28, 2014   #1
Please help me. I`m applying to graduate program. It`s a Recommendation Letter.

Dear Colleagues,

As a teacher in Department of Art, Ludong University, a leading teacher-training university in China, I am very pleased to take this opportunity to recommend one of my favorite students to your MED program.

As her teacher in specialized courses, actually my first contact with Xin was more
than a decade years ago, when I was invited to accompany for the Chorus, during the days, she presented an intelligent girl.

When her sophomore year of university, despite I was not her teacher at that time, she came to me to ask for learning composition and harmonics. After I refused her one time, she did not give up but requested for an entrance exam to get the chance of being my student. Being a student, she was seriously studying and practicing, in spite of I was well known for rigor. As a matter of fact, I am clearly understand no one could put up with it, except the little girl who was always having classes and practicing alone in my garage where there are some broken bikes and two pianos from 12.00p.m. to 22.00p.m. twice a week. Particularly impressed me is one day it was a heavy snow, she came to have classes lonely, what made me firmly believe that she was a girl who was worth training well.

In the next time, as time permitted, when I went to other places to have academic exchanges, she usually went along with us to work as an assistant. Through her contributions, the promising young girl helped not only herself, but also others around her.

Three years later, although she passed the exam and to be a music teacher, she never give up her initial dream in learning music a nd kept on learning to me. With abandon of knowledge obtained by reading, she could discuss with me about some professional questi ons.

If you have any questions or concerns in regards Xin, please feel free to contact me at .Thank you for your time.

niesaysi 16 / 281  
Apr 29, 2014   #2
As a matter of fact, I am clearly understand that no one could put up with it, except the little girl who was always having classes and practicing alone in my garage where there are some broken bikes and two pianos from 12.00p.m. to 22.00p.m. twice a week.

Particularly what impressed me is whenone day it was a heavy snow, she came to have classes lonely one day in the midst of a heavy snow.It is what made me firmly believe that she was a girl who was worth training well.

Three years later, although she passed the exam and to be a music teacher, she never givegave up her initial dream in learning music a a nd kept on learning to me.

With abandon of knowledge obtained by reading, she could discuss with me about some professional qu esti ons.

The bold part seems confusing. Try to rewrite it more clearer.
OP Daniel_LEE 3 / 5  
Apr 29, 2014   #3
Thank you very much. I should write it carefully.
niesaysi 16 / 281  
Apr 29, 2014   #4
You are very much welcome ^_^

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eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1170  
Apr 29, 2014   #5
also others around her .

she was a girl who was(Omit it, because it shows redundancy) worth training well.

I am clearly understand

I am clearly understand

she never give

She never giveS
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